Tale of Dreams-LoveBehindBars?-Part 4(Jul - Page 7

hey kanu sweetie pie

i loved the pt..it was a rocking pt like always u provide...u know wat i think sad pts r more difficult 2 write than happy n romantic pts...if u remember shades of love had some sad pts in starting, i used 2 hear all sad songs 2 ge into that mood lolz man it was difficult...n u did a commentable job, hats off 2 u...ur a amazing writer 4 sure...i loved the pt...plus armi ki bhi entry ho gayi

sonia

Thanks everyone , detailed reply ghar pahunch kar deti hoon , abhi college mein hoon and classgoin to begin in 10 mins 😃

wow...tht was great....hope dr.mallik does bring a ray of hope n happiness to their life........plz continue soon
luv ur ff
ishiqa

wonderful part. please continue soon

hey kanu!! wow i really like your FF!! i hope you continue!! 👏

Avanti

hey Kanu!!
u updated dis FF after a very long tyme yar..
buh dis part was realli sad..
it literally brought tears in ma eyes..
i cud feel Ridhima's n Jannat pain as if everythin is happeinin to me..
poor gurll shes soo young nd hav to face  all tht...
u have written da first part very well kanu👏👏..
does tht mean Ridhima's husband died now..
wahts guna happen now..
Plzzz cont soon..
m eagerlii waitin to read nex kia hoga..
thnxx alor foe da Pm.

Lotssssa luv: Ur Mittu😛

aww kanu that was a great part but a little sad......but no worries im sure it will get better..😉..i like the character of Jannat its really cute..i feel sorry for captain Aamir..R.I.P........anyways that was a wonderful part please continue soon cant wait to read more..😛😳

hi di,

it was wonderful......and very beautifully written...
👏
I luv d way u rite.......it reminded me of ur 1st ff.... i dont knw why but i felt it a bit related to dat one...
yayyy....finally the HERO is in the story.... 😳

cont sooooooooooooooon....

thanx for d pm...

luv,
shivani 😊

kya motiji,

sabhko rulane ki koshish horaha hai yaha par kya?
Jaanat and Ridz are the exact same, their actions, behaviour, even looks are almost exactly the same, what synchronisation between mother and daughter

but why such a sad beginning, you made Ridz a widow and Jaanat lost her papa Amir 😭 😭 😭

This is probably the first FF's i have read here where Ridz didnt already love Armaan, she actually loved Amir (completely different concept all together) Atleast now Armaan is in the story and we can start with the AR relationship this forum concentrates on

So sad though, Ridz will really need some emotional and physical support now, if there's no family (not one we've been introduced to yet here) then how will she raise a child by herself

motiji a huge round of applause for this
👏

Lubna 😳

heyyyyyyyy!!!!!!
WoW!!!!!!
gr888888888 part!!!!!!
buh it waz sad 😭
hmmmm..........its v.intresting!!!!
Dr.Malik 😉 😉 is dat ho i fink he iz!!!
nwayz cont sooooooooon cant wait 2 no wat hapenz nxt!
n thx chooooooooooooooo much 4 da pm
do pm me again wen u update nxt
take care
luv ash.