RN(FANFICTION)

GUYS THIS IS MY 2nd ff on rn.




ok here



charecters:
1: rajveer singh shekhawat - a famous industrilst who never cares of any1 feelng.he is 38 years old still unmarried.




2:mr nischay singh alluwalia: works in a bank .loves his family very much.have 2 daughters .




3:mrs alluwalia: a housewife


4:naina singh alluwalia:a college girl .loves her family



5:dolly singh alluwalia: yougher   sister of naina.



now the story



mrs alluwalia- naina beta ab uth jayo 7 baj gaye hai



n- oh mama bas 5 min more


mrs alluwalia(mom)- nahin beta



n- off mama



mom-beta tuhare papa tum dono ka itezar kar rahe hai




n- ok mama aap jayo main dolly ko leke aati hu



mom- thik hai beta



n's mom goes



n-uth jaa dolly


dolly- bas 5 min more di


n- nahin dolly tere school hai na


d- off di


n- chal tu uth ja main washroom hoke aati hu


d- ok di


n goes to the washroom



after sometime n comes from the washroom


n- dolly ja fresh ho ja



d- ok d


n- goes to have her breakfast



in the dinning table


n- good morning papa



papa- good morning beta




n-mama jaldi do



mom- ha lo
sreve the food



n-papa aaj mere tution fees dene hai




papa- ha bol fees kitna hai


n- RS 500



PAPA- lo



dolly-papa




papa- oh beta



d- papa aaj mere fees dene hai



papa -bolo kitna



d- RS 600



PAPA- LO



N - chal dooly


d- hmm



n- mama/papa bye



mama- bye beta



n/d goes for there college/school




college



h-hey phoolan



n- are h tu


h- phoolan mujh tere notes chaheye


n- thik hai



n /h enter the class room



pooja-dekho aa gaye dono



h- he ali



ali- huda bhai baitheye



p- tere pass nahin naina ke pass



n- chup kar pooja



p- aacha thik hai


n sts beside h


p- ooooooooooooooooooo




good mornng class




every1 gets attention



p- good morning mam



mam- aaj tumhe ek surprse test dene hoge



alekh- yeh shalny mam ka har roz test


shaliny- what alekh


alekh- nothng mam


after the college


h- chalna phoolan film dekh ke aate hai



n- aaj nahin



h- thik hai




n goes to her house



n- mama




mama- n tu aa gaye



n- hmm




the door bell rings




n goes to open the door



n- papa


mama- aap aa gaye dolly jaa freash hoo jaa


d- hmm



n - goes wth d



mrs a-kya baat hai aaj aap itna chup hai




mr a- nahin toh




next day


in the dinning table




n- papa bye mujhe aaj jaldi jaana hai



papa - ok beta



n goes to her college


d- mama main bhi chalte hu


mama- ok beta


mrs a- aap ki aaj chuti hai


mr a- hmm



like ths there life was going


after few days



mrs a- aap se ek baat pucchu


mr a- ha bolo


mrs a- aap 7 din se office nahin gaye kya baat ha


mr a- woh main


mrs a- ya boleye- mere nokri chale gaye


mrs a- kyaaaaaaaaaaa



mrws a burst into tears


n- kya huya mama



mama- n n


n- ya mama


mama- tere papa ki nokri chale gaye



n- kya aap fikar mat karo ma



next day



n- ( n was searching about jobs n the news paper)



n- mama man chalte hu



mama- thk ha


n goes to shekhawat industry



receptionist:yes



n- job interview ke leye aa e hu



r- par interview toh khatttam ho gaye


n- par


r- i dont know that




n- what i wan to meet ur sir



r- u cant meet him



n goes to meet the boss


r- mam plz mam


n opens the door



now we see a handsome youngh man who is talkng with his clients he is rajveer singh shekhawat


r- yes



n- mujhe aap se baat karne hai




r- par mjhe kuch nahin sunna hai



n- aap ko sunna hoga



r- hmm



n- sir mujhe is job ke bohot zarurat hai plz sir



r- par interview ka time khatam ho gaya hai


n- plz sir



ok i up ff plz comments .

hey please continue dear.concept is beautiful 👏 .update was too good.thanks for this new ff.

awesome start...............sounds interesting....updt soon

conceptz soundz gud n intrestn n plz continue wit it sweety,



Aarthi

He is 38...isn't that too old.Have you gotten inspired on this from Ranbir Nanda of Kucch Ish Tarah.

And Naina must be 22 or 23.

That is a lot of difference...any other time I would have said Bajaj and Prerna but now this is reminding me of Ranbir-Kanya.

