poem on pari by myself i.e.komal patel f

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Posted: 17 years ago
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dikne mein ho pyari tum

saaf ho dil ki tum

aye na koi dukh tumhe

dua hai khuda se ye

khyal rakhna sabka

koi sikhe tumse

khushi dena sabko

koi sikhe tumse sundarta tumhari hai jo

keh na payungi shabdo mein vo

meri pyari pari,reena,rani

for me pari love u takr care😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh nice sukm...u can do a bit of of sheroshairi den....gr8888.. πŸ˜›
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Posted: 17 years ago
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manhoos pari reena rani πŸ˜ƒ   πŸ˜†
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: home_sweet_home

manhoos pari reena rani πŸ˜ƒ   πŸ˜†

😑
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Posted: 17 years ago
#5
thanks its such a nice poem carry on ur good work πŸ‘ 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#6
lrts give ar ound of applause 4 sukm πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ it was realy a good job!!!!!!!! if u give it 2 rajsri productions then they will compose a song out of it and play it as a bg music 4 wrmk πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

let me ask u a question were u inspired by pari to write such good poems πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
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Posted: 17 years ago
#7
Nice poem sukm.. 😊 sweet one..
simmi.. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: home_sweet_home

manhoos pari reena rani πŸ˜ƒ   πŸ˜†

not good 

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Posted: 17 years ago
#9
so sweet..real..poem..its suits pari so much...
πŸ‘ gr8 poem...tfs...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#10
WOW. It's a nice poem. hope to see more of ur sher-o-shayari in the future