PYAAR KE PAL---FAN FICTION

*******PYAR KE PAL*******

 

CHARACTERS

 

INSPIRED BY TAMIL/TELUGU MOVIE GEETANJALI

 

NAINITAL ..A HILLSTATION

 

SURYABAN : A WIDOWER WHO IS A VERY SERIOUS PERSON. HE IS A DOCOR IN THE LOCAL HOSPITAL. LOVES HIS KIDS. HE IS VERY PROTECTIVE OF THEM. A BIT SOFT SPOKEN AND STRICT. LOVING FATHER.

 

KRIPA : A VERY SWEET HAPPY BUBBLE GIRL. SHE LIVES LIFE TO THE FULLEST. SHE LOVES TO PLAY PRANKS ON PEOPLE

 

DIYA : KRIPA'S SISTER..SHE LOVES HER SISTER VERY MUCH

 

NEHA : KRIPA'S OTHER SISTER ….LOVES BOTH HER SISTERS

 

BOBBY : TYPICAL BADMAASH…LOVES HIS SISTERS…CLOSER TO KRIPA

 

DADI : SURYABAN MOTHER AND TAKES CARE OF THE KIDS AND HOME. SHE IS A TYPICAL SWEET DADI.

 

MUMBAI

 

DILIP : A BUISINESS MAN…ALWAYS BUSY. LOVING FATHER AND A HUSBAND

 

NAINA : GOOD WIFE…TAKES TAKE OF HER KIDS

 

KARTHIK : ELDER SON HELPS DAD IN BUISINESS

 

ANAGAD : A ROCKSTAR AND ALSO A COLLEGE STUDENT. LOVES LIFE AND ENJOYS IT.

 

BOSE FAMILY…OWNS BUISINESS IN NAINITAL…RICH

 

DAMINI BOSE : SAME AS IN KYPH

 

MISTY : DAUGHTER  WHO IS GETTING MARRIED TO KARTHIK

 

 

ITS RANING IN NANITAL AND YOU SEE A GIRL DACING AND PLAYING IN THE RAIN…. AFTER A WHILE SHE IS RUNNING HOME AND ENTER HER HOSUE THROUGH THE KITCHEN WINDOW

 

AS SHE IS GETTING INTO THE WINDOW….HER DADI SEES HER

 

DADI : HEYYY KRIPAAA…..

 

KRIPA : DADI CHUP…

 

SHE HIDES BEHIND DADI AND THEY ENTER THE DINNING HALL WHERE EVERYONE IS AT THE TABLE PRAYING.

 

SHE SLOWLY SLIPS UNDER THE TABLE AND SITS ON THE CHAIR.

 

EVERYONE OPEN THEIR EYES….JUST THEN…

 

SURYABAN : KRIPA…..GO TO YOUR ROOM

 

KRIPA : PAPA…..

 

SURYABAN : JO DEER SE DINNER PE AATHA HAI USSE KHANA NAH MILEGA

 

KRIPA : LEKIN ….

 

SURYABAN : GO TO YOUR ROOM

 

KRIPA PUTS HER PLATE UNDER THE TABLE AND SLOWLY HER SIBLINGS ARE SLIPPING FOOD TO HER PLATE

 

KRIPA : PAPA PLEASE….BINA MA KI BETI HU…AGAR BOOKHI PET SO GAYI THO BURRE SAPNE AAYENGE

 

SURYABAN : AISA KUCH NAHI HOGA

 

KRIPA : PAPA BACHI HU….

 

SURYABAN : WHO PEHLE SOCHNATHA

 

KRIPA : EK DOCTOR KI APNE BACHON SE BUKE PET SULWA RAHA HAI…..MAR JAONGI

 

SURYABAN : EK DIN KHANA NAHI KHANE SE MAR NAHI JAOGI…

 

BY THE END OF THIS CONVERSTION SHE HAS HER PLATE FULL OF FOOD AND SHE LEAVES

JUST THEN…..EVERYONE HEARS A PLATE FALL IN THE NEXT ROOM

 

SURYABAN GOES AND SEES THAT THE FOOD PLATE HAS FALLEN

 

KRIPA BOWS HER HEAD

 

KRIPA : BOOKH LAGI THI

 

SURYABAN GOES TO HER SMILES AND HUGS HER.

 

Edited by nycray0fh0p3 - 18 years ago

MUMBAI

YOU SEE A BUNCH OF GUYS RUNNING TO COLLEGE

IN THE YOU SEE IT'S THE GRADUATION CEREMONY

ANAGAD : GUYS RUN FAST WE ARE LATE

THE SPEAKER (AN OLDER LADY) : YOU ALL ARE THE HEXT GENERATION OF INDIA.

YOU SEE THESE GUYS RUNNING ON THE STREET

THE SPEAKER : THE FUTURE OF INDIA IS IN YOUR HANDS

YOU SEE THE GUYS RUNNING SMOKING CIGS AND PASSING IT TO ONE ANOTHER

THE SPEAKER : YOU SHOULD BE TH INSPIRATION FOR THE NEXT GENERATION

YOU THE GUY RUNNING AND TEASING A PASSING GIRL ON STREET

GUYS : HEY BABY

THEY ALL SNEAK INTO THE SUTITORIUM

THEN THE SPEAKERS ANNOUCES THE FIRST NAME TO COME AND TAKE THE DIPLOMA

SPEAKER : ANAGAD KHANNA….ANAGAD KHANNA

YOU SEE THE ANAGAD BENT DOWN AND SMOKING CIGARETE…JUST AS HE HEARS HIS NAME HE GOES

THE SPEAKER SEES SMOKING COMING OUT OF HIS MOUTH

HE BENTS DOWN TO TAKE THE DIPLOMA

ANAGAD SAYS : I LOVE YOU…TO THE SPEAKERS

AND SHE LOOKS AT HIM….SHOCKED ….HE SMILES AND LEAVES

YOU SEE BUNCH OF GUYS ENJOY AT THE DISCO….FOR THEIR GRADUATION PARTY.

wow new one...........it's ggreat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!plzzzz continue 😳Edited by indianjattie - 18 years ago

wow that was great, keep up the good work, plz continue soon

Great , what happened to the other fan fiction....

