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maaneet0887
maaneet0887 @maaneet0887 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 12 years ago
Prologue

A Chevrolet car came near the corner of the highway road of Delhi where a hazel eyed girl stood holding a gun.That girl is called as Geet Singh Ahluwalia.She saw the Chevrolet car coming near her & she took the gun from her back & recoiled it & held the gun giving an alarming look.The black car stopped in front of her & the back seat door opened.Geet saw the passengers in the car & was shocked & said,"Arjun..."Arjun smiled at her & said,"Step inside Geet,I'll explain u everything."The other girl who had sat beside Geet smiled at her sweetly & said,"I appreciate ur cautiousness,come inside,my name is Dolly Singh Ahluwalia..."Geet was shocked to hear Ahluwalia surname but she entered the car & closed the door.The car drove to a farm house where Prime Minister Jagmohan Singh had resided.The car entered the farm house which had tight security.Geet,Arjun & Dolly showed their Id card & they gave their gun to the sharp shooters who checked them with metal detector.The sharp shooters took the three to Prime minister & the three saluted him & said one by one...Geet said saluting,"CID Inspector Geet Singh Ahluwalia reporting sir."Arjun said saluting,"Senior CID Inspector Arjun Sharma reporting sir.Dolly said saluting,"Senior CID Inspector Dolly Singh Ahluwalia reporting sir."

Guys this is a new story am trying to frame which had a love story too.It is an army based love story but in this Geet comes to protect Maan when he's in mission in undercover.Pls give me ur suggestion.



INDEX IS IN SECOND PAGE-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2888808?pn=2
 Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago
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Donnaa
Dona @Donnaa IF-Addictz
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Posted: 12 years ago
another story 😊
congrats 4 dis new one👏👏
nice prolouge
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Padfoot_Prongs
Padfoot_Prongs @Padfoot_Prongs IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 12 years ago
one more..
now u have 4 ffs.
awesome.
just update on time...😆
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maaneet0887
maaneet0887 @maaneet0887 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 12 years ago
CHARACTER SKETCH
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GEET SINGH AHLUWALIYA-She's an A class CID officer & she's shunted to the corner from the working of the CID office works & is doing only peon works becoz of her brother's reputation of becoming traitor.She's also a qualified military lawyer but not practised for once also though she's life science graduate.She took the degree in military law to save her brother but didn't practise it becoz of her brother's death.

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BRIJ SINGH AHLUWALIYA-He's an army officer & has captain rank but is called as traitor becoz he can't protect the nuclear triggers & was captured when he was smuggling it outside the academy.He's brother of Geet & he's no more now.


SATHYAM SINGH AHLUWALIYA-He's the father of Geet & Brij.He's retired govt offical.


VEERA SINGH AHLUWALIYA-She's the mother of Brij & Geet & is a house wife.


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CAPTAIN MAAN SINGH KHURANA-He's an army officer & best friend of Brij.Geet's best teacher & mentor & her beloved.He goes with his dictates of his heart.He loves Geet very much & can't see her any trouble.But he not confesses his love to Geet till last becoz of killing her brother Brij.He's expert in strategy & communications.

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ARJUN SHARMA-He's colleague of Geet & thinks her as his younger sister.He's son of reputed politician & his profession also CID officer.Both Geet & Arjun are colleagues & special officers of anti-terrorism cell.His father is now working as minister of home of Delhi & his name is Vishwajit Sharma.In his office everyone fears of him becoz of his father's reputation & Arjun is as protective to Geet as a brother.He's senior to Geet.He loves Geet as his younger sister though they're not blood related.



KANCHENJUNGA MILITARY ACADEMY(KMA)-It is situated in Ambala cant,Punjab & is a reputed institution that has produced courageous soldiers from 14 yrs.Captain Brij Singh Ahluwaliya is the student & best Cadet pass out of this institution.This institution is one of the nuclear launching sites & has the base of nuclear triggers are protected safely & secretly.This academy has motto strength & honour.