Waise it was nice!!!!

guys here




r- u can leave



n goes from there



after sometime she reach her house



ma- beta tujhe job mile


n- nahin mama


ma- thik ha



in the evening



n is preparing for test when the door rings



n- are d tu aa gaye



d- hmm


n- tu muh haath dho le main khana lagate hu



d- hmm




after sometime mrs/mr a comes from bima masi



ma- beta tumne khana khaya



n- jee ma


ma- thik hai so jayo



next day


morning



n-mama main chalte hu



ma- hmm



n goes to the sha industry for a job


n- sir may i come in



mr sha- yes



n- sir i am naina singh alluwalia. i came here for interview



mr sha- ok but there is no vacancy




n-ok sir



n goes out from the office
n -pata nahin kya hoga



suddenly n collieds with some1
n- sorry

the man turns- its ok(ie r)


n goes


r - main toh is larki ko jaante hu .ha yeh wohi larki hai jo kal mere office main interview ke leye aa thi .par yeh kya kar rahe thi is office main lagta hai interview ke leye aa thi .


d- sir car aa gaye



r- hmm




r sits in the car



after sometime he reach his office


rosa- good morning sir



r- hmm


r goes to his cabin .


r- rosa mere cabin main aao


rosa- yes sir

rosa comes to r's cabin


rosa- yes sr


r- kal jo larki aaye thi uske ghar man phone karke mujhse milne bulao


rosa- ok sir


rosa calls at alluwalia house


rosa- hello kya main naina singh alluwalia se baat kar sakte hu



mrs a- aap kyun hai



rosa- main shekhawat industry se bol rahe hu


mrs a-woh ghar main nahin hai



rosa- ok toh aap unse kahena ki humare sir milna chahate ha


mrs a- ok




in the evenng n comes



ma- beta tere leye aaj shekhawat industry se phone aaya tha



n- kya



ma- tujhe milne bulaya hai



n- thik hai mama



next day



n- ma main chalte hu


ma- thik hai



n goes to shekhawat industry



knocks at the door


n- may i come in sir


r- yes



r - plz sit down


n- sits on the chair


r-naina


n- jee sir



r- show me ur certificates



n shows her certificates



r- toh aap ne graduation complete nahin ke


n- nahin i am still in college


r- toh aap job kaise kar payege




n- sir i have morning college mujhe koi problem nahin hoge




r- ok then u can join from tomorrow



n - thanks sir



r- ok


n goes to her house today she is very happy .




n-mama




ma- kya baat hai beta



n- mujhe job mil gaye



ma- kya (hugs n)



n- kal se mujhe join karna hoga



next day
n goes to her college



n- alekh




alekh- kya huya



n- mujh job mil gaye




p- party kab de rahe hai


n- abhi nahin



ali- thik hai




after college n goes for her job



in the offce




n-sir may i come in




r- yes n


n- sir


r -rosa plz come in



rosa- yes sir


r-n ko meheta group ke file de do



rosa- ok



rosa - n come with me


n goes with rosa



rosa - this ur file


n- thanks



n starts working .




after few days


in the office

n is working m the computer



r- n time kya huya hai



n- jee

n looks at her watch


n- oh god its 9 pm



r- aap ko ghar nahin jana hai



n- woh sr yeh file complete karne thi



r- kal kar lena



n- ok sir



n packs her bag




r-n- ok sir bye




r man aap ko ghar chor do


n- ok sir


n sts in r's car



ok guys i up ff plz comments.

super continue it sweety,



Aarthi

faaaaaaaaaaabulous.update was too good.thanks dear for this interesting

Great!!!Too good!!!

But no replies to my previous comment???

And learn to write more in detail!!!

guys here



in the car




n-(in her mind) sir kitna boring hai na baat bhi nahin karte




r- kuch kaha aapne




n- mainne nahin toh



r- oh aaccha



n-off



r- n aap ke ghar kaha hai



n- sir right



r- kya



n- mera ghar



r- oh




n- bas sir rok dijiye




r stops the car



n- thank u sir



r smiles




next day




morning




n- mama main jaa rahe hu



ma- thik hai



n goes to the office




rosa- good morning n




n- good morning rosa .sir hai


rosa- ya


n - may i come in sr


r- yes


n- sir aap ke fle




r- kon se




n- meheta group ki




n gives the file




r- thanks


n- ok sir


n goes to her desk




in the evening




n-bye sir



r- bye n




n goes to her house where as r goes to the bar


naveen- are raj




r-kaisa hai tu



na- man toh thik hu



r -waiter two wishkey




waiter serves the drnk



r- thanks



na- tujhe meheta group ka contract mila




r- ha
aur is bar sab kuch huya n ki baje se




na- wah tere muh se kise ki tareef
oh god help me




r- stup up na
n bohot aacche larki hai




na- hmm



r continues to speak on n




na- mujhe lagta hai tujhe us n se pyaar toh nahin ho gaya


r- kya (drink spits out from r's mouth)

tu pagal ho gaya kya

woh srf 18 saal ki hai aur main 38 saal ka


na- thik ab chal


r- ok bye na




after sometme r goes to his house




ramukaka opens the door




r- kaka kaise hai aap



kaka- main toh thk hu beta



r- ok kaka


r goes to his room




next morning




r wakes up and goes to the washroom



suddenly he sees that n is standng near him



r- jerk) tummmm mere bathroom main kya kar rahe ho

r splash water on her but it was just his dream




r- kya hogaya hai mujhe




r comws out from the washroom and goes to have his breakfast



n the dinning table



r sees that n is serving hm juice


r- tummm


kaka- kya huya sahab



r- nahin kuch nahin

man chalta hu


r- bye dadi



d- bye beta



n the car



r- driver chalo


after sometime r reach offce




n his cabin



r is working on his project




knock knock




r- come n



n- sir




r- tum phir se



n- kya huya sir



r- kuch nahin



n- eh fle




r- hmm




after n goes



r- mjhe kya ho raha hai

kahin mujhe pyaar toh nahin ho gaya



r smiles



ok i up ff plz comments .



thank u all guys .