Hi I am trisha.I am 13 years old.And this my 1st ff.And the most important thing please comment on my work whether it is good or bad.It encourges me if i get good comments and i will come to know my mistakes
KYA YE SIRF DOSTI HAI??
Anjali,Muskaan&Riddhima are sisters and are daughters of Dr Shashank and Dr Padma
Atul,Rahul&Armaan are brothers and are the sons of Dr Rohit and Dr Juhi Rahul,Atul&Armaan know Anjali,Muskaan&Riddhima from childhood as their parents are good friends
GUPTA GIRLS
Anjali Gupta:She is an intern in SANJEEVANI.She is the eldest daughter of Shashank and Padma.She loves both her sisters.She has a soft corner for Atul.She is 23
Muskaan Gupta:She is doing her 3rd year of medicine.She is bubbly,smart,bindaas.She loves riddhima and anjali.And shares all her secrets with them.She likes Rahul alot.She goes ga ga over him.
Riddima Gupta:She is the youngest daughter of Shashank and Padma.She is most pampered of all still she is not a spoilt brat.She is smart,talented,stylish and caring.Her bestest friend is Armaan she shares all her secrets with Armaan which hasn't even shared with her sisters.She is in the 12th standard
'MALLIK BOYS
Atul Mallik:He is innocent,cute,handsome and the best bro Rahul and Armaan can have.He is also an intern in SANJEEVANI.He likes Anjali
Rahul Mallik :He is a cool dude but when he is his family or the gupta's he is a complete gentlemen.He loves muskaan but he doesn't know whether it is love or not.He is in the 3rd year of medicine
Armaan Mallik:The heart-throbe of his college.He is in the 12th standard.When he is studying he is a total padaku.24*7 he is with riddhima and likes her alot.He can imagine life without his brothers but not without riddhima
PART 1
Gupta Mansion
Anjali:Muskaan jaldi uth.Tuje der ho jayegi
Muskaan:(in her sleep)Kya hai Anji di??Sone do na
Anjali:Muskaan tuje university jana hai.
Muskaan:Arey sone de na.Aj muje acche sapne a rahe hai
Anjali gets an idea
Anjali:Dekh Rahul tera neeche wait kar raha hai(giggling)
Muskaan gets up hearing the word 'RAHUL'
She gets up instantly
Muskaan:Kya?Rahul kaha hai
Anjali was laughing
Muskaan:(gets angry)Tuje toh mai baad mai dekh lungi.(goes to the bathroom)
Meanwhile Riddhima gets up
Riddhima:Good Morning Di
Anjali:Good Morning Ridz (Riddhima has changed her clothes and wore a jogging suit)
Riddhima:Di mai jogging ke liye ja rahi hu.
Anjali:Ridz tuje college nahi jana.
Riddhima:Jana hai 10 baje.Abhi 8 baje hai
Anjali:Lucky you
Riddhima goes for jogging.She reaches the basket ball court and see's no one is there
Riddhima:Arey abhi tak nahi aya.Oh God armaan kaha ho tum??
Armaan:Mai yaha hu
Riddhima:Like always mai phele pohchi(reach)
Armaan:Mai kya karu?Muje bathroom use karna tha.Rahul aur Atul bro ne kaha ki tum sabse chote ho toh last jana.
Riddhima:Tum naha ke aye ho??
Armaan:Na.Muje bathroom jana tha
Both laugh.They play basketball
Riddhima:Muje jana hai.9 baj gaye
Armaan:Toh!
Riddhima:College
Armaan:Ya Ya College
Riddhima:So bye
Armaan:Bye Riddhima was about to leave when armaan said
Armaan:Riddhima mai tumhe pick up karne aoga(will come)
not bad!!! First ff and it's really very sweet!!! Can't wait to see what you have in store for my R-M and A-A!!! Continue Soon!!! Wow! You're only 13? I'm 18. Not bad for a first timer!
intro is too gudππ πso sweet yaar please continue it soon
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