Hi guys so as usual IF shut the earlier threats cuz apparently it was very upset with the time I took to update *Hides Face* so here we are with a new thread and lets hope this one stays...Also I hope you guys continue reading and liking the story <3
~INDEX~
~Just A Bend Not The End (AR Version)~
Recap: As per the care centre rules Armaan leaves Ridhima under Rahul's care and returns home. Really upset and disturbed he starts remembering all that happened in the last ten months...He remembers how Ridhima falls down the stairs and how he rushed her to the hospital where they found out that she had fractured her hand...He recalled them coming back home and him taking care of her. He then was reminded of that night not long after her fracture where he woke up hearing her cry in pain only to realise that she had hurt herself in an attempt of getting up on her own, he consoled her and somehow made her sleep inspite of her protests...PAUSE FROM FLASHBACK...Armaan who had fallen asleep thinking about the last ten months got up and immediately rushed to the care centre to meet Ridhima. However Ridhima refused to acknowledge his presence in anyway breaking his heart into bits. Armaan breaks down real bad and starts shaking her shoulders really desperate to get some response and seeing him loose control Rahul and the nurses are forced to pull him out of Ridhima's room. As soon as he's out he hugs Rahul and cries his heart out.
PART:- 13
Swollen eyes, hair messed up and with a fully wrinkled shirt Armaan stood outside her room watching her sleep due to the effect of the sleep injection given to her, through the small window on the door. It had been five hours since Ridhima was on the drip and also since he had cried his heart out seeing her distant behaviour, somehow Rahul managed to calm him down and assure him that she just needed some time to accept things. But how was he to explain this to his heart, the blank look that her eyes held for him would haunt him for the rest of his life and so even though his mind knew that what was happening was the need of the hour yet his heart felt extremely restless. He remembered how she had begged him to not send her here but he had to, he had absolutely no choice and so he had to ignore her pleas and he knew that hurt her, hurt her beyond words but he did it for her dammit...Only and only for her.
Rukh Jindagee Ne Mod Liya Kaisa
Hamne Socha Nahee Tha Kabhee Aisa
Rukh Jindagee Ne Mod Liya Kaisa
Hamne Socha Nahee Tha Kabhee Aisa
Aata Nahee Yakin, Kya Se Kya Ho Gaya
Kis Tarah Mai Tumase Bewafa Ho Gaya
He saw her shift uncomfortably in her sleep and on a reflex stretched out his hand towards her only to be brought back to reality, the reality where he was standing outside because she did not want him around and that very thought brought a tear to his eye. "I am sorry...I am so so sorry Jaan...Kash ek din tum apne Armaan ko maaf Kar pao...Kash he whispered to himself as he wiped the lone tear that slipped of his eye.
Insaaf Kar Do, Mujhe Maaf Kar Do,
Itna Hee Kar Do Karam
Dil De Diya Hai Jaan Tumhe Denge,
Daga Nahee Karenge Sanam
He kept looking at her and couldn't help but once again think about all that had happened in the last few months that unknowingly left such a huge impact on their life...
