Behir FF - Starting Over Again Ch 7 upd new - Page 2

Originally posted by: fortitudeoth

Hi buddy 🤗

You are back with another story. It's time to celebrate that 🥳.

But also you wrote a new story and you didn't even tell me 😡. Imagine the balcony GIF here!

This is amazing! I knew you could come up with another story. You are a great writer 👏

This chapter had so many emotions. I don't even know what to say. You have left me speechless.

I don't know where to start. But I will mention some of the highlights.

Behir have children and they're named Meera and Dhruv 😭.

Behir are suffering already and it's only the first chapter 🥱. Their beautiful daily routine has been interrupted 🥺.

Oh Mahir! He's in so much pain. The children are so young. How will they feel when they realize their mother doesn't remember them?

I felt every emotion that you wanted to show and all the details work perfectly with this.

This time you have set the story in Mumbai. I will miss your descriptions of Italy and your Italian!

Thank you for writing another story. Make this story longer than the last one. Oh and I have commented quickly on your story this time. Update SOON 😆

Originally posted by: Stardust91

Sarah this is amazing...i could see Mahir in the scene where he said he couldn't do it alone and Bella needed to come back

 

It's beautiful.

Originally posted by: Varsha001

Finally a new ff to read😉

Its too good to read👏...all types of emotions-happy😊 ,sad😭...cant wit to read the next chapter

Originally posted by: nuomi.riceball

Great story. Great start. Inspired by the vow and 50 first dates. Does it mean that Bella might never recover her memories? Please continue soon.

Originally posted by: Monali5

Loved it. The Vow is my favorite movie! 

Originally posted by: sarahgul

 

Ash baba thanku for your sweet words!! 🤗 

After the flashback scene about behir's kids meera and dhruv in n3.. I wanted to make a story about them.. Then i saw  Vow  again for a couple of days ago.. And I began to imagine behir in that story... 

So thats how i came with this idea of behir and their kids.. 😆😆  Btw i also got inspired by mahirs ML TRACK.. 🤣

I am so happy that you could feel mahir's emotions.. And how hard he is trying to make everything work.. 

ash thankuu for telling me how it is in mumbai regarding weather.. I dont know anything about it.. So thank you my mumbaiyah girl.. I might need your help for more details about mumbai.. 😆 what a bummer i made regarding spring..!! 🤣

aww I made you cry!! awww ash aajaa jhappi 🤗

It will not be a cry story for sure.. Lots of happines are also in the store.. 😉

Thankkuuu for your amazing review..!!  👏

Originally posted by: The.Wanderer

You just let me know what help you need with the local information. I will help to the best of my ability.😉

And yes I guessed you didn't know about the weather. So I mentioned. I can help you everything except for local trains related info. I have never traveled by them and nor do I intend to.😛

And yes even i am feeling inspired by the ML. ML track is on the way in my FF as well.😉

And I am so happy that there will be happy stuff as well. Look forward to the next chapter.😃

Aww🤗

Originally posted by: The.Wanderer

You just let me know what help you need with the local information. I will help to the best of my ability.😉

And yes I guessed you didn't know about the weather. So I mentioned. I can help you everything except for local trains related info. I have never traveled by them and nor do I intend to.😛

And yes even i am feeling inspired by the ML. ML track is on the way in my FF as well.😉

And I am so happy that there will be happy stuff as well. Look forward to the next chapter.😃

Aww🤗

Originally posted by: nuomi.riceball

Sorry for butting in but what's wrong with the local train?