I feel this memory loss track was written terribly like it has no directionFor me i think naira's illness...memory loss and its impact on everyones lives should have been shown...
their should have been a legit medical reason why kartik stayed away from naira
Then they should have shown us them remeeting and kartik lying to protect her
They are just showing him off as a chauvinist who thinks naira is incapable of making her own choices sick or not
Even naksh being pissed off at kartik could have been shown to actually make more sense like him being honest and saying he wants no rship with the man who stole his kid
and showing keerti actually not comfortable with naira around... and taking the baby and going because right now she has no character she just lets naira snatch the baby
I wish they showed kartik slowly seeing how unhappy naira was with her memory loss and chosing to help her settle in life slowly...after thinking properly bout its impacts then doing it and naira finding herself drawn to him but remembering naksh told her not to trust ppl and holding back but liking him...
everyone noticing how happy she was suddenly no more angry...
Naira about to tell kartik she loves him but seeing him on their anniversary ordering flowers and cake for his wife...and being devastated
suddenly stopping her dance practice
staying at home naksh calling a friend to cheer her up
and naira being forced to go out with him...kartik stalking outside the house for one glimpse of naira seeing her with someone else getting into a car and following them seeing them having coffee...
Naira alone for a second in the parking lot asking her who that guy was
Naira lying and saying her bf or something and kartik getting super pissed
and naira being like stop it ur married u shouldnt worry about me and kartik nearly about to blurt ur my wife...
but holding back, remembering he cant,
and telling her not to go back with the other dude and naira being like u cnt stop me u have no right to and her going off
Kartik going home trashing his room.
Naira crying at home, telling naksh she wants to go somewhere and naksh sending her to austrailia
kartik hearing about it and following her
Naira gets robbed and when the police are about to catch her... kartik is like shes my wife and has papers...
Naira stays with him coz of her lack of money but constantly fighting him off...
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they need structure with this track a proper direction which is very much missing
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