~FLASHBACK~
It had been a little more then two weeks since Ridhima had fractured her arm and she was now finally getting rid of the cast. Armaan who had come back from work post lunch had accompanied her to the hospital and after getting the cast removed which was a painless and quick process he brought her back home. He gently sat her on the bed of their room and thereafter carefully started arranging cushions beneath her arm to let her rest her hand on it as it was still very numb and a little painful to move. "Comfortable? He asked sitting beside her to which she just nodded with a slight smile. "I am so so happy ki tumhara cast Uttar gaya I know how much of a trouble it was for you but koi nahi ab to its out na now you wont be uncomfortable he said with a wide smile as he caressed her other hand while she just smiled a little and hmmed in response. "Kya baat hai...Why are you so quite, dard to nahi ho raha kahi? Main abhi doctor ko pho... "Nahi...nahi Armaan I am fine, main bilkul theek hoon bas thoda thak gayi hoon... she finally spoke up seeing him get into a panic mode. "Hmm...Ab thak to jaogi na...Itne Dino se theek se soyi nahi ho to you're bound to be tired na...Pata nahi kya kya sochti rehti ho raat baar, just look at yourself you look exhausted he said while shaking his head in a sheer disapproving tone. Off late she had really not been sleeping well and that really got him worried because inspite of such heavy pain-killers she would be up for most of the night and most most often when he caught her he would find her lost in some thought but every-time he would ask her anything she would just say that she was uncomfortable because of the cast and so was not able to sleep and even though he did not believe it completely he had no choice but to just agree with her and after that he would just caress her lovingly till she finally fell asleep. He saw her guiltily looking down at her fingers and decided that it was not the time to question her or scold her because right now she really just needed some sleep. "Khair we will talk about all this later...Abhi tum thodi der sojao... He said as gently helped her lay down and properly tucked her blanket post which he just caressed her head for sometime till he was assured that she was asleep. He then very quietly got up and turned to leave but she instantly held his wrist and opened her eyes at once "Tum...Tum kaha ja rahe ho? she asked almost on the verge of getting up but he held her shoulders and did not let her. "Hey...Relax kya hua? Tum uth kyu gayi...Abhi abhi to neend Ayi thi na he asked taking hold of her hand as he saw her almost panic. "Woh...Woh tum suddenly aise uth gaye na to meri akh khul gayi...Lekin tum...Tum kaha ja rahe ho? I thought you had taken an off for the rest of the day? she spoke trying her best to cover up. "Arey baba kahi nahi Jara woh tum so rahi thi to maine socha thode mails bhej du bas isliye study main ja raha tha...Anyway tum yeh sab chodo aur sojao ab he replied to which she just hmmed but still did not close her eyes and just kept looking at him. "Ridhima...Sone ke liye akhein band Karni padti hai baby...Close your eyes he probed but she just continued to look at him as if he would vanish if she even as much as blinks her eyes. There was something in her eyes that was forcing him to stay back, He couldn't point what exactly it was but it was pretty clear that she did not want him to go and in that split second he decided to do as she wanted because wether she voiced it or not he knew, he knew just what her heart wanted. "You know what...Main soch raha hoon main bhi thodi der sojatu hoon tumhare sath he said removing his tie and opening up the top buttons of his shirt as he climbed on his side of the bed. "Par...Par woh mails jo tumhe bhejni thi she asked turning her head towards him as he gently spooned her body from behind and cocooned her in his arms. "Uhuh kuch zyada important nahi hai they can wait and vaise bhi aaj subha bohot jaldi utha tha so I can really do with a nap right now he said so that she would not know that he had understood her dilemma because clearly she did not want him to know. She said nothing but just looked at him hold her in his arms with eyes closed all ready to sleep "Mujhe bad main dekh lena Jaan abhi sojao he said still with closed eyes making her smile a small but genuine smile this time and soon enough feeling the warmth and secureness that he provided she dozed of in a much needed sleep. He opened his eyes and seeing her finally sleep with that peaceful look on her face he too couldn't help but smile, it had become really a rare scene to see her look so peaceful and though he did not know the reason as to why she had been so restless lately yet just looking at her so calm gave a warm feeling to his heart "I hope and pray ki main yeh Sukoon tumhare chehre par humsehsa dekh sakoon Ridhima...I Love you sweetheart he whispered very slowly and placing a soft kiss on her head he too closed his eyes to catch on some sleep himself.
NOTE: THE FLASHBACK WILL NOT BE FROM EITHER OF THE CHARACTERS PROSPECTIVE AS SUCH (EVEN THOUGH ARMAAN IS THE ONE REMEMBERING IT...) I WILL BE SHOWING ALL THAT HAPPENED IN THE PAST.
