SS2(Fanfic I) - Page 4

Everyone looked stunned at the receptionist, not knowing how to react at such an situation.
They knew Aryan had to be treated immediately. They had already lost precious of time.


It was Neha who burst out first.
Neha: 😡 😡 (angry, very very angry, shouting)Kya matlab hai aapka ki Doctor nahin hain. Koi to hoga. Duty doctor, visiting doctors..Koi to..

Hearing her shout all the staff working in the rooms and some patients came out.

Ajay tried to calm her down.

Receptionist: Madam, shift khatam hone ka samay hai aur pichle shift ke doctor chale gaye. Abhi tak doosre shift ke..

Dipika: 😡(angrily) Shift ka samay? Subah ka sade gyarah bajh rahe hain. Ab kaisi shift change.Ye emergency.....

She looked at Aryan. Before picking up Aryan from the jungle Ganesh had removed his coat and tied it around his stomach to reduce the bleeding. But now the coat was soaking full of blood. They had to do something immediately.

There was also no hospital for 10 km. The next one being at Nasik only. But by that time anything could happen. Aryan's condition could worsen and the worst part he could.... No she couldn't think of it.

She had some double thoughts. But one look at Aryan....
Dipika: (very sternly and authoratatively) ICU kahan hai?
Receptionist:Madam, aap kya keh rahein hai. You..

Dipika interrupted her, she showed her hand stopping her talk
Dipika:Maine poocha ICU kahan hai? Hum Special Squad se hain aur jho kuch bhi hoga hum dekh lenge.

Dipika was very stern in her voice.
Receptionist:(stammering)Vo madam.., seedhe.. jakar.. right..

Looking at Ajay, who was at the head of the stretcher and Boxer at the foot.
Dipika:(hurriedly)Ajay, Boxer jaldi se Aryan ko ICU me le jao.

Everyone looked at Dipika as if she was telling something she shouldn't have, but yes she had told them to do something against hospital rules. Commoners using ICU....

Dipika: Aise kya dekh rahe ho? Jaldi karo.

Everyone were dragged from their revere. Ajay, Boxer wheeled the strecther to the ICU. Ganesh, Shotgun following. Neha stayed back with Dipika.

Neha:Dipika, tum kya karna chahti ho? Doctor ke bina kaise..?!
Dipika:(tears welling)Karna to hume kuch padega hi na. Atleast first aid karke, Nasik ya Mumbai leke jaane tak to Aryan ke condition ko stable karna hoga.
(turning to Receptionist, sternly)Yahan koi nurse, compounder hai bhi ya vo bhi nahin hein?
Receptionist:Haan hein madam.
Dipika:To bulaiye unhe, Mere muh kya dekh rahein hein?
Receptionist:Er.. haan.(looking at two people nearby) Shalini, Magan..

Both of them were standing nearby and came to the counter.
Shalini:Haan madam?
Dipika:Aap dono mere saath chaliye.

Having already heard all the commotion and knowing they were from SS they immediately went with her.

Dipika and Neha hurriedly went towards the ICU, with Shalini and Magan following them.

Edited by maha_prakrti - 17 years ago

oye chak de patthe.hit hai ji hit hai. 😉 👏   😆 😳 😊

Originally posted by: smritisonkar

oye chak de patthe.hit hai ji hit hai. 😉 👏   😆 😳 😊

Shukriyaa ji! Aise hi saath dena humara!😊

yeah...good description and dialogues... 👏

Aap jo humko encourage nahin karte to banta nahin ye fanfic! Thank you thank you!
Edited by maha_prakrti - 17 years ago

HI, THIS IS BLUE LAGOON. MAIN ARYAN KI BAHUT BADI FAN HOON. MERE PAAS ARYAN KI KOI TASWEER NAHIN HAI. AUR MUJHE IS SITE SE KOI TASWEER MIL NAHIN HAI. PLEASE FOR GOD'S SAKE MUJHE KOI ARYAN KI TASWEER BHEJ DO. MERA E-MAIL ID HAI [email protected] PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

Originally posted by: blue lagoon

HI, THIS IS BLUE LAGOON. MAIN ARYAN KI BAHUT BADI FAN HOON. MERE PAAS ARYAN KI KOI TASWEER NAHIN HAI. AUR MUJHE IS SITE SE KOI TASWEER MIL NAHIN HAI. PLEASE FOR GOD'S SAKE MUJHE KOI ARYAN KI TASWEER BHEJ DO. MERA E-MAIL ID HAI [email protected] PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

 

Welcome to the forum Blue Lagoon. Ek aur Aryan fan ko suswagatam!

Don not forget to give your intro in the "new members introduction".

Aryan ke pictures nahin hain? You must be joking. SS ke forum main Aryan ki tasweer ke bina kaise..?!

 

Look at the sticky topic "Picture Gallery- No Comment Plz", you will get a llooooooootttttt of Aryan's pictures.

The hospital was a general hospital. It had only the basic but not much of higher facilities or equipments.

