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Behir FF - Starting Over Again Ch 7 upd new - Page 11

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Posted: 5 years ago
Read it so many times
Want a new update
Plz continue
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: The.Wanderer



Not getting enough dose of Tharkipan these days. ðŸ˜­


And I meant the awkwardness, the love and affection and maybe Mahir will pull her leg? Looking forward to it. ðŸ˜‰

 
Hmm something will come for sure... yes awkwardnees is the right word for what is coming up. ðŸ˜†ðŸ˜† 
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: fortitudeoth



Sarah, I think we can see your tharki mind on. Your first thought when you read what Ash said was THAT

I know I owe you both reviews. They will be coming soon 😉

 
lol buddy... yes my tharki mind is always on.. ðŸ˜†ðŸ˜† Specially when i see Ash's comments.. ðŸ˜†ðŸ˜†
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update dear
She entered her home again.
Tough for her as she saw so many memories in pictures but didn't remember it.
Mahir bela small convo was good
Update soon please
Thanks

 
Thank you dear. ðŸ˜› 

Yes lots of memories.. but sad that she did not remember it...  

I will soon ðŸ˜‰
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: _nakshi_

Sarah congratulations for your new ff lately ðŸ˜†

It's a nice and sweet concept of love between a family 
The family bonding was well written 
Everything never lasts long and OMG Bela forgot everything 
It's really tough time for mahir 
But he managed well all the things 
The way behir took care of kids you portrayed beautifully 
Waiting for more family bond and Bela adjusting and understanding family 
Do update soon

 
Thank you Nakshi. ðŸ˜‰ 

Thanks for loving it so far... more family bond on the way.. 

And yes i will update soon. ðŸ˜‰
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: ratna.nanda

Waiting for next chapter. .do update soon dear! 

 

Coming soon Ratna.. Thanks for your support. ðŸ˜‰
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: fortitudeoth

Hej buddy 🤗

I am finally posting my review. Sorry it took so long

Your chapters are always amazing. I don't know how to praise them anymore. Maybe I should try Danish now 😆

Bella is the perfect mother. She is a natural. She doesn't need her memories to be a mother to her children.

I want to know how Behir's night is together. I am wondering the same as Ash, not whatever you are thinking SaRah 😛

Update SOON. It has been a long time since you updated 😡. I will send you messages to update 😆

 
BUDDDYYY ðŸ¤— 

omg review in Danish would be perfect. ðŸ˜†ðŸ˜† Thanks you for your lovely review buddy.. Love it..  Yes Bela is perfect.. she just need to trust herself and believe that she can do it. ðŸ˜‰

Lol yes behir's night... will be different haha.. not exactly what you expect. ðŸ˜†ðŸ˜† 

I will update it soon. ðŸ˜‰
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: nuomi.riceball

This ff is under construction?

 
Lol... I will update soon Nuomi ðŸ˜‰
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Posted: 5 years ago
Sarah I want to kick you off the balcony but right now I am not able to get that post. ðŸ˜¡ I need a new update... 
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: Monali5

This chapter is beautifully penned. The most emotional chapter so far. The way you described Bela's emotions(they way she can't relate to her past self and has this constant fear if she can remember her past ) is just commendable .It was all so natural and plain raw emotions and the best part is the dialogues and emotions hit the right chord ,it feels like it's all happening in front of me that for me is the greatest achievement for a writer .This chapter had me hooked to it . I was an emotional wreck throughout the chapter .The father and children bond is so cute!! Continue soon. 

 
Thank you Monali.. Thats so sweet of you.. ðŸ˜› So happy that you can feel her emotions and yes as a writer it feel so good. ðŸ˜† 

Mahir is a sweetheart... Bela is a lucky girl to get such a good looking and amazing husband ðŸ˜† 

More emotional stuff on the way.. Hope you will like it.. And thanks for your lovely review. ðŸ˜‰