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Posted: 26 August 2005 at 2:11am | IP Logged

Hey guys I know lot of you might not like this fan fiction. Well you see everyone is writing about kripa and anagd getting together. This is a bit different. IF YOU GUYS DON'T LIKE ME TELL ME I WILL STOP.

 

My story starts from the time Kripa comes to know she is pregnant and Angad is getting married to misty. Its Angad's wedding and Kripa is in the labor room.

 

DADI : HELLO

 

DOCTOR : MRS KHANNA….WE HAVE A PATIENT WHO IS RELATED TO YOU MS. KRIPA SHARMA. WE NEED YOU IN THE HOSPITAL URGENTLY

 

DADI RUSHES TO THE HOSPITAL

 

ANAGAD COMES TO KNOW THE TRUTH FROM AALIYAH..SAME WAY AS THE SHOW. HE RUNS TO DADI'S HOUSE AND DADI YELLS AT HIM AND TELLS HIM TO GO AWAY BUT HE FOLLOW HER TO THE HOSPITAL

 

DOCTOR : MRS. KHANNA KRIPA BAHUT CRITICAL HAI USKE PASS ZYADA WAQT NAHI HAI. MAINA USSE PEHLE HI KAHA THA KI PREGNANCY MEIN BAHUT COMPLICATION HONGI LEKAIN USNE YEH BACHA APNE APP SE ZYADA CHAHA. HUMNE BACHE KO THO BACHAYA LEKKIN KRIPA….

 

DADI HAS TEARS IN HER EYES…ANAGAD LISTENS TO ALL THIS AND IS IN SHOCK

 

A NURSE COMES AND GIVES DADI THE BABY. DADI HAS TEARS IN HER EYES AS SHE TAKES THE BABY INTO ARMS. SHE WALKS TO KRIPA'S ROOM.

 

KRIPA : PUTS HER ARMS IN FRONT TO HOLD HER CHILD

 

KRIPA : DADI MAIN CHAHATHI HU KI MERA BHACHA JANE KI USKI MA KAISI THI KAUN THI. EN SAWALON JA JAWAD WHO KUDH DE SAKE. MAIN AAPKE PAAS YEH DUS LETTERS CHOD KE JA RAHI HU. HAI BIRTHDAY PAR USSE EK DIJIYEGA. EN LETTERS MEIN WHO SAB BAATEIN HAI JO MAIN APNE BETI KO KEHNA CHAHAT THI HU

 

DADI : TUMNE TEEK NAHI KIYA BETA.

 

KRIPA : MERA EK PROMISE KARENGI….MERI BETI KA NAAM…PARI RAKENGE

 

ANAGAD IS LISTENING TO ALL THIS AND CAN'T HOLD HIMSELF….

 

KRIPA : DADI….AAP MAMMA PAPA KO MERI THARAF SE SORRY KEH DENA….MERE WAJAH SE UNKO BAHUT THAKLEEF SEHANA PADA

 

SHE HOLDS HER CHILD FOR THE LAST TIME AND CRIES. SHE GIVES HIM TO DADI AND CLOSES IN HER EYES IN DADI'S ARMS.

 

ANAGAD …IS SHOCKED….AND IS CRYING

 

DADI CALLS KRIPA'S PARENTS FROM NAINITAL AND GOES OUT OF THE ROOM WITH THE BABY

 

ANAGAD : DADI..CRYING…

 

DADI : KYU AAYE HO ANAGD ?? AB WHO ZINDA THI TO USSE JINE NAHI DIYA TUMNE…AB WHO CHALI GAYI HAI….HUM SAB KO CHOD KE…AB USSE KUSHI SE JANE DO…

 

ANAGAD : PAR DADI MERA BACHA

 

DADI : YEH BACHA SIRF KRIPA KA HAI…..ESSE TUM HAT LAGANA BHI MAT.

 

ANAGAD STANDS AGAINTS THE WALL AND CRIES AS DADI TAKES THE BABY AWAY.

