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Garv, Kali And Kumud Fan-Fic

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Posted: 20 September 2005 at 7:02pm | IP Logged

Kali is talking to herself in the room after an argument with Kumud

 

K1: Kumud kabh samaj payegi. Mein yeh sabh kar ke khush to nahi hoon. Meine uska bassa-bassaya ghar ujaad diya, aur uski hi maa ko use door karne pe tuli huwi hoon. Kumud yeh kyoun nahi samajthi ki mera is bartaw ke peeche koii na koi wajah to hogi. Mein abh Kumud ko kaise samjhao ki mein usse itne boori tarah se pesh kyoun aa rahi hoon. Mere paas iske kai wajah hai

 

1.     Kkusum kumud ki maa hai aur papa ki pehli biwi

2.     Kumud ke paas uski maa hai

3.     Kumud ki wajah se Nakul mujhse door chala gaya

4.     Sabh pariwaar Kumud ke saath badi laadh pyaar se pesh aate hai

5.     Meri parwa koi nahi karta, jab ki mein is ghar mein pehle se rahi hoon

(She starts to cry)

(Kumud is listening to all this)

K2: Kali, kya yahi wajah hai ki tum mujhse nafrat karti ho. Kabhie mujhe bhi laga tha ki meri pass ek badi bahen hai par wo bahen aaj mere baare mein sirf khamiya hi dekhti hai. Tumne jo saari wajah mujhe diye wo sabh jayaz hai. Aur abh tum suno. Meri pass bhi kai wajah hai

 

  1. Meri maa ki jagah par tumhare maa baith gaye
  2. Garv ko meine sache dil se, apne jaan se bhi pyaara samjha aur tumne use mujhse door kar diya.
  3. Tumne athara saal shaan shokat ke saath zindagi guzare aur meine pal pal halaat ke saath samjhota kiya.
  4. Mera naam ke peeche meri maa ke naam aur tumhare naam ke peeche tumhare baap ka naam.
  5. Meine apne zindagi baap bina guzara aur tumne maa aur baap dono ke saath.

 

K1: Kya tum mujh se jalti ho.

K2: Aur tum

K1: Haa, tumhare pass wo sabh kuch hai jo mere pass nahi, tumhare pass apne izzat, vishwaaas, aur tumhare maa sabh saath mein hai aur mere pass nahi izzat, na vishwaas aur nahi maa. (Crying)

 

(Kumud starts to go near her and console her)

K2: Kali aise nahi sochte, dekho agar hum ache tarah se pesh aaye to…

K1: Mat samjhao mujhe, (she pushes Kumud) Mujhe kisi ki hamdarzi nahi chahiye

(Kali is stepping forward towards Kumud and is still crying)

(Kumud is crying also)

K2: Par tumhe meri zaroorat hai

K1:  Kisi ki zaroorat nahi hai mujhe

(She's still coming closer to K2)

(By now Kali has reached Kumud and then slaps Kumud three times

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Posted: 20 September 2005 at 7:20pm | IP Logged
post ur comments if its not good den I will not continue.. let me know..thanx..n sry agin if its not good
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Posted: 20 September 2005 at 8:54pm | IP Logged
WOW..awesome...I m no garv n kumud fan but dis is GREAT
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Posted: 20 September 2005 at 9:08pm | IP Logged
lolz....itz kool....keep it up....Big smile
luv,
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plz cont im a gr8 fan of garv n kumud its awesome
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Posted: 25 September 2005 at 12:39am | IP Logged
then hugs her)
K2: Maat ro kali, tum rote wakt bilkul ache nahi lagte
K1: Mujhe maaf kar do didi meine tumhare saath acha nahi kiya
K2: Kali guzre howe kal ko bhool jao. Abh hum nayi zindagi shoru karenge, bahen bankar
K1: (She stops hugging Kumud) Sach mein, to phir mere saath chalo
K2: Kaha chalu mein tumhare saath
K1: (she holds Kumud's hand and kind of drags her)
(They reach Garv's house)
K2: Kali tum mujhe yaha kyun laye ho
(Servant opens the door and they go inside)
K1: Yeh sabh mujhe pehle hi kardena chahiye tha
K2: Kya pehle kar dena chahiye tha, Kali mujhe batao
(Garv comes out and is surprised to see Kali holding Kumud's hand)
K1: (With hands folded) Garv mujhe maaf kardo, jab se tumhare aur Kumud ka shaadi huwa tha, tabh mujhe bilkul nahi acha laga. Meine tumhare aur Kumud ke beech mein daraar paida karne ka waada apne aap se kiya kyoun ki Kumud mujhe dukh dene ke baad mein tumhare saath khushi se rahe rahi thi. Us raat jab party thi mein tumhare kamre me aaye aur phir meine tumhe Kumud aur Kshitij ka rishta mein bada chada kar batayi. Tum mere baat ko sach maan kar mujhe gale se laga li. Us raat hum dono ke beech mein aisa kuch nahi huwa jaisa ki tum soch rahe ho. Jab tum jaag gaye to tumne dekha ki mein neend mein soi (sleep) huwi thi par mein jagi thi. Kumud humare beech mein aisa kuch nahi huwa. Mujhe maaf kar do. Mein aaj apne hi nazro mein gir gaye hoon.
K2: Tumne aisa kyoun kiya Kali. Mein tum par kaise yakeen karo ki tum sach bol rahi ho. Iske liye tumhe yeh sabh kuch chobis (24) ghanta mein sabit karna padega ki tum sach bol rahi ho.
K1: Tikh hai didi agar mein sabit kar doon to tumhe mujh se ek waada karna padega.
K2: Mein waada karti hoon ki tum jo kuch bhi kaho gi mein karoongi
Garv: Kumud tum iski baatein mein kaise aagaye tum to janti ho ki Kali hamesha se hi jhooth bol rahi hai.
K2: Meine jo kuch bhi kaha hai uske tum gawahi (witness) ho Garv. Mujhe kal subah ki besabri se intezaar hai.
(Kali leaves with Kumud)
(Kali drops Kumud to the hostel)

