DIL MAANGE MORE--FAN FICTION

Posted: 18 years ago

DIL MAANGE MORE…..

 

PRESENT

 

GIRL'S VOICE : AMERICA !!! EVERYONE IN THE WORLD WANTS TO COME HERE. BUT I CAME  HERE TO PLEASE MY FATHER. THERE ARE MANY MEMORIES IN LIFE BUT MINE ARE MY COLLEGE DAYS. GOOD OLD DAYS. TIME CHANGES LOT OF THINGS BUT MY COLLEGE FRIENDSHIP IS SOMETHING I KEPT WITH ME EVEN AFTER SO MANY YEARS. ALL MY FRIENDS ARE SETTLED EVERYWHERE IN THE WORLD. ONE OF OUR FRIENDS PRITHVI…IS GETTING MARRIED SO I AM GOING TO INDIA.

 

THAT GIRL WAS KRIPA GUYS….

 

KRIPA : TYPICAL TOM BOY IN HER COLLEGE DAYS…..LOVED BY EVERYONE….NOW…TURNED OUT TO BE A BEAUTIFUL GIRL

 

YOU SEE HER PACKING HER BAGS IN NEW YORK….AND GETTING READY TO LEAVE. SHE IS AT TH AIRPORT READY TO GET ON THE FLIGHT.

 

MUMBAI

 

PHONE RINGING….

 

MISTY : HELLO…..

 

HARSHINI : HEY MISTY

 

MISTY : HEYYYYY

 

HARSHINI : HEY ARE YOU GOING TO PRITHVI'S WEDDING??

 

MISTY : YEA….IN AN HOUR…WAITING FOR ANGAD

 

HARSHINI : CAN YOU PICK ME???

 

MISTY : YEA SURE…WAIT AT YOUR HOUSE….BYE

 

HARSHINI HANG UP THE PHONE

 

HARSHINI'S MOM : ARE YOU SURE YOU WANT TO GO???

 

HARSHINI : WHY NOT???

 

HARSHINI'S MOM : WELL YOU AND PRITHVI…..

 

HARSHINI : WHATEVER HAPPEN BETWEEN US IT DID….PRITHVI INVITED ME…IF I DON'T GO NOW…HE WILL FEEL BAD

 

HARSHINI'S MOM : OK YOUR WISH

 

 

CELL RINGING

 

GIRL : ANAGAD PHONE FOR YOU

 

GIRL 2 : SWEETY PIE PHONE FOR YOU

 

YOU SEE ANAGAD HELPING A GIRL WITH HER CLOTHES…..HE IS A FASHION DESIGNER...REALLY COOL HOT AND STUNNING...JUST LIKE OUR ANAGAD....HAPPENING GUYS

 

ANAGAD: HEY

 

MISTY : WHO ARE ALL THOSE GIRLS??

 

ANAGAD : THEY ARE MODELS MAN…

 

MISTY : OH K….I AM WAITING FOR YOU HERE….COME FAST….WE NEED TO PICK UP HARSHINI ON THE WAY??

 

ANAGAD : HEY…..

 

MISTY : SHE HERSELF CALLED AND TOLD ME SHE WANTS TO COME.

 

ANAGAD : OK I WILL BE THERE IN TEN MINUTES

Edited by nycray0fh0p3 - 18 years ago
Posted: 18 years ago
👏 👏 👏 buddy u always cme up wid a new one wat about ur prev one plz cnt wid dem too i luv ur fan -fics 😊
Posted: 18 years ago
Plz continue... and label ur message as fan fic, so people know! 😛
Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome..............plz continue

~sweta~
Posted: 18 years ago
ANAGAD PICKS UP MISTY AND HARSHINI IN HIS RED BEAUTY….AND ON THE WAY….

HARISHI : HEY GUYS LOOK OVER THERE

YOU SEE A POSTER ON THE STREET

WEDDING OF WELLKNOWN AND FAMOUS CRIKETER….PRHTHI BOSE

THEY ALL SMILE AND REACH PRITHVI'S HOUSE

MANNAN : HEY JOSSSSSSSHHHHHHHH

JOSH : HEY MANNAN HOW ARE YOU MAN

MANNAN : I AM FINE..WOW LONG TIME HUH

JOSH : YEA MET MY WIFE…..AND MY SON

MANNAM : WOW MAN…HEY …

THEY WALK INSIDE

ANAGAD COMES IN AFTER A WHILE WITH MISTY AND HARSHINI

MISTY AND HARSHINI GO INSIDE

ANAGAD SEES MANNAN AND JOSH….