Dipika and Neha came to the ICU door. On the way Dipika removed her coat and gave to her Neha. A lot of questions were in both of their eyes, for which they knew the answers and also did not.

Dipika turns to go into the, when Neha catches her hand.
She had tears rolling down her eyes.
Neha:......... (opened her mouth but nothing came out).
Dipika:Ghabarao mat.Kaali maa hain.

Dipika gave Neha a hug. Who was giving whom an assure was not known, as they both gave each other a reassuring hug. A second only it lasted, as they knew the emergency.

Dipika nodded, wiped her tears. Looked at Shalini and Magan and indicated them to follow her and went inside.Shalini and Magan followed her.

By this time Ganesh, Shotgun, Boxer and Ajay had managed to remove his blood soaked coat, shirt and his belt to remove the pressure from his stomach.

Dipika looking at Aryan, rolling her sleeves neared him, to his right.

Dipika:(in a tear strained voice, checking at Aryan's wound) Boxer, Ajay tum log bahar jao.
Ajay:Hum yahein rehte hain.Koi madad chahiye to..?
Dipika:(checking the wound and not convinced of what she thought, bcoz the wound seemed very bad)Its okay Ajay. Waise bhi yahan rehne se kuch nahin hoga, tum Neha ke saath raho.Vo bahut tensed hai. Madad chahiye ho to mein zaroor bulaungee.
Boxer:Haan, mamu hum chalte hain.
Ajay:Take care.
Dipika:(gives a smile and  nods)

Boxer and Ajay go outside. Neha sees them.They assure her and they wait outside.

Dipika:(Shalini se)Yahan sterilized gauzes,gloves aur instruments hain naa? Shalini:Haan madam, hain. Laayoon?
Dipika: Please aur jaldi.
Shalini: Theek hai madam. Abhi le aaye.

When Shalini came out,Neha tried stopping her to ask about Aryan.

Neha:Aryan..
Shalini:(interrupting with consideration)Madam, ab kuch nahin kaha ja sakta. Mein jaldi me hoon.Please...

Neha lets her go. Shalini smiles consolingly and hurries to get the needed.

Andar..

Ganesh: Dipika ji,wound bahut gahara hai.Waise bhi aap kya karna chahte hain? Doctor ke bina..?
Dipika:Mujhe pata hai.Ganesh aap ko bullet nikaalna aata hai na.(in a sort of pleading voice) To aap koshish kyun nahin karte? Bullet nikaalne se aada kathra tal jaayega. Phir hum Aryan ko jaldi se bade hospital le chalenge. Atleast he can hold on till then.
Ganesh:Dipika ji. Aap kya keh rahin hain? Haath ya pair ho tho alag baath hai. Goli pet me lagi hai. Ye bahut riski hai.
Shotgun:Haan Dipika, tumhi dekho. Lagta hai goli bahut gahara gaya hai. Shayad pet tak(meaning inside organ) ..

Shalini had returned. Dipika, Shotgun and Ganesh took each pair of gloves and wore it. Dipika and Shotgun started to clean the wounds. Ganesh was helped them.

Dipika:(feeling helpless)Haan Shotgun, mujhe pata hai ye possible nahin. Sirf ek try tha. Atleast bleeding ko rokhna hoga.(looking up from the cleaning process) Shotgun yahan  peptic solution to milega na? Ussse bleeding barah gante tak rukti hai, hai na. Woh try karte hain.(shocked)Aryan.....

Aryan had again started to take long breathes.

Dipika:(looking at Magan hurriedly)Jaldi se oxygen mask lao.

Magan hurries to the nearby shelf to get the mask.

Dipika:(to Ganesh) Oxygen cylinder.

Ganesh looked around. He knew there must be an oxygen cylinder in an ICU. He goes and gets the oxygen cylinder kept in the corner of the ICU.

Dipika:Nurse, saline bottle jaldi se ready karna.

Shalini hurries to shelf.

Ganesh and Shotgun immediately fix the mask over Aryan's mouth.

The nurse fixes the saline in the saline hanger. Meanwhile Dipika, taking the nedle from Shalini injects the needle into Aryan's left hand.

Aryan's breathing becomes stable.
Seeing the ECG*, she takes the tags and fixes it on his chest.Checks Aryan's pulse and is satisfied a little. Sighs a relief sigh.

Dipika:Nurse, kya yahan  peptic solution hai?
ShaliniNahin madam woh solution yahan nahin hai.
Shotgun:Dipika, yeh ek general hospital hai. Waise sophisticated solutions yahan nahin milenge.
Dipika:(worries)Ab kya karein? Atleast wound ko clean karke dress kar dethe hain. Bleeding zyada hone se pehle,Aryan ko jaldi bade hospital le chalte hain.
Shotgun:Dipika, main ek koshish kar sakta hoon. Tumhe amino aceticia solution pata hai, woh bleeding ko rokta hai na. Lekin woh sirf teen gante kaam karta aur zara harmful hai, skin ke liye. Hum sirf ek baar use kar sakte hain, tab tak to Nasik pahunch jayenge.