A few days had passed and Ridhima was just going through a whirlwind of emotions, most of which she herself did not understand. She would feel extremely empty at most times, she would often get really negative thoughts of being really lonely and having nobody for her and would get severely anxious at the thought of losing Armaan and just kept thinking that he would definitely leave her too and that very thought killed her a thousand times. She would just find some sad memory of her life and would dwell on it for hours without being able to stop herself. She was slowly turning into an insomniac and would hardly sleep for a few hours that too only and only with Armaan around, she had completely lost her appetite because of which she had even started loosing weight, she had also started getting really fidgety and would often get angry at really petty things and would later feel even more annoyed because she knew that there was no reason to be angry in the first place but she couldn't help but feel angry. Armaan had been noticing all these changes but every time he tried talking to her about it she would just brush it off saying that there was too much work to get done and so she was just too occupied in it and even though he knew it was probably more than just that he couldn't deny the fact that what she said was true and so he did not really bother digging further. Ridhima on the other hand couldn't really tell him what she was feeling because she herself was unaware of what exactly she was feeling and why and so what was she supposed to tell him and so she was left all alone to figure out her owm thoughts and feelings all of which seemed to just be completely out of control.
It was a Saturday night and so some of their close friends including Rahul and Muskaan(they are married here) had come over to their place to watch a movie and just chill out for sometime. This was usually Ridhima's favourite way to chill out since their college days, like everyone would insist on going clubbing or something but she would always insist on doing this and so Armaan also felt that it was a good way to let her unwind from all the work stress, little did he know that right now more then unwinding she needed to stop thinking or rather get all those thoughts out of her system...All of them chilled for a while with all the guys taking charge of the snacks while the girls selected the movie. Rahul brought a big bowl of popcorn and before he knew it all the girls attacked on it making him shake his head at them. He then noticed Ridhima sitting quietly on one side and not eating the popcorn at all, rather she looked a little lost. "Arey Ridhima...Kaha khoyi ho? Tumhe popcorn nahi chahiye? Like I am glad that at least you are civilised enough to not jump like a hungry animal and eat it, lekin tum bhi le sakti ho specially now that these girls have calmed down a little he said pointing towards the three girls who were now seated with the half eaten popcorn bowl in the middle. Ridhima just smiled at him a little and before she could say anything Armaan came out holding another bowl of freshly made popcorn "Ridhima isliye nahi kha rahi kyuki she does not eat that flavour...Yeh lijiye madam apka special caramel flavoured popcorn Said Armaan handing her the bowl to which she just a gave a small smile. "Or tu yaha kya Kar raha hai? Chal kitchen main bohot Sara saman Lana hai woh kon layega huh! Said Armaan in a mockingly annoyed tone as he pulled Rahul along with him to the kitchen. After a good fifteen minutes all the snacks were out and lights dimmed as everyone sat with their respective partners ready to finally watch the movie which happened to be something from the drama genre that had just released recently. Armaan who had gone to quickly grab his phone which was charging in their room just came back and sat right beside Ridhima who sat down on the rug that they had placed specially for the movie night, with a blanket warped around her shoulders. Pulling the blanket a little he cuddled in with her placing his arm around her shoulder making her look towards him and smile a small but real smile. "Arey...Tumne abhi tak popcorn nahi khaya apna? Asked Armaan seeing the bowl placed on her lap in which the popcorn was as it is. "uhmm ha woh bas aise hi zyada man nahi Kar raha abhi she replied not exactly looking towards him. "Yeh kaise ho gaya ki Ridhima Malik ko caramel popcorn khane ka man nahi hai? In fact I was almost sure ki tum ab tak pura bowl saaf Kar chuki hogi lekin tumne to hardly kuch khaya hai he asked genuinely surprised as knowing her she could eat a box full of caramel popcorn but here it seemed that she had barely touched the bowl. "Woh...Actually humne abhi kuch dair pehle hi dinner kiya tha na so I am actually very full isliye bas nahi khaya... she said looking at him for a brief second before averting her eyes lest he