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Main Laksh Ki Deewani Hoon(Final Part 51-Pg30)

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Posted: 16 years ago

Let me first give you an intro of all my characters in this story...

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K.T:She is a sweet simple girl who is doing her first year degree in a college in Pune.

Sneha:She is KT's best friend.

Laksh:He is in the same college as KT but in a different class.He is also a first year.

Manthan:He is Laksh's friend.

Neev:He is also Laksh's friend.

Prachi:She is Neev's Girl friend and she is in Kt and Sneha's class.

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PART-1

First day in college:

Kt enters her class and sits near Prachi and Sneha.

Sneha:Hiii....Whats ur name?

Kt:Hii...I m Kt..ur name?

S:I m sneha...and this is Prachi.

P:Hiii....Kt

K:Hii...

Meanwhile in Laksh's class he had become friends with Neev and Manthan

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In the evening after class:

Manthan:Kitna boring day tha..!!I m glad that it has ended..

Neev:Hey guys..Lets go and meet Prachi..She will be in her class..I ll introduce her to you guys.

Laksh:Sorry Neev..I m not coming.I m goin to play football with these boys..You guys catch up later..ok..

N:ok Laksh..Come Manthan, lets go..

By that time, Kt leaves the class with the other two and were outside.They were passing by the football ground.Kt was watching the game as she noticed Laksh.She couldn't help staring at him..

P:I wanted to see Neev.Where is he?He had promised to come and meet me in the evening.OMG..!!I had told him to come and meet me in our class..I forgot..Ab kya kare..?

S:OK then..Lets go back to class.

Both of them started to go back,but Kt was still there staring at Laksh..

S:Come Kt......KT(shouts)

K:What..?Oh..

Sneha noticed that she was staring at someone in the football ground.

S:(teases)Kya baat hai Kt..?Kis ladke ko dekh rahi ho..?

Just then Laksh went and took his bag, took out his water bottle and drank some water...

K:Can you see that boy drinking water...Isn't he handsome..?

P:Handsome toh hain..Come let's go and ask his name..

Just then Neev saw Prachi standing there and he and Manthan came running to her..They had gone to her class and didn't see her there..So they decided to come out...

N:Prachi...(taps her shoulder)

P:Oh Neev!!I am so sorry..I forgot to wait for you in my class...I was coming to meet you and...

N:Its ok Prachi..Meet my friend Manthan..Manthan, this is Prachi..

P and M:Hii(smiles)

N:And where is Laksh...(looks to the ground)LAKSH..OYE LAKSH....IDHAR AAO..

Laksh came running to them..Kt thought "Laksh..Oh!!"

L:Kya baat hain yaar?

N:Prachi, yeh hain Laksh..

L:Hii..(smiles)

P:Hii Laksh..(smiles)

P:Guys, meet my friends...Yeh hain Sneha aur yeh hain Kt..

They greeted each other...Prachi looked at Kt and decided to pull her leg..

P:Neev, Kt keh rahi thi ki...(looks at Laksh)

K:(nudges her)ki hum canteen jaate hain...

N:Why not girls..Let's go..

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END OF PART 1....SO TELL ME HOW IT WAS...SHOULD I CONTINUE??...PLEASE REPLY...
THANKS!! 😊

Edited by hp_2006 - 15 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
wow.. 😊

LOVE UR FF 😆

PLZ   CONTINUE 😊
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hey ur ff is really gud 👏 👏 👏
plz cont.
u hv already earned 1 fan! bdw wats ur name?? im marisha...
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thank u friends..... 😛 .....I will be able to continue only after a week...Exams going on... 😭 Plzz forgive me....
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part and love the name!!
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gr8 start! 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago

PART-2

L:Ok...So you guys carry on...I will be there after the game is over..

He went back to the football ground.Others moved to the canteen.

In the canteen:

All of them sat around a table....

N:So what will you all have?

P:I will have tea..What about you girls?

KT and Sneha: Coffee

M:Come on Neev,Let us go and get everything..

