Tere Bina (RajivAmna ff) last part updt! - Page 3

Originally posted by: **-**Guriya**-*

gr8 part.. 👏 ....good gng... 😊

  thanks for d comments.. 😊

will update soon...

Originally posted by: Honii

wow ruksar awesome part just toooooooooooo gooooooooood appki story toh jakhaas , superb ,fantastic ,wonderful chal rahi hai ab jald se jald continue karro can't wait more 👏

 hey hana sis, im soo soooo soooooo happy ki aapko hamari story pasand aa rahi hai... thanks for ur comments 😊

      will update soon...

Originally posted by: starbellz_21

hey ruku.., ur story is just too gud! 👏
grt going! 😛
continue soon...

 hey faru dii, thanks 4 ur comments n help too... 🤗

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Originally posted by: krazy_khyati

Great part Ruksaar di!!!!! Loved it.........especially the scene between Saima and Rayan when she falls and he supports!!!!! Continue this sweet story soon!!!!!!!

 hey khyati dear..thanks for ur comments...😊 

    will update soon ...

hi me raed ur story..........its cooolllll really me njoyed reading it.........keep continuing......... 👏

Originally posted by: rajeev-bigfan

hi me raed ur story..........its cooolllll really me njoyed reading it.........keep continuing......... 👏

 thanks 4 ur comments.., i m hapy u enjoyed it..

     will update soon...

Originally posted by: golu_1677

pls cont soon

 certainly!!! 😊

arre ruksaar jaldi continue karo naaabh aur inteezar nahin hota

                                                                part-3

recap-
 hospital mein Saima aur Rayan ki mulaqat hoti hai...Saima Rayan ko batati hai ki Adi ka accident usi ki car
se hua tha.., jise sunkar Rayan hairaan hota hai...., Aryan Saima se kehta hai ki uske uncle ne use kisi ladki se milne kaha hai, aur wo Saima ko bhi wahi
aane ke liye kehta hai....

