Naagin 3

India-Forums

   
Naagin 3
Naagin 3

Behir FF - Starting Over Again Ch 5 upd (Page 15)

sarahgul Goldie
sarahgul
sarahgul

Joined: 21 May 2013
Posts: 1838

Posted: 13 March 2019 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by fortitudeoth

Hej buddy Hug

I am finally posting my review. Sorry it took so long

Your chapters are always amazing. I don't know how to praise them anymore. Maybe I should try Danish now LOL

Bella is the perfect mother. She is a natural. She doesn't need her memories to be a mother to her children.

I want to know how Behir's night is together. I am wondering the same as Ash, not whatever you are thinking SaRah Tongue

Update SOON. It has been a long time since you updated Angry. I will send you messages to update LOL
 
BUDDDYYY Hug 

omg review in Danish would be perfect. LOLLOL Thanks you for your lovely review buddy.. Love it..  Yes Bela is perfect.. she just need to trust herself and believe that she can do it. Wink

Lol yes behir's night... will be different haha.. not exactly what you expect. LOLLOL 

I will update it soon. Wink

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

The.Wanderer

sarahgul Goldie
sarahgul
sarahgul

Joined: 21 May 2013
Posts: 1838

Posted: 13 March 2019 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nuomi.riceball

This ff is under construction?
 
Lol... I will update soon Nuomi Wink
The.Wanderer IF-Rockerz
The.Wanderer
The.Wanderer

Joined: 03 June 2017
Posts: 7459

Posted: 13 March 2019 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
Sarah I want to kick you off the balcony but right now I am not able to get that post. Angry I need a new update... 

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

sarahgulnuomi.riceball

sarahgul Goldie
sarahgul
sarahgul

Joined: 21 May 2013
Posts: 1838

Posted: 13 March 2019 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Monali5

This chapter is beautifully penned. The most emotional chapter so far. The way you described Bela's emotions(they way she can't relate to her past self and has this constant fear if she can remember her past ) is just commendable .It was all so natural and plain raw emotions and the best part is the dialogues and emotions hit the right chord ,it feels like it's all happening in front of me that for me is the greatest achievement for a writer .This chapter had me hooked to it . I was an emotional wreck throughout the chapter .The father and children bond is so cute!! Continue soon. 
 
Thank you Monali.. Thats so sweet of you.. Tongue So happy that you can feel her emotions and yes as a writer it feel so good. LOL 

Mahir is a sweetheart... Bela is a lucky girl to get such a good looking and amazing husband LOL 

More emotional stuff on the way.. Hope you will like it.. And thanks for your lovely review. Wink
sarahgul Goldie
sarahgul
sarahgul

Joined: 21 May 2013
Posts: 1838

Posted: 13 March 2019 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by The.Wanderer

Sarah I want to kick you off the balcony but right now I am not able to get that post. Angry I need a new update... 
 

omg idhar bhi kick... Yaar muhje har din kick parti hai.. LOLLOL 

I will soon pakka.. Friday ko.. LOLWink 

BTW SAME TO YOU ASH BABA... NEXT CHAPTER ?????? ROFL

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

The.Wanderernuomi.riceball

ratna.nanda IF-Dazzler
ratna.nanda
ratna.nanda

Joined: 05 September 2014
Posts: 3777

Posted: 15 March 2019 at 9:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sarahgul

 

omg idhar bhi kick... Yaar muhje har din kick parti hai..  LOLLOL 

I will soon pakka.. Friday ko.. LOLWink 

BTW SAME TO YOU ASH BABA... NEXT CHAPTER ?????? ROFL

It's Friday. AlreadyWink

waiting for update.
nuomi.riceball IF-Sizzlerz
nuomi.riceball
nuomi.riceball

Joined: 30 November 2007
Posts: 13681

Posted: 15 March 2019 at 9:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ratna.nanda


It's Friday. AlreadyWink

waiting for update.

I think it's because of time differenceLOL

It's still 4 pm in Europe. LOL
Monali5 Groupbie
Monali5
Monali5

Joined: 10 March 2016
Posts: 128

Posted: 15 March 2019 at 10:09am | IP Logged
Give us an update soon! 

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
BeHir FF - The 'Un' Attached String CHAPTER - 17, PAGE - 54

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 54 55

Author: -Paulomi-   Replies: 436   Views: 39532

-Paulomi- 436 39532 5 days ago by -Paulomi-
~*~ || PearBhi/BeHir AT #68 || Tumhe Mujh Pe Utna Guroor Hoga ~*~

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 149 150

Author: Anu0517   Replies: 1198   Views: 31092

Anu0517 1198 31092 18 March 2019 at 8:52am by ImaJain
~*~ || PearBhi/BeHir AT #67 ||Akhiyan Nu Rehn De Akhiyan De Kol Kol~*~

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 149 150

Author: Anu0517   Replies: 1195   Views: 29997

Anu0517 1195 29997 15 March 2019 at 5:23am by nuomi.riceball
Upcoming behir scenes( Behir acting)

Author: Arshukaurkhushi   Replies: 5   Views: 721

Arshukaurkhushi 5 721 07 March 2019 at 9:26pm by Sunshine-1
BeHir and No BeHir

2

Author: ExpectoPatronu   Replies: 10   Views: 2135

ExpectoPatronu 10 2135 18 August 2018 at 8:03pm by Mages

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Naagin 3 Topic Index

Check these Celebrity also

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index