*[LoveinCalii<3]* Madzz CLOSE please! =]

Hi guys!! This is my first attempt to writing a fan fic, so please bear with me.

.:It's called  LoveInCalifornia! , and here are the couples:.

Angad & Kripa  Prem & Mukti

  Sujal & Kaashish  Kavya & anjali  'N' Laksh & KT

 I will post the intro and the character sketch reaaal soon. I hope you guys enjoy it!!   😳 😳

 

                    other couples will have bits of parts such as:

              ~ Neev and Prachi

             ~ Dev and Kaajal

              ~ Adi and Maithilli

                   ~ Miland and Ayesha

 

               Updated Parts 

             Intro and Character Sketch ---->>Page 2

      Part 1 ;; Page 3

      Part 2 ;; Page 5

     Part 3 ;; Page 7

     Part 4 ;; Page 9

        Part 5 ;; Page 11 

       Part 6 ;; Page 13

        Part 7 ;; Page 16 

       Part 8 ;; Page 21

       Part 9 ;; Page25

         Part 10 ;; Page29

          Part 11 ;; Page 33

        Part 12 ;; Page 37 ( 1st half)

        Part 12 ;; page 38 (2nd half) 

       Part 13 ;; Page 43  (1st half)

        Part 13 ;; Page 44 (2nd half)

    Part 14 ;; Page 48

    Part 15 ;; Page 53

    Part 16 ;; Page 57

    Part 17 ;; Page 60

    Part 18 ;; Page 64

    Part 19 ;; Page 66

    Part 20 ;; Page 70

    Part 21 ;; Page 74

    Part 22 ;; Page 79 (A)

Part 22 ;; Page 85 (B)

                        Enjoy and PleAse CoMMent and|or CRitiSiZe!!

 

Edited by Sabrinaa xo - 15 years ago

u suck!!!!!!!!!


dont write a fan fic


go die


ur no use of the world

Hope you guys want to read it! 😳

Edited by Sabrinaa xo - 16 years ago

wow i am first one well
sound gr8 to me

Originally posted by: zeenat_786

Hey guys, dont mind him!! He's my brother and is doing this only to Annnnnnoy me!!!! 😡 I hope u guys want to read it!! 😳 😳 😃

HEY FIRST OF ALL PLS WRITE YOUR FF ITS FUN 😊AND SECOND IGNORE YOUR BROTHER LIKE ALL BROTHERS THEY ALWAYS LIKE OT ANNOY😡😡

can't wait for the first part 😊

Can i have atleast 3 more comments before i give the intro and the character sketch??? 😭 😆 Thanks!! 😳 😉 😉

OKAY SO CONTI SOON 😊

(hope it works don't mind my second comment but I will give another comment after i came back from college 😉 ) 😉

Hey guys. I thought of posting the intro and character sketch.

                                              Intro:

       This is a story of 8 people who will go to the same college (I don't know wat the college's name is so if you have any suggestions, give them to me!!) in London. (That's why the title is wat it is) They have never met before as the Sharmas ( the girls because they r all sisters and their parents) lived in Canada. They are now moving to London because their father's best friend (the boys' dad Dilip) are joining businesses. Both families are LOadEd!!


Character Sketch:

The Khannas:

Dilip and Naina Khanna: are both positive. Not much in the story

Sujal: (Rajeev) 22 yrs old, SomETimEs helps his dad with the business, sometimes flirts, but never has a girlfriend cuz he's waiting for "THE ONE" he sometimes goes on dates.

Laksh: 21 yrs old, very flirty, not as much as prem and angad though. Changes gf's every mOnTh

Prem: 20 yrs. Old, big flirt, changes gf's every WEeK,

Kavya: 21 yrs old, flirts most of the time, but not all the time, SomETimEs helps his dad like sujal, and loves basketball, hes sporty

Angad: 20 yrs old. Biggest flirt out of all his brothers, Changes gf's eVEryDaY,

               Notice:
They all go to a college in London. They are all the most popular boys in college.
(Duh!!)


                              The Sharmas

Aryan and Gayathri Sharma: Positive. Not much in fan fic.

Kaashish: 21 yrs. Old, went to college for one year in Canada.

Kt: 20 yrs. Old

Mukthi: 19 yrs. Old

Anjali: 20 yrs. Old

Kripa: 19 yrs. Old


                     Notice:

There isn't much about the girls because they r all the same. They are all modern, but are sanskari at the same time, they all play pranks on each other, and love eachother as sisters. They will go to the same college as the boys. (surprise, surprise!!)
Edited by zeenat_786 - 16 years ago

cutee.. i love this intro and cant wait for u to start .a s for the college.. how boutt....

OXFORD!! i am thinking to go with my cuz but i dont know what that university is for.. like to major.. u no like harvard is for law.....

anywayz.. thats in england which london is located in..