story further........
 its a new day...
ek naya din...,  wahi khushnuma, taazgi bhara mausam... per aaj Saima aapne dosto ke beech bahar garden mein nahi balki apne kamre mien bilkul khamosh
si kahi khoyi hui hai... wo khidki se bahar unn panchiyo ko dekhti hai..aur dekhte dekhte hi kahi aur kho jaati hai..phir achanak use Aryan ka khyala aata hai..
Saima: {to herself} kabhi kabhi hume bada ajeeb lagta hai ki hum Aryan ko itna kaise chahte hai.... Itne ache dost hone ke bawajood hum Aryan se apni dil ki
baat nahi keh paate... {smiles} per kya kare.., pyar to bas ho jata hai, aur ek din hum Aryan se apne dilki baat zaroor kahenge....
{Saima's cell starts ringing...., she quickly picks it up... & has a huge smile on her face}
Saima: good morning Aryan....
Aryan: wat good morning?  Therez nothing good at all about this morning Saima....
Saima: uff ho Aryan, tum hamesha aise kyun behave karte ho jaise puri duniya ka bhoj bas ek tumper hi hai, kabhi to haskar iss naye din ka swagat karo..
Aryan: oh.. miss philosophy..please ab tum bhi shuru mat ho jana..., ek to waise hi main yaha pareshan hu
Saima: is mein naya kya hai..., choti choti baat lekar pareshan hona to tumhari aadat hai.... batao aab kya hua hai?
Aryan: are bataya to tha na...uss ladki ke baare mein...
Saima: {yeh sunkar Saima thodi upset hoti hai} ha to kya hua?
Aryan: Saimaaa..., mujhe uss ladki se shaam mien nahi balki abhi hi milna hai...
Saima: abhi?
Aryan: ha, to tum ek kaam karna mmm...... kuch 11 baje tak baristaas pohoch jana....
Saima: Aryan, yeh kya keh rahe ho? hum waha aakar kya karenge? ladki tumhe dekhni hai..
Aryan: tumhe kuch nahi karna hai, bas mere saath rehna hai... maine kuch soch rakha hai..per please ab tum naa mat karna...
Saima: kya matlab?
Aryan: dekho.., tum bas mere saath chalna... uss ladki se main kahunga ki main tumse pyar karta hu aur isiliye main usse shaadi nahi kar sakta...
Saima: {yeh sunkar Saima ekdum shocked reh jaati hai} what? yeh tum kya keh rahe ho?
Aryan: are baba sach mein thodi na..bas ek chooooootasa jhoot.... ab please dekho iske alawa mere paas aur koi raasta nahi... ha agar wo ladki achi hui to .....
Saima: to ? to kya?
Aryan: to phir... come on Saima u know me...
Saima: tum kabhi nahi sudhronge Aryan...
Aryan: oh..come on Saima, shaadi to ek din sabko karni hai..., per kyun na usse pehle apni zindagi ko khulke jiya jaye...
Saima: per Aryan isse to
Aryan: per wer kuch nahi..., 11 baje tak waha aa jana... dont be late..ok byeee
{isse pehle Saima Aryan se kuch kehti Aryan phone rakh deta hai}
Saima: yeh Aryan bhi na... kabhi hamari baat puri tarha se sunte hi nahi... ab kya kare, jana to hoga hi.., chalo Saima, tayyar hote hai... {smiles & then gets ready }
{dadima neeche dinning table per Saima ka intezar kar rahe hai}
Dadima: raghu, zara Saima ko bulana to, kabse intezar kar rahi hu,
(doorbell rings)
Raghu: Dadima, koi Saima betiya ke liye puch rahe hai...
Dadima: acha main dekhti hu, aap Saima ko bula dijiye ..
(raghu kaka Saima ko bulana jaate hai, aur Dadimaa uss insaan se milne jaate hai...)
Dadima: ji kahiye...
Person: madam main Mr.Garewal ka driver hu, unhone yeh purse bhijwaya hai...
(Saima comes downstairs)
Dadima: Mr.Garewal ne?
Saima: dadima, hum kal yeh purse wahi hospital mein bhool gaye the...
Dadima: oh.., waise aapne apke sahaab ka kya naam bataya?
Person: Rayan Garewal
Dadima: oh... (smiles) thik hai, unhe hamari tarafse shukriya kehna..
Person:ji acha... (and he leaves)
Saima: kya aap unhe jaante hai dadima?
Dadima: bahot achche se, waise bhi wo itne bade business man hai unhe kaun nahi jaanta... infact beta aaj to hamari unhi ke saath meeting hai...
hamare iss naye project ke liye wahi to finance kar rahe hai...
Saima: oh, hume to pata hi nahi tha.., anyways Dadima hume kahi bahar jana hai...
Dadima: kab tak lautenge?
Saima: ji..yehi koi....
Dadima: are bas iss liye puch rahe hai, kyunki hum chahte the ki tum bhi iss meeting mein hamare saath chalo...
Saima: hum apna kaam khatm karke seedhe office pohoch jayenge...
Dadima: thik hai.., per waqt se aa jana..
Saima: ji Dadima... ab hum chalte byeee..,
Dadima: byee beta...