KHANNA HOUSE

NAINA : ANGAS KAL RAATH KAHA THEY…UTOOOO

ANAGAD : MOM….PARTY THA GRADUATION

NAINA : TUM COLLEGE HI AB GAYE THE

ANAGAD : MOM PLEASE DON'T START

NAINA OK FINE I WON'T START BUT PLEASE GET UP NOW YOU DAD WANTS TO TALK TO YOU

ANAGAD : WHAT??? WHY??

NAINA : I DON'T KNOW TAKE A SHOWER AND COME DOWNSTARIS

ANAGAD COMES DOWNSTAIRS AFTER A HR

DILIP : HO GAYI AAPKI PARTYING

ANAGAD : GOOD MORNING DAD

DILIP : NOW WHAT?? COLLEGE DONE….

ANAGAD : WELL DAD I WANT TO CONCERNTRATE ON MY CAREER

DILIP : GOOD….LISTEN….KARTHIK'S ENGAGAMENT DATE HAS BEEN FIXED AND WE WILL ALL BE GOING TO NAINITAL

ANAGAD : BUT DAD I HAVE WORK HERE

DILIP : WORK CAN WAIT….NOT YOUR FAMILY

ANAGAD : OK DAD…


NAINITAL MARKET

KRIPA AND DADI SHOPPING FOR GROCERIES

KRIPA : DADI….PEECHE MAT DEKHIYE

DADI : KYU???

KRIPA : EK LADKHA HUME FOLLOW KAR RAHA HAI….MUJHE FOLLOW KAR RAHA HEY YA AAPKO FOLLOW KAR RAHA HAI PATHA NAHI

DADI : KAHA

KRIPA : WHO BLACK JACKET WALLA OPPOSITE STORE PE

DADI : HA WHO

KRIPA : MAT DEKHO WHO CHUPKE SE HUMARE TARAF DEKHA RAHA HAI

DADI : HA KRIPA

KRIPA : AB AAP…SLOWLY USKE TARAF DEKHO WHO YEHI DEKH RAHA HAI

DADI : YEA….KALLE KAVVE KI TARHA

KRIPA : AB TUM DONO DEKHENGE ..DEKHO KAISE MUSKU RATAH HAI

THEY BOTH LOOK

THE GUY : SMILES

DADI : NALLAYAK KAHI KA….

KRIPA : APP YEHI RUKO DADI…MEIN USKA KHABAR LEKE AATHI HU

KRIPA WALKS UP TO THE GUY

KRIPA : HUM DONO BAG CHALLE

GUY : SHOCKED…..HAA????

KRIPA : CHELEGA YA NAHI

GUY : HAAA..NAHI NAHI

KRIPA : AAJ SHAAM KO 7 PM…HURCH KE PECHE CEMETARY MAIN MILNA

GUY. : HAAAA???

KRIPA : SHARP 7 PM …MAIN TUMHARI INTEZAR KARUNGI

SHE WALK BACK TO DADI

KRIPA : MAINE USSE BAHUT DATA DADI..AND KAHA ..TUM MERE DADI KO JANTHEY….ALGI BAAR AISE KIYA THO..ACHA NAHI HOGA

DADI : TEEK KIYA BETA…

AND THEY GO AWAY

lol loved it!! i liked it when kripa was like bag challe

That was hilarious... I hope that guy is not Angad.... kya mazaa hoga😃

SHARP 7 PM…

BEHIND THE CHURCH…CEMETARY

THE WIND IS BLOWING FAST….YOU CAN HEAR SCARY NOISES…A GUYS WALKING TOWARDS THE CEMETARY WITH A BAG..SHE IS A BIT SCARED. HE WALKS INTO THE CEMETARY.

HE SITS ON ONE OF THE TOMBS AND HE TURNED AROUND HE SEES AND WHITE SARI GIRL NEXT TO HIM…AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA…..

HE RUNS AND SEES CAT IN FRONT OF HIM….THEN HE SEES SKELETONS ON THE TREES…

HE RUNS TO THE OTHER SIDE…A SMALL KID WITH WHITE PAJAMA…STANDING AND SHOUTING…AND HE STARTS RUNNING TOWARDS THE GATE HE SEES SOME MORE KIDS…WITH WHITE CLOTHES….

GUY : BHOOOT BHOOT BHOOT…BACHAO BACHAOOOOO….

THEY ALL RUN TOWARDS HIM AND HE RUNS OUT

ALL THE KIDS AND THE GIRL(KRIPA)…START JUMPING….

EVERYONE : HE GOT SCARED…HE GOT SCRAED….HE GOT SCARED…
Edited by nycray0fh0p3 - 18 years ago

HAHAHAHAHA WOW!!! that was soooo funny keep it up!!! 😆