ANAGAD : HEY GUYSSSSSSSS

MANNAN : HEY MAN KAISE HO YAAR

THEY ALL HUG

ANAGAD TAKES CIGERRET FROM JOSH HANDS AND SMOKES

JUST THEN DAMINI BOSE COMES ….

ANAGAD TRIES TO TURN OFF THE CIG….

DAMINI : HEY ANANGAD…MANNAN HOW ARE YOU GUYS

ANAGAD : MA….WE ALL ARE FINE

DAMINI : I WILL JUST COME

SHE SEES HARSHINI

DAMINI : KAISI HO BETI

HARSHINI : I AM FINE AUNTY

DAMINI : OK GO INSIDE

MANNAN : HEY IS THAT HARSHINI???

JOSH : BUT HOW MAN?? HOW COME SHE IS HERE??

HARSHINI GOES INSIDE THE HOUSE

PRITHVI SEES HER

PRITHVI : HOW ARE YOU

HARSHINI : I AM FINE

THEY BOTH STARE AT EACH OTHER

THE SCREEN FREEZES

******************************FLASHBACK********************* **

YOU SEE A SERIOUS MATCH GOING ON….EVERYONE IS SHOUTING

PRITHVI PRITHVI

MISTY : HARSHU WHY ARE YOU TENSED…ITS PRITHVI WHO IS PLAYING

PRITHVI IS ONLY HITTING SINGLES AND THE COACH SI GETTING MAD

JUST THEN A TOTAL TOM BOY…OUR KRIPA….COMING….

THEY ANNOUCE LAST OVER

KRIPA GOES LOOKING FOR ANAGAD

ANAGAD IS WITH A GIRL…HUGGING

KRIPA : ANAGADDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD…WHAT ARE YOU GOING HERE??..ITS LAST OVER….PRITHVI IS PLAYING

ANAGAD : GOD SHE ALWAYS COMES IN THE MIDDLE

ANAGAD GOES WITH KRIPA AND THEY ARE SHOUTING

PRITHVI PRITHVI

PRITHVI HITS AND SIXER AND THEY WIN

ANAGAD : LETS GUYS LETS CELEBRATE TODAY…..FOR PRITHVI……..WO HOO


ANAGAD HOUSE….EVERYONE IS HAVING FUN AT THE PARTY

KRIPA IS LOOKING FOR ANAGAD
(SHE IS VERY FOND OF HIM)

ANAGAD TALKING TO A GIRL AND ABOUT TO HUG HER

KRIPA : ANAGAD

ANAGAD : KYA YAAR…WHAT?? WHAT DO YOU WANT

KRIPA : PUT YOUR ZIPPER ON MAN

KRIPA LAUGHS

NEXT SCENE PRITHVI AND HARSHINI ARE LOOKING AT EACHOTHER. ITS OBIVIOUS THAT THEY LIKE EAHCOTHER


NEXT DAY

ANAGAD IS GOING TO COLLEGE IN HIS RED BEAUTY…BUT THIS ONE IS A LITTLE BIGGER THAN THE ONE IN KYPH

HE FIRST PICKS UP MISTY….THEN ON THE WAY KRIPA AND HARSHINI GET IN…KRIPA IS EATING A CANDY AND ANAGAD ASKS FOR IT….SHE BREAKS IT INTO HALF AND GIVES HIM….SHE IS REALLY HAPPY…CUZ SHE REALLY LIKES HIM….THEN THEY PICK UP..PRITHVI ON THE WAY….

PRITHVI AND HARSHINI LIKE EACHOTHER…THE ENTIRE GROUP KNOWS IT…BUT THEY DON'T REALLY SAY ANYTHING.


A BOY COMES TO MISTY AND GIVES HER A CARD

MISTY : GIVES HIM ONE SLAP AND SAYS…I DON'T BELIVE IN ALL THIS OK. YOU COME TO COLLEGE STUDY AND LEAVE… DON'T WASTE TIME

ANAGAD : MAN SHE IS TOUGH

ANAGAD MISTY HARSHINI MANNAN JOSH KRIPA ALL ARE SITTING ON A WALL

THEY SEE PRITHVI COMING….

KRIPA : HEY HARSHU…BENT DOWN BENT AND THEY KIND OF HIDE HER

PRITHVI : HEY GUYS WHATS UP???

