For Love: AM/SV/NP: Pg 4: The Big Fight! - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 1 -
It is a bright new morning and a whole new day. One girl is shown getting up and going up to her bedroom window. She goes to the window and opens it, fully and starts singing.

'Hmm...hmmm..
Eeli re eeli'

Then another girl is shown getting out of her bed and sings along.

'Kya hai ye phahli'

The girl at the window turns around and we see her face. She is Methili. And the girl that had just woken up is Vidya.
Then another girl gets up and sings,

'Aisa vaisa kuch kyun..'

Then another girl wakes up and sings,
' Hota hai saheli'

Then another one is shown getting up and then all 4 of them sing.

'Eeli re eeli
kya hai ye phali
aisa vaisa kuch kyun
hota hai saheli'

And the 4 of them continue the song.
The 2 girls that had just woken up are Prachi and Riddhima
A voice is heard from the next door neighbours house. Mets goes to the window and goes out to her balcony. There she sees a loud rock music playing and 4 guys dancing to it.
She then turns around and closes the curtains.

Vidya then comes up to Mets and says: Phir se?
Mets: Yes.
Prachi: We have had enough! Just as we are about to sing, the stupid guys play their stupid music and start dancing stupidly to it!
Riddhima: Toh aaj phir baath ho hi jaye.

Then all 4 of them angirly go to the window and open the curtains and shout out: STOP!!!

The music stops playing and 4 guys comes out to their balcony.

A guy wearing boxers and a muscle t-shirt says: What is your problem? Why are u stopping us?
Mets angirly answers him: Kyun ki Adi. Ur stupid music can be heard at our house which disturbs us!
Then another guy wearing PJs comes out and says: So? Even ur stupid singing irritates us!
Then Vidya comes infront of Mets and says: Oh! So now u think that our singing is stupid eh? Well, then can u sing? Sagar Wagar?
Sagar: Oh! Just be quiet! Are u afraid to come out to our house and say that? Are u scared?
Vidya: Oh! Now u are going to go down bad! We are coming! Meet us downstairs!
Sagar: OK! We will see u downstairs then!!

Edited by *Shifali* - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
so many chrs and my fav KA, NP and AM are also in ILOVE IT. Ist part is good 👏 cont. soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
wow ur tttooo gooooooooood1 anoda awesum ff by u..so many characters wow!my fav are ka and den ak 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow dat was realli gd 👏 👏
continue soon
cnt wait 😃 Edited by angelic shaz - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#15

Wow! Great start Shifali! 👏
I love the outline of the story! Its so differetn with so many characters!
Can't wait for the next part! 😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
great start. try to add in kashish and sujal, prem & mukti and also kavy and anjali
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: eijaz-anita

wow ur tttooo gooooooooood1 anoda awesum ff by u..so many characters wow!my fav are ka and den ak 👏

Thanx.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Patel 1993

great start. try to add in kashish and sujal, prem & mukti and also kavy and anjali

They are all there, but I just introduced the 1st batch of kids right now though.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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@nature099: Thanks
@sharma.nat: Thanx
@tsamhita: Thanx
@cutie13: Thanax
@angelic shaz: Thanx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_eijaz_anita

Wow! Great start Shifali! 👏
I love the outline of the story! Its so differetn with so many characters!
Can't wait for the next part! 😳

Thanx. Will continue soon.