Neev and Manthan went off...

K:(giving a nice pinch to Prachi)Hey..What were you going to tell Neev?

P:Aah...(then laughing)That you are in love with Laksh..

S:You should have told him Prachi..Hain na Kt.?

Kt:(blushes)Go away Sneha.

P:I think that Laksh is mad about football..Isn't he?

K:(angrily)Haan...Woh aur uska football..

P:Why is Neev late?Let me go and see..

She goes away...

S:By the way Kt..We have a lot of work to do this evening in our hostel.Our room is all messed up with our things,and if we don't tidy it soon,our room mates will kill us.

K:Haan..thats right yaar..And when will we go to Prachi's home?She is so lucky being a dayscholar na..(sadly)I miss my Mummy Papa...

At that time Laksh comes.

L:Hi..Where are the others?

S:Hi Laksh,they went to get coffee and all for us..Why are you standing?come on..sit..So Laksh how was the game?

L:(sits near Sneha)It was great..Our team won..So Sneha,tell me where you are from?

S:Mumbai.And you..?

L:Hey thats cool!!Even I am from Mumbai.And you Kt..?

Kt:Kolkatta..

Manthan comes with the coffee and gave it to the girls.

M:Hey even I am from Kolkatta.Wow thats interesting..(Sits near Kt)So you are staying in hostel right?We both are also staying in hostel.

Neev comes with 3 bottles of cooldrinks followed by Prachi carrying her tea,and popcorn for all.

N:Laksh, you came..Lucky that I already got an extra bottle for you.

L:Oh..thanks yaar..You know,we won the game..

M:Thats great!!From tomorrow, I will also come to play.

N:Even I will join..So friends what are your plans for the evening..?Shall we all go for a movie?

K:No..Today its not possible Neev..We have got some work to do... and our hostel in-time is 7:30 pm..Movie will be over only by 8.30 or 9 pm na..?

S: Haan..Its ok Neev..Lets go for the movie this Saturday..We have outing time from morning till evening..We shall go for the matinee..

M:This friday the new Shahrukh film is goin to release..We'll go for that..

L:Haan...

S:Wow...I can't wait to watch it..All the songs are so nice..

P:Neev do you know its in which theater?

N:No..I will find out and say..When are you guys coming to my home..?All are invited..Even you Prachi(laughing)

P:HaHaHa...(angrily)Very funny...I don't need your invitation Neev..Its my home too..(Then to Sneha and Kt)You know..Neev and I are childhood friends..Our families are really close..(she notices Kt who was sitting silently and dreaming)..Arre Kt..

S:(laughing)Tum kahan kho gaye Kt..?

K:(wakes up from her dream )Oh..what??Haan..Hmmm....Well..I was thinking about...

L:Kt..Did you hear anything about our plans for this weekend?

K:Plans…well…

S:We have planned to go for a film on this Saturday..

P:(checking the time) Oh no!!Its already 5 o clock…Mom had told me to reach home at 5.. Some of our relatives are coming today..Oh no!!Bye Bye…I am leaving…(getting up)Neev will you drop me please…

N:Ok Prachi…(gets up)Now your mom will scold me too because of you..You always keep forgetting everything..Come on..lets go..Bye Bye friends..See you tomorrow..(Prachi was running and Neev ran after her.)

M:Bye Neev..Laksh,lets go and play volleyball..Those boys are playing over there..

S:Come on Kt..We shall also go..We will start our work as early as possible.

Kt and S: Bye Manthan, Bye Laksh..

L and M: Bye girls…

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END OF PART 2.....SORRY...I DIDN'T UPDATE IT FOR SO LONG.... SO FRIENDS..TELL ME HOW IT WAS...SHOULD I CONTINUE??...PLEASE REPLY...
THANKS!! 😊

Edited by hp_2006 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
WOW!!! good part lovely!!! update soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
itz GR8!! continue soon 😳 👏 👏

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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome part!!👏

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