KRIPA : HEY PRITHVI WHERE WERE YOU MAN?? HARSHU WAS LOOKING FOR YOU

JUST THEN WHILE TALKING TO SEE GUYS HE IS SEARCHING FOR HARSHU…AND EVERYONE IS HAVING A BALL

MISTY : HO SAD POOR GUY…HARSHU STAND UP

JUST THEN PRITHVI SEES HER AND REALIZES ALL THEIR PLAYING A PRANK ON HIM

JUST THEN….

SURYABAN * COLLEGE PRINCIPPAL AND KRIPA'S DAD COMES

SURYABAN : KRIPA………COME TO MY OFFICE

KRIPA : GOD LECTURE AGAIN

ANAGAD : HEY KRIPA BRING THE MATCHBOX

KRIPA NODS HER HEAD AND GOES

SURYABAN : WHY WERE YOU NOT IN CLASS. YOU ALWAYS HANG OUT WITH ALL THOSE STUPID FRIENDS OF YOUR. YOU SEE I GOT YOUR AMERICAN COLLEGE APPLICATION FORM. FIL IT UP OK

KRIPA TAKES ONE FOR HER AND ANOTHER ONEFOR ANAGAD

JUST THEN…SHE GOES TO THE THE CANDLE STAND NEXT TO HER FATHER DESK AND GETS THE MATCH BOX FOR ANAGAD


ANAGAD OPENS HIS WALLET AND JOSH SEES SOME GIRL'S PIC IN THERE

HE TAKES IT FROM HIM

JOSH : HEY GUYS…COME GIRLS PIC IN ANGAD WALLET…….AND THEY PLAY AROUND…

JUST THEN KRIPA COMES

KRIPA : IF HE DOESN'T WANT TO SHOW WHY ARE YOU ALL PLAYING

THEY ALL LEAVE

KRIPA : ANAGAD….

ANAGAD : WHAT

KRIPA : HERE YOU GO MATCH BOX FOR YOUR CIGS…AND AMERICAN APPLICATION FORM

ANAGAD : SMILES AND LEAVES

Posted: 18 years ago
MISTY'S HOUSE

MISTY'S PARENTS INTRODUCE MISTY TO A GUY WHO IS VERY DECENT AND IS A DOCTOR. SHE TALKS TO HIM VERY FRIENDLY AND HER PARENTS END UP THINKING THAT MISTY LIKES HIM


PRITHVI IS A REAL BAD SINGER BUT HE TRIES TO BE IN THE MUSIC CLUB BECAUSE HARSHINI IS THERE.

HARSHINI : WHY ARE YOU HERE…DON'T YOU HAVE CRIKET PRACTICE

PRITHVI : I AM HAPPY WHEREVERE YOU ARE

BBBBBBAAAAMMMMMM

********************PRESENT DAY**********************

BACK TO PRITHVI AND HARSHINI STARING AT EACHOTHER

HARSHINI LEAVES

THE BRIDE COMES IN AND DAMINI INTRODUCES HER TO EVERYONE

DAMINI : THESE ARE ALL PRITHVIS FRIENDS….PRIYA…ANAGAD…MANNAN…

BRIDE : WHO IS HARSHINI ????

YOU SEE HARSHINI COMING BACK BACK AND SMILES

BRIDE : HEY HOW ARE YOU??


EVERYONE IS HAVING FUN AT PITHVI'S HOSUE

SHAADI KA GHAR YOU GUS KNOW HOW IT IS

PRITHVI : HEY ANAGAD…BAHUT MASTI KAR RAHA HAI

ANAGAD : YEA MAN….SEEING EVERYONE AFTER SO MANY YEARS….HEY…EVERYONE IS HERE…..EXCEPT KRIPA….DID YOU INFORM HER??

PRITHVI : YEA I SENT A MSG TO HER DAD…..

IN THE FLIGHT…YOU SEE KRIPA …READING A BOOK AND THINKING….
Posted: 18 years ago
ITZ DAMN COOOLL!!!!I LOVE IT!!!!GREAT JOB!!!!! 👏 ...CONTINUE FAST!!!!!!!I CAN'T WAIT...FABULOUS YAAR....JALDI!!!! 👏
Posted: 18 years ago
**************FLASHBACK*************

ANAGAD AND KRIPA IN THE MALL

KRIPA : ICE CREAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMM

ANAGAD : WHAT??

