FF:"Finally they met"(Contd.pg.2)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Friends,this is to cheer up all u ppl who r upset with raj's death.

Hope u like it.

Raj enters heaven.

Raj,"Navin,navin,kaha hai tu?"

Navin,"Raj main yaha hoon."

Raj,"Kaha mujhe dikhai kyun nahi dete?"

Navin,"Neeche dekh raj.main yaha hoon."

Raj looks down.

Raj:"Navin tu kma mein kya kar raha hai?Tujhe swarg aur narak dono mein jagah nahi mili.Pata tha ritu se ishq ladhayega to aisa haal hoga naa!"πŸ˜†

Navin:"Theek kaha yaar.Ritu se pyar karne ki saza mili hai mujhe.Bhagwaan ne kaha teri iss chhoti si galti ki saza sirf tujhe hi nahi bahut logo ko bhugatni padegi.Isliye yehi wapas bhej diya aur kaha ki jab tak main bekasur sabit na ho jao tab tak yehi commentry dena padega mujhe."

Raj,"Iska matlab tujhe sab pata hai.Achcha yeh bata jis sachai ko jaanne ki koshish karte karte meri jaan chali gayi woh to tujhe pata hoga.Ab mere samne yeh suspense khol de aur bata de kaun hai in sabke peeche?"

Navin,"Tujhe batana hota to bahut pehle hi bata deta.Sorry yaar nahi bata sakta.Tujhe wait karna padega."

Raj,"Kyun bhagwaan ne mana kiya hai kya?"

Navin."Nahi yaar bhagwaan ne nahi djs ne.Ab yeh sab to unka kiya dharaya hai na.Tujhe pata hai 1st episode se lekar aaj tak yehi sunta aa raha hoon ki main ek deshdrohi hoon par mujhe yeh nahi pata maine aisa kya kar diya ki log mujhe deshdrohi kehte hainπŸ˜†.Mujhe kis jurm mein phasaya gaya,nuclear triggers churane ke jurm mein ya red box churane ke jurm mein. Tujhe pata hoga to bata dena."

Raj:"Tu mujhe kya pooch raha hai meri to khud yeh samajh mein nahi raha hai mere saath yeh sab achanak ho kaise ho gaya.Mujhe to yeh bhi nahi pata meri death akhir hui kaise?"

Navin:"Sach mein yaar 1st episode se lekar aaj tak bas commentry deta ja raha hoon bina kuch soche,samjhe.Achcha tu swarg mein enjoy kar main tab tak ek aur lambi commentry dekar aata hoon.Phir milenge"

If u liked it then i will continue.

Give ur comments on it. 

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Posted: 16 years ago
#2
too good

pl continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#3
its hillarious! plz continue asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice Subha...Pls conti 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx everybody. 😊 I will continue.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#6
its really funny πŸ˜† πŸ˜† ....plzz cont..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Really hillarious!!!! πŸ‘ ..pl. cont.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it is seriously funnyyyyyyyyyyyy πŸ˜† please do continue
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Here's the second part.
Raj is enjoying in the heaven.He is a free soul now.No tension,no responsibility. 😊
Then navin comes.
Raj:"Navin,tu yaha kya kar raha hai?Tune to kaha tha ki tujhe ab kma mein hi rehna padega."
Navin:"Woh actually maine bhagwaan se permission maangi thi yaha aane ke liye.Bhagwaan ne permission de di after all mera character bhi positive hai naa.Actually woh swargvasi aur narakvasi mein jo cricket match hone wala hai uski commentry dene aaya hoon."
Raj:"U r late my dear frnd.Yakin nahi ho raha hai army officer hokar late aaya hai.Match khatam ho chuka hai."
Navin:"Ab main armyman kaha hoon?(little angrily)main to gaddar hoon naa."
Raj:"I am sorry navin but it still hurts me.Kam se kam tu to aisa mat bol."
Navin:"Achcha yeh bata match kaisa tha.Suna hai ki ritu narak ki team ki captain hai."
Raj:"Match bahut interesting tha yaar.tune miss kar diya.ritu apne latko jhatko se sabko clean bowled kar rahi thi.Last ball par 6 runs maarne the main aaya aur sirf 6 runs hi nahi maara balki uss ball se ritu ka sar bhi phod diya. πŸ˜† "
Navin:"Bahut achcha kiya.She desrves that.Waise manna padega tu kabhi ritu ke jhatak matak se aur saree se impress nahi hua."
Raj:"Nahi yaar."(Gets happy)
Navin:"Tu to sirf naina ki saree se aur uske nakhro se impress ho gaya."
Raj:"Hayeeeeeeeeee!" πŸ˜‰ "Par tujhe kaise pata chala?"
Navin:"Main dekh raha tha na sab.Point 1857 mein jo tune naina par dupatta daala viewers ne nahi dekha lekin maine dekha."
Raj:"Tu to bada badmaash hai yaar.Waise tujhe koi problem to nahi."
Navin:"Mujhe kya problem ho sakti hai.Khair jaane de ab woh sab kehkar koi fayda nahi.Ab woh sab baatein chhod,chal apna fav.gaana gaake swarg ki sair karte hain."
Both of them held each others hands and went away singing Yeh dosti hum nahi todenge....
Hope u liked it.

Next will be raj's meeting with ritu in heaven.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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.ritu apne latko jhatko se sabko clean bowled kar rahi thi.Last ball par 6 runs maarne the main aaya aur sirf 6 runs hi nahi maara balki uss ball se ritu ka sar bhi phod diya.

Main dekh raha tha na sab.Point 1857 mein jo tune naina par dupatta daala viewers ne nahi dekha lekin maine dekha.


Tooo much ritu ka latka jhatka!!! 🀣 ..ohh my god I can't stop laughing...too good...pl. cont..soon