ff~Timeless Passion 11/19p38 The Story ha - Page 5

Noooo! You have to put it up!! It was getting good aswell! Come on people comment!
👏 Great Storyline 👏

The update was MINDBLOWING 👏
I love the characters- the guyz especially 😉
Ure concept is unique and is awesome
Whats Kanya story?
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soooooooooooooooon

Wow awsome that was reli good and the vm was fantastic btw my name ryhems Tamara cuz my names samara so if u just switch t with s then it woul become my name 😆 PLZ plz plz plz plz continue !!!!!!! 😊 Edited by candy princess - 15 years ago

😭
Edited by KC294 - 14 years ago

Don't have words... to express....

Loved it....  Loved It!!

My Xiah is sooo cute! *** & love the whole Roshni & Hero element!

Sara's character is soo kick-butt-attitude 😆........  LOVED IT!!👏

Fatemah baji... wondering the relationship between U & Family?

Tamara & Max.. mystery? 

Continue Soon!
Edited by suganain - 15 years ago

me next...loll i've read this over 50 times by now.. while writing.. it was fun and a bit saddening to write especially the last part.. srry if this sounds a bit selfish but i think me and baji did an excellent job =] i would like atleast 20 comments before the next part goes up.. so please please comment everyone...
Thank you
Edited by dilkeroshni - 15 years ago

when is the next part coming. I have been waiting since last night! And I came like 5 times to check for update and still there is none!! 😭

Originally posted by: Perfangel5655

when is the next part coming. I have been waiting since last night! And I came like 5 times to check for update and still there is none!! 😭

updated... go read...

Don't 😭
The update is brilliant
Hero is a pretty interestin charachter. Seems like hes the puppet master and the others are puppets like when KC was crying and he sends roshni to get Uknow and to punch Uknow as well(loved that part it was 😆 😆 😆 )
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soooooooooooooon

wow!
i luv this ff cuz of the long updates
gr8 job yaar
mind blowin!
waiting for the next update!!
cont soon!