managed to read through the false facade she tried to put up. "Hmm theek hai, main yahi rakta hoon thodi der baad kha lena okay? He said taking the bowl from her lap and placing it on the side table kept right beside him. "Hmm she replied cuddling closer to him almost hiding her face on his chest as he placed a feather light kiss on hear temple, if only she could tell him that no food not even her own favourites appealed to her anymore and sadly even she did not know why. They were half way through the movie and even Ridhima seemed to have enjoy it till a scene in which the brother of the heroine dies and out of nowhere she was reminded of the time her grandmother passed away. She remembered all the nice moments she had with her and with that came the realisation that those moments were now just captured in her heart and no-more could she actually live them and this very thought made her feel a weird kind of pain in her heart. That thought led her to think about her baby, the baby which she killed for which she was so scared that Armaan would hate her and never forgive her for. She suddenly felt really suffocated in that perfectly ventilated room, she looked around and found all everyone including Armaan deeply engrossed in the movie but she no more could pay attention to it, she suddenly felt so lonely that all she wanted to do was just cry. She tried really hard to distract her mind but nothing seemed to work and a few minutes later she could no longer hold herself and decided to leave from there. "Armaan she whispered lest anyone else gets disturbed. "Huh...haan? He replied turning his face from the movie to have a look at her. "Woh uhmm mere sir mein bohot dard ho raha tha to... "what?Are you okay? aise achanak headache kaise...Tum ruko ill just get a tablet for you he said cutting her in between and almost getting up but she held his hand and stopped him. Thankfully they were seated in the corner and the movie was really good so nobody really heard them. "Na..nahi Armaan davai nahi I guess I am just very tired...Uhmm is it okay agar main thodi der upar Jake rest Kar lu to...bas kuch dair k... "Of course sweetheart is main puchne wali kya baat hai, tumhe bilkul jana chahiye and in fact you should just go to sleep vaise bhi movie Khatam Honi wali hai phir sab chale jayenge... he replied cutting her words once again. "Thank you she replied to which he just shook his head and placed a loving kiss on her head. "Acha chalo ill drop you till the room phir tum change karke araam se so jana okay? He said cupping her right cheek in his one palm. "Na...Nahi Armaan yaha sab hai it..it wont look good agar hum dono hi chale gaye to. You...you don't worry main chali jaungi she said obviously not wanting him to come with her and see her break down at any cost. "You sure you'll manage he asked still a little unsure but she just nodded her head and forced a smile leaving him with no choice but to agree. "I am right here if you need me okay...Love you he whispered giving another kiss on her forehead making he shut her eyes and try even harder to absorb her tears seeing his undying love for her...She quietly got up and went up towards their room while he just sat there watching her go up. Fortunately enough everyone was just too absorbed in the movie and so nobody noticed her go and once that Armaan saw her finally enter their room he too just sighed and turned his face back to the screen though he was now least bit bothered with what was going on as his mind was to worried for Ridhima and even though she had assured him that it was just a headache yet he couldn't seem to be comfortable after knowing that she wasn't feeling well.
As soon as Ridhima reached the room she ran to the washroom and banging the door shut she leaned against the closed and finally let all her tears fall. She recalled a ten year old Ridhima being told that her grandmother, her most trusted person had left her forever "Ridhima Nani Bhagwanji ke pass gayi hai bache...Ab...Ab woh kabhi wapas nahi ayegi... A fresh bout of tears streamed sown her eyes as she slipped down on the cold floor and remembered what a horrid day that was and how lonely she was after that because no matter how many people were around her the person she wanted with her was not there. But then time passed by and came Armaan in her life who managed to shower so much love in her life, he treated her like a princess but then even Nani did right then what happened she left "Agar Armaan bhi... she thought and was once again reminded of the disappointment she had seen in his eyes when he had given her the news of her miscarriage
"Armaan why am I in the hospital????????" Armaan just stood their starring at her does she really not remember that she had taken those sleeping pills "Ridhima how could you even ask me this it, was you who had taken those sleeping pills" he said in a bit surly tone.