Kali goes to the hotel where they had the party. There she asks for the hotel manager. The manager comes and Kali asks him for this guy named Bunty. When Bunty comes Kali asks him if he can come and give a testimony about the night of August 11. Bunty says yes I was the waiter then. Bunty says that Kali left the room and then came back later. Kali again asks him if he is willing to give testimony. Bunty says that he doesn't want to get in the mess. Kali tries to pacify him but he doesn't agree. Then Kali bribes him to testify and he still doesn't agree. Kali then goes to the manager again and asks him if they could talk in privacy. He takes her to his office and then she asks him if they have cameras on their hotel halls. The manager says yes of course, it's a requirement. Kali asks him if she can see the video of August 11. The manager says she could but she needs to pay him because it's not under their policy. Kali says okay 25,000 rupees and he agrees. He brings it out and then Kali pays him and leaves. She gets a room and then plays it. The video shows the time and date. Kali sees herself get out of the room and then come back a few hours later. She is very happy as she will prove herself. The next morning…

(Kumud is already at Garv's house and he is also waiting impatiently)
Kali comes…

K2: Kali mujhe pata hai ki tum mujhe niraaash nahi karogi
K1: Didi aap ko apne waada pura karna hoga
K2: Mein apne waade ki pakki hoon abh tum apna saboot dikhao
Garv: Kya tumne apna saboot laya hai
K1: Agar mein laati hi nahi to mein yaha kyoun aati
K2: Tikh hai mein bhi betaab hoon
K1: Saari sachai is tape mein hai,
(They put it inside)
K2: Dekhte hai
The tape shows everything Kali leaving… and then coming etc
K1: Abh to tum dono ko mujh par yakeen ho gaya hai na. Aur agar abh bhi nahi hai to is tape par date dekh lo
K2: Aaj mujhe lag raha hai ki mere pass ek badi bahen hai ( They hug each other)
K1: Abhi baat khatm nahi huwa (Garv and Kumud are shocked) Didi aapko apna vaada poora karna hoga.
K2: Kaho, kya karna hai mujhe
K1: Didi meine hamesha tumse tumhare saari khushi cheene hai, abh mein chahti hoon ki mein tumhare khushi tumhe waapas loataon
K2: Tum kehna kya chahti ho
K1: Yahi ki mein janti ho ki tum Garv se pyaar…(Kumud cuts her off)
K2: Kali yeh mera apas ke mamla hai
K1: Didi tum jitna hi inkaar kar lo , mein yeh janti hoo ki tum Garv ko apne jaan se zaada pyaar karti ho. Tumhi ne mujh se kaha tha "Garv ko meine sache dil se, apne jaan se bhi pyaara samjha aur tumne use mujhse door kar diya"
Garv is totally shocked.
Garv: Kumud Kali yeh kya kahe rahi hai.
K2: (crying) Garv yeh sach hai, mein tumse pyaar karti hoon. Meine yeh baat sabh se inkaar kar diya aur ghoot ghoot kar marti rahi hoon. Abh mere dil se ek bahut bada bhog nikal gaya. Meine tumhe yeh (Garv stops her and turns around and hugs her)
Kumud is crying and Garv consoles her. When she looks up she sees that Kali is not there. She runs outside but just then Kali drives and leaves.

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that was great...plz continue soon
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