KRIPA : ICE CREAM…LETS GO AND EAT NA

ANAGAD : OK

KRIPA : TWO ICECREAMS PLZ

ICECREAM GUY : THERE YOU GO MAM

THEY EAT

ICECREAM GUY : MAM MONEY

KRIPA : ANAGAD PAISE DO NA

ANAGAD : KYA?? KAUNSE PAISE

KRIPA : COME ON ANAGAD DON'T JOKE GIVE THE GUY MONEY

ANAGAD : HEY I DON'T HAVE

KRIPA : ANAGAD PLZ

ANAGAD : WHO ARE YOU……AND HE LEAVES

KRIPA IS BEGGING THE ICECREAM GUY TO WAIT

ANAGAD GOES AND MEETS UP WITH PRITHVI HARSHINI AND MISTY

MISTY COMES AND TAKES ICECREAM FROM ANAGAD HANDS AND EATS IT

ANAGAD STARES AT HER……

HE GETS REALLY HAPPY AND BUY EVERYONE ICECREAM

KRIPA SEES THIS….

KRIPA : ANAGAD…YOU TOLD YOU DON'T HAVE MONEY

ANAGAD : RELAX YAAR

KRIPA : ANAGAD ITS NOT FUNNY….SHE BECOMES VERY SERIOUS

ANAGAD : OK COME ON YAAR SORRY…

HE GIVES MONEY TO THE ICE CREAM GUY AND HE LEAVES


EVERYONE GOES TO BANGLORE FOR INTER COLLEGE COMPETITION

PRITHVI HAS CRIKET PRACTICE BUT HE GOES TOO

THE COACH IS REALLY MAD AT HIM

AT THE COMPTEETION…..ANAGAD REALIZES HE LIKES MISTY AND KRIPA REALIZES SHE LIKES ANAGAD…

KRIPS GOES TO ANAGAD ROOM

ANAGAD : WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE…THIS IS BOYS DORMS

KRIPA : JUST CAME TO SEE YOU

ANAGAD GETS MAD AT HER…WHY DO YOU BEHAVE LIKE A BOY??

HE TAKES A PEN AND PUT A DOT ON ER FOREHEAD

HE TAKES A THE BAND OFF HER HAIR

KRIPA IS STARING AT HIM HAPPYLY

ANAGAD : NOW YOU LOOK LIKE A GIRL..BEAUTIFUL.

EVERYONE PERFORMS REALLY WELL EXCEPT KRIPA….SHE FORGETS THE LINES AND THEY LOOSE

THEY ALL ARE SITTING….REALLY UPSET AND SAD …..

MISTY : WE ALL PRACTICED SO WELL….DAM…IF SHE COULD REMEMBER LINES RIGHT…

ANGAD : MISTY…STOP YELLING AT HER FOR NO REASON

MISTY : YOU DON'T SUPPORT HER OK..WE HAVE BEEN WINNING FOR SO MANY YEARS….

PRITHVI : WHY ARE YOU GETTING MAD AT KRIPA MISTY

KRIPA IS SAD TEARS IN HER EYES AND JUST SITTING THERE

PRITHVI : COME ON MISTY…..HARSHINI TAKE HER AWAY NOW

HARSHINI : SHE IS RIGHT PRITHVI…YOU JUST KEEP QUITE

MISTY : EVERYONE SANG SO WELL…..SHE IS THE WHO FORGOT LINES….SHE IS THE CAUSE FOR OUR LOSSING

BOTH HARSHINI AND MISTY LEAVE

KRIPA LOOKS AT AANGAD AND PRITHVI..TEARS IN HER EYES AND SHE LEAVES

ANAGAD : HEY….YEH KAISSI BAATEIN KAR RAHI HAI YAAR

PRITHVI : FORGET IT MAN..THATS HOW SHE IS

ANAGAD : THAT DOESN'T MEAN SHE CAN TALK LIKE THAT….ITS NOT RIGHT

PRITHVI : SEE EVERYONE HAS THEIR OWN MIND…MISTY AND HARSHINI…SAY THINGS WHAT THEY THINK IN THEIR MIND…BUT YOU ME AND KRIPA …WE THINK ABOUT OTHER'S FEELINGS….WE ARE HEART HOLDERS….MISTY AND HARSHINI …OPPSOSITE…MIND RULERS…

ANAGAD : BUT OPPSOSITE ATTRACT

PRITHVI : HEY HAT ARE YOU SAYING MAN…

ANAGAD : HA YAAR I REALLY LIKE HER

SCREEN FREZES

***********************PRESENT DAY**************************

MISTY : MEET MY HUSBAND……DR.RAJ…RAJ THESE ARE ALL MY FRIENDS

PRITHVI : ANAGAD WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO FIND A GIRL AND MARRY??

