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The Sand Princess. Ending pg:60 - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago

This content was originally posted by: Paru_M

just started reading ur ff(haven't finished it yet 😆) but its really good so far 👏 👏 👏
keep up the good work 😛

Its ok u can take ur time to complete reading it. I am really glad u liked it.

 

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Posted: 16 years ago

This content was originally posted by: neh0307

very nice part....👏
hmmmmm.....a stranger....jo AALIYA ke room me aa gaya wid luggage....poor aaliya wht will she now.. 😲
is he AAMIR... 😕 may be????????????
well now plzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon....cant wait to know who is he?????????????

thank u very much.

U will have to wait for a little while longer to know who he is and what aaliya will do, but i can assure u u don't have to wait for long.😉

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Posted: 16 years ago

This content was originally posted by: fravashi

hey that was an awesome part 👏 . infact it was full of suspense 😉 .who is that person who has such intense eyes but with revenge or cruelty 😳 . is it aamir 😳 .if he the one then that's a wonderful entry of him . i loved the part very much 😉 . continue soon yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzz.........can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊

Thank u really very much, i am glad that i could keep the suspence alive, i thought i won't be able to as this is my first ff.

Will continue soon.

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Posted: 16 years ago

This content was originally posted by: bindaas girl

gr8 part 👏 👏 whos the person who directly entered her room with his luggage 😕 .is it aamir......... 😕 😕

Thank u.

The person who entered aaliya's room ..... to know u have to wait for the next part. (Sorry did not want to spoil the suspense)

But don't worry i'll post the next part soon.

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Posted: 16 years ago

This content was originally posted by: togepe30

hey nice part 👏 👏 👏 !! continue soon !! 😛

luv,
vandu 😉

Thanks di, i'll continue as soon as i can.

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Posted: 16 years ago

This content was originally posted by: sun_423

continue soon... 😊

sure i will. little busy at the moment will continue soon.😉

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Posted: 16 years ago
me waiting for you to continue..when ever you are free do continue... 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

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me waiting for you to continue..when ever you are free do continue... 😊

🤗 sooo sweet

i will soon.

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Posted: 16 years ago

PART 4:

 

 

"You deserve an explanation," he said. Aaliya just nodded.

" First things first. I am really sorry I walked in liked that but my luggage was really heavy."

 

(Aaliya was angry with him because his behavior earlier, but now her anger seemed to come down.)

 

" My name is Aamir. I am your father's friend's son. My sisters and I will be spending the night here until our rooms are ready." He said.

 

" Its ok. My name is Aaliya. Glad to know you Aamir".

 

She said this and walked towards the bed as Aamir walked towards the sofa.

 

" I'll wait for your sisters," said Aaliya. "You can sleep if you wish. You'll be tired after the journey."

 

"No, I'd rather wait for them as well. Though you don't have to stay awake", he said.

 

Aaliya shook her head, " I would really like to meet them."

 

 

"As you wish." Said Aamir.

 

 

Both made themselves comfortable, as neither had any idea as to how long the wait might last.

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Posted: 16 years ago
Just read the 3rd and 4th part faiza.The ending of third part was very nice 👏 .And I wish their wait lasts long 😆 .Both the parts are great faiza.Eagerly waiting for the next part 😊 .