This very memory made her cringe in her place. Suddenly she heard a voice and on looking up she found her own shadow right there "Obviously he hates you Ridhima, tune uske bache ko maar dala...apne bache ko maar dala said the shadow while giving her a deadly stare. "Main...main marna nahi chahti thi...Mujh...mujhe yaad bhi nahi stammered Ridhima "Tumhare yaad hone na hone se koi farak nahi padta, Armaan ko to sab yaad hai na and he wont every forgive you for this...Tum dekhna woh chod dega tumhe... said the shadow with a evil grin on her face. "Na..nahi Ar...Armaan nahi...He...he loves me...woh mujhse bohot pyaar karta hai she fumbled trying her best to be confident about what she was saying "Jaise nani karti thi right? The shadow countered question her making Ridhima look up to her eye again. "Get one thing straight Ridhima...Koi tumse pyaar nahi karta Ridhima...Sab chod denge tumhe...AKELE said the shadow and before Ridhima could say anything the shadow vanished leaving a scared and really vulnerable Ridhima crying on the cold bathroom floor. "Na..nahi Ar...Armaan mujhse bohot pyaar karta hai...lekin ba..baby woh baby se bhi to...Na..nahi he he cannot leave me...He has promised me dammit she cried pulling her knees up to her chest. Her thoughts swung from one end of the podium to the other, she kept linking two absolutely different things...She remembered all the times her Nani promised her that she would always be with her and then she remembered the day she left breaking not only her promise but Ridhima's little heart as well. Then she would think of all the times Armaan promised her to always be with her but then again he was somewhere upset that she killed his child. She felt a different kind of heaviness in her heart as she thought about Armaan leaving her. She tried real hard to oppose this thought but nothing seemed to have been working.
That little voice in her head refused to shut up and kept playing in her mind like a Brocken tape-recorder making it almost difficult for her to breathe...
"Obviously he hates you Ridhima, tune uske bache ko maar dala...
"Tumhare yaad hone na hone se koi farak nahi padta, Armaan ko to sab yaad hai na and he wont every forgive you for this...Tum dekhna woh chod dega tumhe...
"Koi tumse pyaar nahi karta Ridhima...Sab chod denge tumhe...AKELE
She pulled her hair in sheer frustration as she could feel her head burst with these thoughts and had fisted her hair real tight feeling frustrated for not being able to stop this mental torture. She was willing to do anything to stop these thoughts because only she knew how much pain it was causing to her heart...Just then her eyes fell on Armaan's razor blade that was neatly placed on the sink counter and out of nowhere thought about how peaceful it would be to be able to not have any thought for a while.
~Pause From Flashback~
Armaan came out of his thoughts when a nurse came to inform him that Rahul wanted to meet him, sighing he looked back at Ridhima one last time and thereafter moved towards Rahul's cabin with a really heavy heart...He reached the cabin and found one more doctor with Rahul. "Armaan, come meet Dr. Anaha Mehra she is a one of the best psychologist we have here Rahul introduced the doctor seeing Armaan enter to which Armaan just nodded his head towards the doctor who in return gave a polite smile. "Armaan aaj se Ridhima ka case yeh handle karengi... "What? Lekin Ridhima ka case to tu hanle Karne wala tha, Rahul you promised me you will be there for her, maine tere bharose use yaha rakha hai aur ab yeh tu... "Armaan relax just listen to me once okay...Relax said Rahul seeing Armaan getting all worked up before even letting him complete. Having no other choice Armaan just asked Rahul to continue "Armaan dekh Ridhima is a close friend of mine it wont even be wrong to say that she is just like a little sister to me, aur isliye main Uska treatment khud nahi Kar sakta which you already know. She herself wont be able to get herself treated by me Armaan Said Rahul trying his best to explain him his point. "Rahul I know that lekin Ridhima...I...I don't know main use yaha isliye chod paya hoon because I know ki tu hai Uska dhyan rakhne ke liye aur ab... "Aur ab bhi main hoon Armaan interrupted Rahul. 