No comments here plz...only in http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=78096&PN =1&TPN=12 so i read them! i will not check back this post! i only post my fan-fic in the link above... This is just a little RECAP!
So Far:
Angad's Place
angad has a concert this evening at 8:00 PM! He is trying to find some decent clothes to wear!
Angad: Kripa mein aaj concert pay kya wear karoon? Please meray saath shopping chalo!
Kripa: lekin...Angad
Angad: lekin/wekin nahi chalay ga!Tum shopping meray saath ja rahi hio and that's FINAL!
Kripa: acha BABA!
Kripa and Angad go to Seasons India to find some decent clothes for Angad to wear at the concert!
Kripa: Angad yeh kaisi hai?
Angad: Great ismay to mein akdem joker lago ga!
Kripa: angad tanay na suno aur baaton phir yeh kaisi hai?
Angad: ok ismay to mein akdem jhakas lagoon ga!
Kripa: yeh pant or yeh wali leather jacet! chalo ab Khanna Manor chalaan!
Neelu: bahiya! aap concert pay yeh wear karogay! meri leyay!
Angad: Jan Bhain Neelu...mein Kripa ki given shirt wear kar lo please!
Neelu: to ab apko kripa apni chooti bhain say payri hai!
Angad: nahi nahi...neelu i still love u! Ye dekho...
have this and let me wear kripa's given clothes!
Neelu (thinking to herself): hmm...i can buy a dress for myself! yay!
Neelu: ok sure! sua (hundered) notes kay liya kuch bhi kareyga!
Arpita: angad...mom is calling u!
angad:oh no...NOT MOM! Naina Phaina tera Kya Kehna!
Naina: Angad,ye lo concert pay ye wear karna!
Angad: U have got to be kidding me MOM!
Naina: ye mazaak nahi hai!
Angad: sorry mom, mein kripa ki given shirt wear karoon ga!
Naina: ANGAD, meinay kitni daafa kaha hai kripa say DHOOR raho!
Angad (thinking to himself):hazar daffa physco!
Who will Angad respect and wear their gift?
Will it be Kripa, Naina,or Neelu's Given Gift!
😛
At the Concert
Angad:Andekhi Anjani Kya ye Mohabat Hai...
Audience: ahhhhhhh...Angad We luv u!!!
Kripa: Angad mera gift wear kar raha hai! apni ma ka kanay na maan kay! Meri Jaan Mer Shaan Mera Angad!
Naina: kis ladkay ki tho mein asi ki tasi karogi
Angad (thinking): Hai Allah! naina mama mujhe kyun dekhi ja rahi hai! kya mein ghar sey bhaag joon?
Neelu is at the mall buying her new dress...there when she walks out of the store...A THEIF runs away with her purse which has a lot of memories,money,and I-Ds!
JinK sees the thief and RUNS after him! he saves the purse and sees that The Theif's Partner has caught Neelu! JinK fights the monsters and saves neelu seeing that she is has fainted! He is hurt too as the guy stabbed him in the arm wiht a knife! He carries our little neelu to the hospital with his injured arm!
JinK: Doctor Help...Plz is ladki ki jaan bachalo!
Jink faints right after putting neelu on the bed!The doctors immediatly start looking at jink and bandage him!
At the khanna house:
Naina: Angad! tum hai to mein...
Angad:Mujhe maat maro PARO!
Jink & Neelu
After all night long, Neelu wakes up!
Neelu: Doctor...mujhe yaha kon laya!Thanks for healing me!
Doctor: Apko mujhe nahi jinkko thank karna chiya woh apko time pay laya!
Jink is still sleeping and has a very painful boo boo!
Neelu: JinK...i wanna meet this guy!
Jink: Aap tehek ho gayi
Neelu: thank you apka naam kya hai
Jink: JinK 😃 have a seat.
Doctor: jis hospital pay aap aye thay usnay specail treatmeant kay liya yahaan send kiya hai! aap dunno husband wife ab patch-up kar lo kuyunkay ab goa mein ho! ab ek dosray say chooti si fight ki waja say anjan na bahno! Yehlay apka purse ma'am!