BRIGADIER CHANDOK-He's the principal of KMA.He's very strict principal & he's concerned only of discipline.He has the favourite student & he was Brij Singh Ahluwaliya & he's so angry becoz of Brij the military board has come to conclusion to close the KMA.


JAGMAOHAN SINGH-He's the current prime minister of India.

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DOLLY JUNEJA OR DOLLY SINGH AHLUWALIYA-She's sister-in-law of Geet & wife of Brij.She's also CID officer & is an encounter specialist & is also the special officer of anti-terrorism cell.She's a row with her dad & came outside the home & stood on her feet by joining CID officer training & is now she's a CID officer.


ACP PRUTHVIRAJ CHAUHAN-He's the new boss of the mission in which Geet,Arjun & Dolly are present.Other officers are Muskaan Mallya,Abhijeet Adhikari,Daya Nayak,Vivek Mehra,John d'souza,Sasha Sehgal.


M.G.JUNEJA- Defence minster of India & is highly corrupted minister & is mainly involved in nuclear triggers theft & in making Brij traitor.He's the godfather of Captain Maan Singh Khurana.He has two daughters Dolly,Daljeet.First one is Dolly but he knows noting abt her whereabouts & he even not knows that she's the wife of brij Singh Ahluwaliya who he made the traitor.Second one is Daljit who has no concern abt her life or her father's reputation & is a law-breaking,rude & is concern abt the next release of album black-eyed beast.

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Dr.SAMEERA SEN-She's a psychiartist but undercover foreign spy,who has come to theft the reamining nuclear trigger from KMA.She's involved in the conspiracy of making Brij as a traitor.She's highly trained foreign spy.She has come here to theft nuclear trigger.

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MAJOR BHARGHAV-He's an army officer who says lots of life but not in front of Geet becoz she knows his background becoz he had dishounoured her best friend & made her defamed in front of society & her family.He hates Geet becoz she made him dishounour in front of his family.His policy is divide & control,but not in front of Geet.He was investigation officer during Brij's court martial case.He knows noting abt Geet that she's an CID officer.He's such an oppurtunist.


other character will come afterwards & I'll introduce it with a brief abt a character.I hope u liked the character sketch guys,don't forget to leave ur comments.
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maangeet_rocks
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great concept...
Please do continue...
Really eager to read more... 😃
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maaneet0887
maaneet0887 @maaneet0887 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 12 years ago
PROLOGUE-https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2888808&PID=55945048%EF%BF%BD

CHARACTER SKETCH-https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2888808&PID=55237520%EF%BF%BD

PART 1-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2888808?pn=2#

PART 2-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2888808?pn=3

PART 3-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2888808?pn=4

PART 4-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2888808?pn=5

PART 5-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2888808?pn=5

PART 6-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2888808?pn=6

PART 7-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2888808?pn=7

PART 8-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2888808?pn=8

PART 9-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2888808?pn=9

PART 10-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2888808?pn=10

PART 11-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2888808?pn=11

PART 12-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2888808?pn=12

PART 13-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2888808?pn=14

PART 14-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2888808?pn=15

PART 15-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2888808?pn=17

PART 16-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2888808?pn=19

PART 17-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2888808?pn=20

PART 18-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2888808?pn=23

PART 19-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2888808?pn=26

PART 20-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2888808?pn=28

PART 21-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2888808?pn=30

THREAD 2-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/56856396
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Beena_g
Beena_g @Beena_g Goldie
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow,,u r rocking yaar..with another FF. ..too gud..This concept also i loved.Yeah it s bit same as the serial LRL..loved that serial too,am sure will love this FF too.Pls continue
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spvd
Deepa @spvd IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 12 years ago
congrats...

prologue and CS
OMG u are doing LRL here?
my jaanu's show...
so my jaanu's character Maan is gonna portray...
cont soon...
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