Dipika:(widenining her eyes as if she saw a treasure,smiling)Haan, tum use jaldi se tayar karo. Uskeliye common medicinal solutions hi use hota hai na. Vo zaroor yahan milenge.
Shotgun:Haan..Mein jaldi karta hoon.(to Magan) Yahan chemical testing lab to hai na.
Magan:Haan saab. Paas he ka kamra hai.
Shotgun:Jaldi chalo.

They both go outside.

Neha is sitting on the chair with hands on her head. Ajay is leaning on the wall with a hand on Neha's shoulder. Boxer is walking here and there(chakkar maar raha hai).

Shotgun sees them. Boxer is walking with his back towards the ICU, so does not see Shotgun. Ajay takes his hand, hurriedly, off Neha's shoulder to speak to Shotgun. Neha looks up and gets up from the chair seeing him. He nods and hurrriedly goes onto the room nearby.

Neha sits back vexed and Ajay goes back to his position. Boxer on his return walk sees Shotgun disappearing into the nearby room.

Boxer:(to Ajay) Shotgun kahan ja raha hai?

ICU ke andar...

Aryan ka ECG meter.Shows that his heartbeat is very feeble.
Dipika:Nurse, injection ready karo.

The nurse nodded. She knew her work, so she knew what injection must be given for such cases. Shalini gets the injection ready.

Dipika:(to Aryan)Aryan, hold yourself. Please,..... mujhe(stopping) huh..hum sabko dokha mat dena. 

Shalini gives injection to Aryan. Dipika once again checks the ECG, Aryan's pulse and saline.Dipika removes her gloves.

Dipika: (to Ganesh)Take care. Abhi aati hoon.

Meanwhile in the nearby room...

Shotgun sees the shelves of solutions and starts searching for the three solutions he wants. He gets them and starts making the solution.Does some tests and is satisfied.

Dipika comes out..

Neha:(hurriedly)Dipika, kya hua. Bahut wait karvaya. What happened? Aryan theek to hai na?
Dipika:Neha, vo ab tak to theek hai. Shotgun bleeding ko rokhne ka solution tayar kar raha hai. Boxer, jaldi se Recepionist se poochkar, ambulance ko tayar karo. Hume Aryan ko ambulance se hi le jaana padega. Oxygen cylinder, saline sab kuch le jaana hai. .

Boxer nods and hurries off towards the reception.

Dipika:Ajay, tum bhi reception jao. Us Receptionist se poochkar sare formalities poora karna. Uske register me sign karna aur SS ka number de dena. Humari vajah se use problem mein nahin fasna chahiye.
Ajay:(hesitently)Theeeeeek..hai.

Nods at Neha and leaves.

Dipika:Neha....

She starts to say something when Shotgun comes outside hurriedly.Seeing Dipika he stops. Shows her the solution and nods with a victorious smile. Dipika too smiles, looks at Neha, nods reassuringly and goes inside. Neha closes her eyes and prays to God.

Andar....

Dipika immediately wears her gloves, soaks the solution in a gauze cotton and places it on the wound. There is a light sizzle and the bleeding reduces. Dipika, Shotgun and Ganesh are happy.

Dipika:Magan, jaldi se ek stretcher lao.

Dipika places a sterilized gauze and starts dressing the wound. Ganesh helps her by lifting Aryan, to tie the bandage around his stomach.

Dipika:(dressing the wound)Shotgun, extra saline bottle, oxygen cylinder aur gauzes lena. Raaste me zaroorat pad sakta hai.Nurse, unhe sab kuch de dena.

Shotgun removes his gloves and places it on a table nearby. Shalini takes Shotgun to the last room on the left side of the ICU. Outside Shotgun smiles at Neha, pats her on her shoulders and follows Shalini. It is a repository room and Shotgun takes the needed. Shalini rolls the oxygen cylinder to the ICU.Shotgun carries the gauzes and saline. He gives them to Neha.

Neha:Shotgun, kya hua?
Shotgun:Neha, ise pakdo. Hume ise le jaana hai. Aryan ka bleeding rookh gaya hai, lekin temporarily. Isse pehle uski tabiyat aur bigad jaye, hum use Nasik hospital le ja rahein hain.Tum yahein raho mein abhi aaya.

Neha face clears of all doubts and shows relief. She thanks God.

* ECG-Engiocardiogram-A machine to read heart beats.

Edited by maha_prakrti - 17 years ago

hmm..thts pretty good....like i said...the descriptions are gr888...u hav a lotta info abt all this medical stuff....three cheers to ur story!!! 👏

Originally posted by: widluv2aryan

hmm..thts pretty good....like i said...the descriptions are gr888...u hav a lotta info abt all this medical stuff....three cheers to ur story!!! 👏

Thanks Resh. Info about medical stuff-courtesy films and serials. By the way the solutions name were just made up okay. 😉😆But I know such a solution actually exists, but its name I don't know. So just made it up. The ECG part was correct by the way.