(Saima Aryan se milna baristaas pohoch jaati hai, per Aryan ab tak waha nahi aaya hai)
Saim: {to herself} hume pata tha.., Aryan ab tak nahi aaye honge, yeh hamesha aisa hi karte hai...
(tabhi Aryan aakar chup chap Saima ke bilkul peeche khada hota hai)
Aryan: sahi kaha, yeh Aryan to bahot hi khraab insaan hai...
(Saima palatti hai)
Saima: tummm..... thank god aa gaye
Aryan: pehle yeh batao ki tumhari tabiyat kaisi hai?
Saima: thik hai
Aryan: tum bhi na Saima, dekhkar gaadi nahi chala sakti thi kya? kaha khoyi hui thi?
Saima: bas.... hai koi, khass.. {smiles}
Aryan: oh ho...khasss....,
Saima: wo sab chodo yeh batao ki tumne hume yaha kyun bulaya hai?
Aryan: tum bhi na, aaj kal bahot bhoolne lagi ho, savere phone pe hi to bataya tha
Saima: Aryannn..
Aryan: acha dekho, ab yaha ek ladki aayegi, uska naam... naam... kya bataya tha uncle ne... ha Arzoo
Saima: Arzoo?
Aryan: aise react kar rahi ho jaise jaanti ho use, anyways tumhe bas itna karna hai ki uss ladki ke saamne kehna hai ki tum aur main...ek dusre
se pyar karte hai... aur isiliye main usse shaadi nahi kar sakta
Saima: per Aryan tumhe jhoot bolne ki kya zaroorat hai, tum use keh do ki abhi tum shaadi nahi karna chahte
Aryan: usne pucha ki kyun nahi karna chahte to? phir mujhe uncle ke sawaalo ke jawaab dene padenge, mom dad ke sawaalo ke jawaab dene padenge...., ya phir mujhe woh New
York bula lenge, jo mujhe abhi nahi jana hai...
Saima: {laughs} tum bhi na...
Aryan: kya hua? has kyun rahi ho?
Saima: nahi, bas u hi...
(tabhi wo ladki aati hai aur Saima ke peechi khadi hoti.., use dekhkar Aryan ekdum se khada hota hai)
Aryan: Arzoo?
Girl: yes..Aryan Kapoor?
Aryan: jii...
Arzoo: hi..
Aryan: hi.., please have a seat
(Arzoo Saima ke thik saamne baithti hai.., aur Saima ko dekhkar smile karti hai)
Aryan: Arzoo, she is Saima my best friend, Saima meet Arzoo..
Saima: hi Arzoo...
Arzoo: hi.. (laughs)
Aryan: {to himself} dikhne mein to kaafi achi hai, to kya? Waise to Saima bhi usse kam khubsoorat nahi hai...
Saima: Aryan... kaha kho gaye?
Aryan: nahi kuch nahi... mmmm..Arzoo, isse pehle ki aap kuch kahe main kuch kehna chahta hu..
Arzoo: main jaanti hu ki aap mujhse kya kehna chahte hai
Aryan: kya matlab?
Arzoo: matlab yeh ki mujhe aapke baare mein sab pata hai...
Aryan: jaise?
Arzoo: jaise ki aap aur Saima college friends hai, aap yaha apne uncle ke saath rehte ho, aapke parents New York mein rehte hai, jo chahte hai ki jald se jald apki shaadi ho jaye, per aap iss waqt shaadi ke mood mein bilkul bhi nahi hai...
Aryan: {looks at Arzoo in amazement}..aap.. aap yeh sab kaise... {and he drinks a glass of water as he gets very nervous}
Arzoo: itna hi nahi main to yeh bhi jaanti hu ki aaj ka aapka plan mujhe yaha se bhagane ka hai...
Aryan: {starts coughing} kya.. mian to bas wo...mm... {Aryan ke shakal dekhkar Saima aur Arzoo hass padte hai}
Saima: bas ho gaya Arzoo, ab aur nahi.., inki shakal inki halat bayaa kar rahi hai..
Aryan: wat? iska matlab hai ki tum dono ek dusre ko pehle se hi jaante ho?
Arzoo: ha...
Aryan: Saima.. tum bhi...
Saima: {still laughing} Aryan..hum wo...
Aryan: has lo has lo... apne dost ki aisi halat pe bahot hasi aa rahi hai na...
Saima: ok Arzoo ab bahot ho gaya..Aryan hum batate hai.., Arzoo hamari cousin hai, aur kal jab tumne hume phone kiya tha thik uske baad Arzoo ka bhi phone aaya aur usne hume bataya ki use bhi kisi ladke se milne yaha 11 baje aana hai.., hum samajh gaye ki wo ladka aur koi nahi aap hi hai..
Aryan: ha.., aur phir tum dono beheno ne milkar iss Aryan ko bakra banaya...kyun?
Saima: aisi baat nahi hai Aryan..,
Arzoo: ha, aur tumhara kaam bhi ho gaya, zara socho agar meri jagah koi aur ladki hoti aur tumhare mana karne ke bawajood bhi tumse shaadi ke liye haa kehti to?
Aryan: ha wo to hai,per ...... ab
Saima: ab kya? daro mat Arzoo tumse shaadi nahi karne wali hai
Arzoo: ha, kyunki mujhe bhi abhi shaadi nahi karni hai
Aryan: sach! oh thank u soooo much....  waise Arzoo aaj shaam kya kar rahi ho?
Saima: tum nahi sudhronge na...
Arzoo: nahi Aryan aaj shaam main free nahi hu, so better luck next time...
Saima: acha hume ab chalna hai, Dadima hamara intezar kar rahe honge...
Aryan: kaha office jana hai?
Saima: ha....