ANAGAD JUST STARES AT HIM

ANAGAD : I HAVEN'T THOUGHT ABOUT IT

YOU SEE A PLACE LANDING…..KRIPA COMES OUT OF THE AIRPORT

SHE TAKES CAB AND CHECKS INTO A HOTEL

***********FLASHBACK*************

GUYS WHAT IS LOVE????????

JOSH : LOVE IS JUST WATE MAN..GIRLS ONLY WANT RICH GUYS

HARSHINI : I THINK LOVE IS A JUST A GIVE AND TAKE POLICY

PRITHVI : NO NO LIFE….LOVE IS LIFE

KRIPA : LOVE IS FRIENDHSIP

ANAGAD THEN LOOKS AT MISTY….

KRIPA IS LISTENING TO MUSIC AND LOOKING AT ANAGAD PLAYING WITH HIS FRIENDS

JUST THE MISTY COMES TO HER

MISTY : KRIPA….

KRIPA LOOKS AT HER

MISTY : ARE YOU IN LOVE???

KRIPA SMILES

JUST THEN ANAGAD COMES

ANAGAD : HEY WAIT WAIT…HE TAKES A EYELASH FROM HER FACE AND TELLS HER TO WISH

KRIPA : WISSHES FOR ANAGAD….AND WHEN SHE OPENS HER EYES

ANAGAD LEAVES AND SHE GETS REALLY SAD

MISTY LOOKS AT HER AND SHE UNDERSTANDS


PRITHVI : COME ON MAN NOTHING TO WORRY GO AND TELL HER TO YOU LOVE

ANAGAD :l OH YEA THEN WHY DON'T YOU TELL HARSHINI UH??

PRITHVI : HHHHMMM

ANAGAD TRIES TO TELL MISTY BUT SHE IS IN A HURRY AND SHE LEAVES



Posted: 18 years ago
KRIPA SELECTS A GREETING TO GIVE ANAGAD….SHE IS ALL EXCITED

NEXT DAY IN COLLEGE

EVERYONE GO TO CHECK THE NEW CRIKET TEAM LIST

PRITHVI'S NAME ISN'T THERE

EVERYONE GETS UPSET

A GIRL COMES AND TELLS HARSHINI THAT PRITHVI'S NAME ISN'T IN THE NEW TEAM LIST

ANAGAD GOES TO HIS CLASS ON THE WAY KRIPA MEETS HIM

HEY BOTH COME IN FRONT OF EACHOTHER ….EXCITED

KRIPA : I WANNA TELL YOU SOMETHING

ANAGAD : ME TOO

KRIPA : WHAT IS IT???

ANAGAD : I DON'T KNOW HOW TO SAY IT

KRIPA : TELL NA

ANAGAD : I AM TRYING TO TELL FOR A LONG TIME…BUT…

KRIPA : TELL NA….WHY ARE YOU THINKING…THAT TOO WITH ME

ANAGAD : I AM IN LOVE…YES KRIPA I AM IN LOVE

KRIPA'S FACE IS ALL EXCITED

ANAGAD : I DON'T KNO HOW TO SAY SO I WROTE EVERYTHING IN THIS CARD…CAN YOU GIVE IT TO MISTY???

KRIPA…IS SHOCKED………

ANAGAD : YEA I LOVE MISTY

KRIPA GETS TEARS IN HER EYES

ANAGAD : HEY YOU HAPPY??

KRIPA NODS WITH A SMILES ON HER FACE AND TEARS IN HER EYES

THEY BOTH HUG AND KRIPA CRIES

ANAGAD : OK BYE….

KRIPA STANDS THEER STILL ……TEARS ROLLING DOWN HER CHEECKS….SHE PUTS THE CARD AWAY THE ONE SHE GOT HER ANAGAD




Posted: 18 years ago
AWESOME!!!FANTASTIC!!!!MARVELLOUS!!!GREAT!!!WONDERFUL!!!EXCI TING!!!INTERESTING!!!GOOD!!!AMAZING!!!!AND ALL THE OTHER WORDS THAT YOU CAN THINK OF....YOU ARE TOO GOOD...COME ON CONTINUE FAST!!!!!!!!I AM WAITING!!!!!! 👏

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