 



Edited by nycray0fh0p3 - 26 August 2005 at 2:24am

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Posted: 26 August 2005 at 2:26am | IP Logged
aww..dis is soo sweet Clap
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Posted: 26 August 2005 at 2:30am | IP Logged
DADI AND PRITHVI PREPARE FOR THE FUNERAL. EVERYONE START COMING IN THE WHITE CLOTHES. SURYABAN GAYATRI AND BOBBY ARE CRYING NEXT TO KRIPA'S BODY

ANGAD IS OUT AT THE DOOR. HE IS BROKEN…..DADI HAS LEFT THE BABY WITH HER MAID. NAINA DILIP KARTHIK AND EVERYONE COME IN.

DADI DOESN'T WANT THEM THERE BUT EVERYONE IS IN A CONDITION WHERE NO ONE CAN TALK. ALL ARE IN SHOCK.

PRITHVI : DADI HOSPITAL SE MUJHE YEH CASSETTE MILA….IT SAYS PLAY IT.

PRITHVI PLAYS THE CASSETTE

KRIPA'S VOICE COMES OUT OF IT.

KRIPA VOICE : PAPA….MAIN JANTHI HU KI AAP SAB MERE PASS HONGE JAB YEH SUNENGE… I AM SORRY PAPA…..MAINE AAPKO BAUT THAKLEEF DI. MAMMA….AGAR MAINE US DIN AAPKI BAATH MANTHI AUR NAINITAL MEIN RAHTHI THO AAPKO YEH DIN NAHI DEKHNA PADTHA. BOBBY…I LOVE YOU…MEIN TUMHE BAHUT MISS KARUNGI….MERE THINGS KO FEKHNA MAT…MAMMA PAPA…AGAR…AGLA JANAM HO THO MAIN AAPKI BETI BAN KE REHNA CHAHTHI HU. DADI….AAPNE HAMESHA MUJHE SUPPORT KIYA….KYA AAP MERO BETI KO BHI KARENGE. MAIN CHAHTHI HU KI MERO BETI AAP KE JAIA BANE. USSE MA KI KAMI BILKUL NA RAHE. I LOVE YOU DADI. PRITHVI….I KNOW KI TUM WAHA HO….PLZ RONA MAT….MAINA TUMHARE SAATH ACHA NAHI KIYA. MAIN JANTHI HU KI TUM MUJH SE BAHUT PYAR KARTHEY HO. ANAGAD ……..(JUST AS HE HEARS HIS ANAGAD COMES IN RUNNING)…..ANAGAD…MAINE TUMSE BAHUT PYAR KIYA. APNE AAP SE BAD KAR PYAR KIYA. PAR TUMHE MERA VISHWAS THODA. TUMSE KOYI SHIKAYAT NAHI HAI. LEKIN…KISSI AUR LADKI KE SAATH AISA MATH KARNA…….MAIN JA RAHI HU….PARI….MAMMA APP SE BAHUT PYAR KARTHI HAI.
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Posted: 26 August 2005 at 2:31am | IP Logged
GUYS I REALLY NEED RESPONSE ON THIS ONE....SHOULD I CONTINUE OR NOT
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Posted: 26 August 2005 at 2:35am | IP Logged
Clap Clap Clap awesome yaar plz cntinue...and wat bout d fan fic u were writing before
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Posted: 26 August 2005 at 2:41am | IP Logged
i will write both at the same time....this one is a bit different because...kripa is really not there...its about anagad n his daughter...
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Posted: 26 August 2005 at 2:41am | IP Logged
wow................plz continue

~sweta~
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Posted: 26 August 2005 at 2:43am | IP Logged

Originally posted by nycray0fh0p3

i will write both at the same time....this one is a bit different because...kripa is really not there...its about anagad n his daughter...

ok but i must say u really rock and i luv both of ur fan fic buddySmile

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