Arzoo: main bhi ab chalti hu, ok then Aryan it was really nice meeting u
Aryan: same here.. iss meeting ko to main kabhi nahi bhoola sakta.. {laughs}
Arzoo: me too, anyways byee...
Saima: byee, Aryan tumhara kya yehi rukne ka irada hai?
Aryan: nahi, mujhe kuch kaam hai tum niklo..
Saima: ok  byee...
{yaha Dadima office mein Saima ka intezar kar rahe hote hai..., meeting ka waqt ho raha tha, sabhi members aa chuke the... }
Dadima: {lagta hai Saima nahi aayegi.., mujhe meeting mein jana chahiye, ab aur intezar karna thik nahi}
{Dadima bas apne cabin se bahar jaa hi rahe hote hai ki woh Rayan ko aate hue dekhte hai}
Dadima: hello Mr.Garewal
Rayan: hello Mrs.Khanna, how are u?
Dadima: hum to thik hai, aur aapka shukriya adaa karna chahte the
Rayan: shukriya? kis baat ke liye {tabhi Saima aati hai}
Dadima: acha hua aa gayi tum, main tumhara hi intezar kar rahi thi..
Saima: i'm sorry dadima
{Rayan Saima ko yaha dekhkar hairaan hota hai}
Rayan: aap?
Dadima: ji.., main aapse Saima ka purse bhijwane ke liye shukriya adaa karna chahti thi...
Rayan: oh.., main nahi jaanta tha ki Saima aapki poti (grand daughter) hai...
Dadima: koi baat nahi..,
Saima: and thanks once again
Dadima: thanks kaisa, aapne Adi ke liye itna kuch kiya to kya main aap ke liye itna bhi nahi karta, aur Mrs.Khanna aapse to main  bilkul bhi thanks nahi le sakta, maine aapse itna kuch sikha hai, to aapse thanks to kabhi bhi nahi...
Dadima: ok, ab main kya keh sakti hu....
Rayan: kuch kehne ki zaroorat nahi aapko.... {smiles} meeting ke liye chale..
Dadima: ji....
{teeno bhi meeting ke liye jaate hai, meeting mein Dadima, iss naye project ki zimmedari Saima ko dete hai....
kuch discussion aur decessions ke baad meeting khatm hoti hai..., per Saima bahot nervous hoti hai}
Dadima: kya baat hai Saima, meri phool jaisi bachi ka chehra u murjha kyun gaya hai?
{Rayan,Dadima ko u kehte sun muskurata hai}
Saima: Dadima, humne kabhi bhi itne bade project ki zimmedari nahi li hai, aur achanak aapne hume itni badi zimmedari de di...
Dadima: to kya hua beta, hume tumper pura pura bharosa hai..., waise bhi tumhari mehnat ki hi wajah se aaj Kanak Jewelleries ki market mein itni demand hai,
Saima: per Dadima phir bhi, aur iss project mein Garewals main financer hai, agar kuch bhi galati hui to...
Rayan: to??? to kya?
Dadima: ab aap hi ise kuch samjhayiye...
Rayan: aap kis liye ghabra rahe ho? yeh aapka pehle individual project hai isliye ya phir Garewals iss project ke financer hai isliye?? agar aap dusriwali baat ke wajah se ghabra rahi hai to aap aisa sochna bhi chod dijiye... business mien ups and downs to chalta hai.. aur filhaal jaisa ki Mrs.Khanna ne bataya hai Kanak Jewelleries is on the top, or aap chaho to yeh aur aage jaa sakti hai, international level tak bhi... bas aapne aap per bharosa karna seekho.... aur ha, humne aapke naye designs bhi dekhe hai, so apne mann se wo jo kahi chooota sa doubt hai na, use bhi bahar nikal do...
Saima: {smiles}
Dadima: chalo, kisi ki to baat mani isne...
{tabhi dadima ki secretary reena waha aati hai}
Reena: Mam, Mr.Mehta aapse milne aaye hai....
Dadima: ha bas abhi aaye.. Mr.Garewal ex-cuse me for a minute please..
Rayan: ji, sure
{Dadima waha se chale jate hai}
Saima: Mr.Garewal, ab Adi ki tabiyat kaisi hai...
Rayan:  wo thik hai, use discharge de diya hai.... anyways ab main bhi chalta hu
Saima: ji...
{Rayan was just about to leave then Saima stops him}
Saima: Mr.Garewal
Rayan: ji
Saima: thanks...
Rayan: kisliye...,
Saima: bas, hume support karne ke liye, hum apni tarafse puri koshish karenge
Rayan: well, u are most welcome Miss.Khanna
Saima: {smiles} ji , hum chahenge ki aap hume hamare naam se hi bulaye....
Rayan: ok.., So kal thik 10 baje Garewal office aa jayiyega, kuch documents sign karne hai...
Saima: ji...... {smiles}
{Rayan leaves}
Saima: {to herself} ache insaan hai..... {smiles}

  ....end of part-3....
comments awaited!!! 😳 😳 😳

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Edited by ruksaar_khan - 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Honii

arre ruksaar jaldi continue karo naaabh aur inteezar nahin hota

 so sorrie sis.., aage se aapko intezar nahi karvayenge... 😊