'Ridhima ke case abhi bhi mere andar hi rahega, I will be in constant touch about her treatments and progress khali farak Itna hai ki main khud usko treat nahi Kar sakta but I assure you that Dr. Ahana over here is very good at her work, she has a very high success ratio of treating her patients. Aur like I said Ridhima meri behen jaisi hai I will make sure I give her only the best, you know that right? Asked Rahul to which Armaan just nodded lightly, he knew Rahul would always make sure Ridhima is well taken care off but he he couldn't help but be a little worried. "Mr. Malik main apki wife ka Pura khayal rakhungi and I will try my best to not disappoint you in anyway said the young yet confident doctor speaking for the first time in the whole conversation. Armaan looked up at her and somewhere the genuine smile she had forced him to believe her and nodding his head he mumbled a small thank you to her. "Armaan kal se hum Ridhima ka treatment shuru Karne wale hai... said Rahul after a few seconds which made Armaan look up at him with an unknown fear visible in his eyes, this was it now was the true test of how successful his decision of sending her away would prove to be and he just prayed with all his heart that things would workout in their favour. They discussed a few more things regarding the treatment after-which Dr. Ahana left the cabin leaving Armaan and Rahul alone.Rahul saw Armaan rub his forehead and obviously knew how worried he was and to add to it the morning incident, the indifferent behaviour of Ridhima must have surely left him hurt and without a doubt guilty. "Armaan, tu theek hai na? I mean aaj subha... Rahul started but trailed off not knowing what to say to make him feel better. "Pata hai Rahul, Ridhima aur main we have fought a lot in the past tujhe to pata hi hai lekin every time we fought I knew for a fact ki its just a phase and we will sort it out...Par pata nahi kyu is Baar mujhe aisi feeling nahi arahi yaar... said Armaan in a very dejected tone making Rahul sigh deeply. "Armaan tu..Tu aise kyu soch raha hai, dekh I know Ridhima abhi bohot naraz hai but thats just because she is not even able to understand herself right now to woh Teri baat kaha se samjhegi Armaan...You have to understand what she is going through is pretty serious and with the way things were going we had no choice but to take this step Armaan. Humne rather tune jo bhi kiya hai sirf aur sirf usi ke liye kiya hai and trust me when I say this she too would accept this one day aur tu dekhna sab theek hoga...Just have some faith okay? Assured Rahul to which Armaan just nodded his head hoping with all his heart that things would turn out exactly the way Rahul had said. "Can I see her once? I...I promise main use bilkul disturb nahi karunga and ill be out in five minutes...Pls Armaan asked in a hopeful voice after a few seconds. "Armaan...You know its against the rules the visiting hours are over and... "Pls Rahul sirf panch minute she is sleeping right now to main ek Baar use jee bhar ke dekh to sakta hoon once she is awake she wont let me be anywhere near her... said Armaan in a chocked voice as he cut Rahul in between. Rahul looked at his tearful eyes and taking a deep breath in he finally agreed "Okay fine, lekin sirf panch minute not a second more than that Rahul said firmly making Armaan nod with a small but grateful smile and soon got up to go and see Ridhima something that he had been dying to do since God knows when.
He entered the room with utmost silence lest he disturbs her in anyway and very slowly walked towards her bed where she lay fast asleep.He slowly sat down on the small stool kept beside her bed and did nothing but just look at her with moist eyes. He felt a sharp pinch in his heart as he saw her pale face and heavy eye bags, he then looked at her hand which had the IV attached to it and only he knew how bad it pained him to see that.Just seeing her like that made him feel so helpless more so because he knew that it was she who was suffering and that was something that never went well with him. He remembered how she just turned her face away from him when he had come to see her before and couldn't help but once again feel guiltyMain janta hoon tum mujhse bohot naraz ho, bohot dil dukhaya hai maine tumhara...I know par main majboor hoon Ridhima, bohot bohot majboor... He said as a stubborn tear rolled down his cheek while he lightly caressed her head.
Mere Ashk Keh Rahe Meree Kahanee
Inhein Samjho Na Tum Sirf Panee
Mere Ashk Keh Rahe Meree Kahanee
Inhein Samjho Na Tum Sirf Panee
He felt her move a little and instantly stiffened afraid that she would wake up and obviously wouldn't be so happy seeing him there thankfully though she did not wake up and that just made him sigh deeply but at the same time he couldn't help but feel so bad about the fact that he had to meet her like this. He never knew that there would come a time in their life where he would fear her seeing him around her. He remembered the time when she had fractured her wrist after falling down the stair, he was so worried for her and she would just tell him that as long as he is with her she would always be okay...Main to aaj bhi yahi hoon Ridhima, Tumhara Armaan tumhare pass hi hai...Bas tum hi khafa ho use he said choking on his words as he lightly held her hand in his.