Neelu & jink (thinking): Husband, Wife?😕 GOA?
Doctor:you guyz have to go now cuz we have more clients and u guyz have taken up thier bed! plz be discharged! ok bye!
Neelu: mein kaha joon mein to mumbai mein rati ho!
Jink: ap meray saath a jahay hum meray goa wahalay farmhouse mein ralay gain kuynkay doctor kahy raha hai kay 1 week thaak saray plane train,taxi trafic from mumbai to goa have been closed due to weather!
The Farmhouse
what will happen next?
😛
Khanna House
Angad: Neelu...Neelu...Neelu!
Arpita: angad,neeelu kahan hai?
Angad: mujhe kya pata!
Naina:angad come here now!
Angad: i am here rite now!
Naina: angad tum baaz nahi athay! kyun os ladki kay clothe gift wear kiya! oloo kay patha!
Dilip: naina mujhe oloo na bahno
Arpita: dad ap oloo hi tho hai! glasses apki ankhon ko taaza nahi kartieen kya?
Dilip: ARPITA!!!
Arpita runs up to her room!
Angad:neelu kahan hai!
naina: call up the police!
suddenly the phone rings! TRING TRING TRING!
it is neelu! infroming she is staying in a HOTEL for a week! she has liedcuz if she told the truth angad would have killed jink for taking neelu to a empty farmhouse!
kuch khadbar ho jay tho? (anusha narrates)
angad calls up kripa and tells her what has happened!Kripa is shocked as she loves neelu like her own sister!
Ria: didi kya howa?
kripa: neelu is missing...she is stuck in goa!
ria: oh... did mujhe pyar hogaya hay!
Kripa: KYA!!!
Ria: sach khadwa hota hai! ye saach hai!
Kripa: who is the lucky guy!
Ria:Aryan hai jisnay meri raaton ki need steal kar li hai!
Kripa: aryan...hmm! nice name angad and aryan both A's!
Aryan calls: Ria can i come over...cuz have u told ur sister?
Ria: yes come over!
aryan comes to the Sharma House (both sis in mumbai,parents in Naintal)
Aryan: hello kripa didi!
ria runs and hugs aryan!
Kripa: have a seat 😃
Ria: we wanna go on a trip didi,can we go?
Kripa: where?
Aryan: GOA!
Ria: yes GOA!
Kripa: how long?
Aryan: 1 week!
Kripa: 1 week? ok! anything for my sister!
as soon as ria and aryan leave, angad leaves!
Kripa hugs angad! angad says that he wants to spend the day with kripa! they have a candlelight dinna!
some romance seens coming up with all 3 couples soon!
😛
At the Farmhouse
JinK:aap cofee layengi?
when Jink turns aroung neelu is crying!
Jink(thinking gosh girls na,kab tak aap kayta raho ga):aap roh kyun raheen hai?
neelu:mujhe ghar jana hai
Jink (thinking,chup kar that is impossible for a week): sorry woh to nahi ho sakta ek haftay thaak!come i'll show u ur room!
Neelu's Room
neelu says that she wants to be left alone in her room!
Neelu (is feeling better now): why does Jink have a bandage around his arm! oh ya he was saving me! so heroic just like a fairy tale's prince of my dreams! (neelu is falling in love)!
Jink: aap naha lay phir hum saath mein bhar dinner karlayen gaay!
Neelu:ok,where is the bathroom?
Jink: rite there (pointing to the right)!
Neelu (singing and talking a bath): lalalalalalalalalalalalalalalaaaaaaaaaaalalala
Jink: what the...what is that sound! Neelu is singing! Man, i think i am in love with that girl! but is she in love with me?
😛
In Naintal
Shereen(on phone): hi kripa!
Kripa: hi shereen! when r u coming to mumbai!
Shereen:in a week!
Kripa:really! wow...u will live with me and ria,ok?
Shereen:ok! c u soon!
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