Mera bhi res.
I am so damn excited!
Unres
Oh my god! This is so f**king deep. 😳
First of all, Congratulation for the story! I am so happy you are finally back writing. 😳 don't you dare leave this in the middle. 😆
You know I had to google what the title meant. 😆 its mean longing in German. You are freaking genius. 😳
The starting is so powerful! It has such a strong impact.
It blew away my mind.
And I really admire you writing the piece in second person. I could never do that.
The prologue gives a mysterious vibes and just grips you. I couldn't keep this down until I had read the whole thing.
I really like the way of writing.
The girl probably has a really bad past. 🥱
I really do feel for her.
The guy is a jerk. If I am guessing right, he's the one right? 😉😆
And I think there are two going by the banner.
Does the girl suffer from some kind of anxiety attack? Well I guess we will know it soon.
Can you do something Mou? Since you writing this in second person could you give the character names so that readers know who they are reading about. 😳
I love the quote, the monster are not under your bed, its in you one! I am saving this in my mind.
This is so good. Please continue soon.
And this story is going to give a tough competition to all the others. 😉
Btw the banner is beautiful. I can not stop staring at it. The maker must be good, I wanna kiss her hands. 🤣
Okay so now continue soon.
Love you a lot!
And all the best for the contest!
Sam
Edited by MsChanadlerBong - 5 years ago
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