Ro Ro Ke Aansuo Ke Daag Dhul Jaayenge
Inn Me Wafa Ke Rang Aaj Ghul Jaayenge
Paas Tum Rahogee Bhul Abb Na Hogee,
Karunga Na Tumpe Sitam
He heard a light knock on the door and found the nurse who had come to tell him that he had to leave and though he did not want to , he knew he had to. "I promise you sweetheart main bohot jald tumhe yaha se le jaunga. Sab theek ho jayega Ridhima...Sab kuch he whispered placing a light kiss on her hair as another lone tear escaped his eye. He gave her one last longing look and thereafter without once turning back lest he breaks down there itself he walked out of the room.
Dil De Diya Hai Jaan Tumhe Denge,
Daga Nahee Karenge Sanam
-Tanishka (Tani)
NOTE: Hi guys! So first of all a big big BIG sorry for the extremely long wait (I hope you guys still remember the story though) but well I was really busy so *Hides Face*
Second I hope you guys like the part and sincerely hope to get some feedback (as long as its productive good or bad doesn't matter) which will also be a measure for me to decide if you guys are interested in the story further or not.
Hi Tani
This part was so amazingly done.
I miss being here and reading the stories.
It's since ages I had been here.
I need to catch up on the OS you shared.
I love this part by the way. It left my eyes wet.
I hope sb acha ho aage please zaldi se update kro or btao kya hoga aage .
You have done an amazing and marvellous job with the way story is progressing.
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Hahah...NO issues I know it had been forever since I updated and also the story was getting a little emotional but I can only say to pls hold on cuz you never know when the storyline changes ;)
Thank you for the lovely comment and for all the love you have shown for the story and also for me <3
Originally posted by: RihooHawsres
Unres...heehee sorry for taking sometimes but I forgot the story so I had to read from starting...
I remember reading first few updates but it turn to be very emotion to me so I had to take a break...
My mind wasn't too strong at that moment to read something so emotional and heart-wrenching...
Now back to the update, it really was very emotional and heartbreaking...
Armaan is suffering so much, being away from his love but whatever he was doing was for his love...
He wants Riddhima to get over with her fear and never try to harm herself...
U described their emotions and feelings so deeply, it touched my heart...
Now Riddhima is upset with Armaan for sending her away, it was her fear that he might leave her just the way her grandmother and baby had left...
She had still didn't understand why she had taken those medicine which make her had the miscarriage...
She was so happy with the news but she never remember which make her take those pills...
Riddhima always had this fear that people who are close to her heart might leave her...
Like her grandmother, she thinks Armaan would also leave after how many times he tell her, he would always stay by her side...
So to get her over with the fear, after so much happening in their life now Armaan had decide to get her treated properly...
Which make Riddhima very upset and not want to open up in front of him with her feelings and emotions...
Just like she had been doing whenever she felt insecure and scared of being left alone...
Hope the treatment would make Riddhima better so Armaan could take her back with him soon...
Love it and love u more...
Continue super soon...
take care :D
Amazing, awesome and superb part...
Very emotional and heart-wrench...
Hehe only you can tell me how small a part is :p But I am glad you liked it *shy is coming*
The hospital scene was my favourite too *hides face*...Haha de Diya update, finally :p
Thank you ji for the credit cuz well you to surely know how this updates have been for me <3
Originally posted by: Jennifer_GroverI know m late , but well m sure you are well aware of the reasons so sholly!
Instantly moving on to the part, the first thing I had like to tell you very prominently is: It was sooo SMALL!!!😔 MATLAB shuru hone se pehle hi khatam ho Gaya, aise thodi HOTA hai Though as I said I was a lil lost beech mein, buttt the part was fabuolusss. It was such an emotional roller coaster. And undoubtedly that hospital scene, where he asks for those 5 min whole she's asleep, it was a winner! I feel so bad ki Yaar why don't you talk to him, just tell him chup chap se na, but then again I can understand it's her psychological state that's really not helping. She's not able to understand how she's herself worsening the situation by not taking, us mein he had also sent her away toh ab well...
But listen please do write soon and update sooner. Ek toh itna sa part you gave. So please update soon eagerly waiting
P.S: Though m still eagerly waiting for the next part, but I know how you took time and updated the part while you were askady having so much on mind, so kudos to you for that. Itna credit toh banta hi hai, so take it , but only enjoy it for a while and update again soon ok. Loveee you hehehe 😉😛
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