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The Unknown Desire part 39 updated pg. 149

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi Friends,

Aap sab k opinion maine padhe hain aur abh mai jaa rahi hoon fic start karne so:-

Mugdha Mehra and Kajal Aggarwal:- Priyanka Bassi/Neha Bamb/Gauri Tejwani/Prachi Desai/Sanjeeda Sheikh/Shweta Tiwari

 

Vardaan Arora/Shalabh Malhotra

 

Well friends my choices for the role of

 

Vardaan Arora:- Rajeev Khandelwal

Kajal Aggarwal:- Priyanka Bassi

Shalabh Malhotra:- Naman

Mugdha Mehra:- Kritika

 

Aap sab ki choice me thoda sa ferbadal kiya hai bus.

 

Here the first part of my story goes.

 

In New Delhi:-

 

At 8'o clock in morning:-

 

"Uth jaa beta aath baj gaye hain.Kab tak sota rahega?"

 

"Bus mom half n hour aur." He said.

 

"Beta tu pichle ek ghante se yahi keh raha hai.Ab uth jaa mere pyaare se, chote se , gullu se bete."

 

"Mom kitni baar kaha hai ki abhi mai aap ka utna chota se beta nahi hoon jitna aap mujhe samajhti hain now I am a big boy." Ye keh kar vo uth gaya.

 

"Chal isi bahane tu utha to." His mom said n smiled.

 

"Oh to mom ye sab aapne isliye kiya." He tried to show his mom fake anger.

 

"Agar tu wapas sona chahta hai to so jaa vaise bhi abhi to sirf aath hi baje hain." His mom said while going out of room.

 

"What??????..OMG ab kya hoga class start hone me to bus aadhe ghante baje hain ab kya karoo.Mai daur k bhi jaao to bhi nahi pahuch paaonga time se." He said with panicked voice.

 

 

Suddenly us ki najar us k phone par padti hai jis par already 11 missed calls hain.Us ko yaad aata hai ki raat me us ne apne fone ko silent par kar diya tha isiliye us ko pata nahi chala ki call aa rahi hai.

 

He rushed towards wash room n made him self ready as fast as he could.He came down. He made himself  towards doorway.

 

"Ruk beta aaj tere college k new year ka first day hai kuch kha k to jaa na." His mother said.

 

"No mom already bahut der ho chuke hai Sunny meri kya halat karega pata nahi?" He replied.

 

"Accha kuch nahi to kam se kam Prasad to le kar jaa na beta." He said.

 

"Ok mom do fast ."He bent n touched his mom's feet n took Prasad from her.

 

"Mom mai jaa raha hoon.Ok bye." He said.

 

"Come soon son." She replied.

 

Father of the boy came there n asked "Chale gaye Sahabjade kya?"

 

"Haan gaya ", she replied.

 

"Aur hamesha ki tarah breakfast nahi kar k gaye honge." He said again.

 

"Hmmm" She  nodded.

 

"Tum jaanti ho,tumhara ye chehra bata deta hai ye sab aur mujhe kuch poochne ki zaroorat hi nahi padti hai. Aur tum ye bhi jaanti ho ki mai tum ko is tarah nahi dekh sakta." He said grinning.

 

She puzzled for a moment n saw her husband with teary eyes.

 

"Common darling,aaj k din bhi." He said.

 

She smiled for a moment n said "aap ko yaad hai."

 

"Ofcousre apni zindagi ka itna khaas pal mai kaise bhool sakta hoon.Par shayad tumhare ladle bete ko nahi yaad hai." He teased her.

 

"Ho sakta hai,ya nahi bhi ".she said.

 

"Happy anniversary Mrs.  Sheela Malhotra" , he said n hugged her.

 

"Aap ko bhi mubarak ho."She wished him too n bent to touch his feet.

 

"Are ye kya?Tumhari jagah yahan nahi mere dil me hai." He said.

 

"Mai aap ka aabhar kaise vyakt karoo ki aapne shaadi k in 25 saalon me mujhe koi kami nahi hone di.Mujhe vo saari khusiyan di jo ek pati apni patni ko deta hai us se bhi jyaada di hain.Aap ne meri zindagi ko poora kar diya." Her eyes were wet completely.

 

"Aur tumne kya kam diya hai,mere ghar ko swarg bana diya hai,mere zindagi ko khoobsurat bana fiya hai aur to aur pyaare se do bacche jinhone meri zindagi ko khushiyon se bhar diya. Ab to mai tumhare bina jeene ki kamna hi nahi kar sakta." Mr. Malhotra said hugging her tighjtly .

 

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So friends kaisa laga meri is story ka ye first ud. Aage ka ud aap sab k response par depend karta hai.

 

Ye tha Shalabh son of Mr. n Mrs.  Anupam Malhotra. Padhaii likhai ka kuch pata nahi passion hai bus sports n he is  a big flirt too.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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rituka7 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
too good update long asap
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Posted: 15 years ago
Too good!!!

Yeh Shalabh bhi naa!!! ๐Ÿ˜› Apni mom dad ki anniversary bhul gaya!!! ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก

Sheela aur Anupam were very sweet!!! ๐Ÿ˜Š

Waise I think Shilpa Saklani will be good as Sheela and Sandeep Baswana or Amit Sareen as Anupam!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi!Mahak๐Ÿ˜Š
the update was fantastic๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Waiting for more๐Ÿ˜‰
update soon๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 15 years ago
it was fantastic ud
amazing plzz ud soon
waiting for d ud.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!

Yeh Shalabh bhi naa!!! ๐Ÿ˜› Apni mom dad ki anniversary bhul gaya!!! ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก

Sheela aur Anupam were very sweet!!! ๐Ÿ˜Š

Waise I think Shilpa Saklani will be good as Sheela and Sandeep Baswana or Amit Sareen as Anupam!!!

Thnaks Shai for liking it.

I too think n next time i will shurely consider it.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: KRIZZY

it was fantastic ud
amazing plzz ud soon
waiting for d ud.

Thanks

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985

Hi!Mahak๐Ÿ˜Š
the update was fantastic๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Waiting for more๐Ÿ˜‰
update soon๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Thanks for replying.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

awesome start......... ๐Ÿ‘

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Originally posted by: rituka7

too good update long asap

Thanks for sweet reply.