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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice update yaar 
So much in single part... 
U r multitlaneted u have joined pics and wrote songs to suit the situation 
Finally behir and vishtab formed a pair 
But now the real twist wherein both are shocked to know about vishir engagement 
Waiting eagerly for further story 
Do update soon..  
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Posted: 5 years ago
superb update! well written! thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 5 years ago
Awesome update dear👏!!! VishTabh didn't go for d trip as they wanted to do some important work... BeHir went for d trip together😳... BeHir moments😳❤️... Mahir lifter Bela in his hands😉... Aww... Ajitabh saved Vish from d main killer... VishHir decided to confess their love to Bela n Ajitabh... They decided not to tell about their engagement soon... BeHir confession❤️... Vish's peck😉... Oh at d theatre a woman enquired about VishHir wedding... Bela n Ajitabh got shocked... Loved it to d core dear... Eagerly waiting for next part... Thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 5 years ago
It is beautiful. I like the way you add songs to match the scenes.
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Posted: 5 years ago
Fantastic and so Fabulous Chapter 
I totally enjoyed this part 
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Posted: 5 years ago

Fun filled chapter...
laughing and teasing
to romantic..
all good
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Beautiful...
nice song.. lovely and romantic...
interesting update 👍🏼
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Posted: 5 years ago
aww thanks for dedicating the update to me! 🤗

the update was really interesting! I really liked how you used pics to show Behir Loved the confession and the plot twist in the end😆

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Posted: 5 years ago
Thank u very much friends 4 the lovely comments

Ahista .. Slowly.. Part 4

Dedicated to Mansi who wants Vikrant Ruhi scene.Dedicated to _nakshi_ who ave a new name for Mahir Vish-VishIr.Dedicated to Saniya Fathima who is waiting eagerly for the new chapter.
Edit credit goes to the real editors



Bela and Ajitabh stared at Vishaka and Mahir.
Ajitabh:Is it true?Ramonaji..please say that it's false.I trust you completely.
Mahir and Vishaka were upset.
Vish:It's true.
They were shocked and shattered.
Bela:Means you both are going to get married.
Ajitabh:You both are not just best friends but lovers too.
Bela:Then why did you both do this love drama with us?
Mahir:Bela..it was not a drama.Our love is true.

Ajitabh:Ramonaji...I trusted you blindly.But you betrayed me breaking my heart into pieces.I was your time pass.
Vish:Please don't say like that Ajitabh.You are misunderstanding us.


Bela:Why did you both choose we brother and sister for time pass?Now enough.We are ending our relationship here.I don't want to see your face again Mahir.


Mahir and Vishaka were shocked.
Mahir:Please don't say like that Bela.

Vish:Ajitabh...we will talk and sort out.
Ajitabh:Now what is left to talk ACP Vishaka Khanna?I can't even avoid your face till our case finishes.Now onwards we will be just 2 co-workers who will have only a professional relationship.
Vishaka's heart was pierced.
Bela and Ajitabh left without listening to them.All 4 of them cried.




Paas aaye
Dooriyaan phir bhi kam naa hui
Ek adhuri
Si hamari kahani rahi
Aasmaan ko zameen
Ye zaroori nahi
Jaa mile, jaa mile
Ishq saccha wahi
Jisko milti nahi
Manzilein, manzilein
Rang thhe, noor tha
Jab kareeb tu tha
Ek jannat sa tha, yeh jahaan
Waqt ki ret pe
Kuch mere naam sa
Likh ke chhod gaya, tu kahaan
[Hamari adhuri kahani
Hamari adhuri kahani] (Repeat once)
Khushbuon se teri
Yunhi takra gaye
Chalte chalte
Dekho na
Hum kahaan aa gaye
Jannatein agar yahin
Tu dikhe kyon nahin
Chaand suraj sabhi hai yahaan
Intezar tera
Sadiyon se kar raha
Pyaasi baithi hai kab se yahaan
[Hamari adhuri kahani
Hamari adhuri kahani] (Repeat once)

Pyaas ka ye safar
Khatam ho jayega
Kuch adhura sa jo tha
Poora ho jayega


Jhuk gaya aasmaan
Mill gaye do jahaan
Har taraf hai milan ka samaa
Doliya hain saji
Khushbuein har kahin
Padhne aaya khuda khud yahaan
[Hamari adhuri kahani
Hamari adhuri kahani](Hamari adhuri kahani).




Vikrant took Ruhi to a restaurant.The table was arranged with her favourite dishes.
Ruhi:Wow Vikrant.
She started eating like crazy.
Vikrant smiled seeing her childishness while eating.
Vikrant:You look so cute Ruhi.
Ruhi blushed.
Both finished the dinner.
Ruhi:Thank you so much Vikrant for tis lovely dinner date.
Vikrant:No need of thanking me for such silly things Ruhi.This is nothing.A whole life is left for us.I will shower you with love.
Ruhi smiled:You are so loving Vikrant.I don't need costly gifts or foreign trips or anything like that.I just need  your love.
Vikrant:That will be always there for you Ruhi.That's the only thing I know..to just love you.
Ruhi looked at him emotionally.

They embraced each other.
Vikrant:Can I tell you something Ruhi?You look ravishing in this saree.So beautiful.
Ruhi blushed.

They went for a drive.It started raining.Suddenly Ruhi removed her forehead accessory.
Vikrant:What are you upto Ruhi?
Ruhi:Please stop the car Vikrant.I want to enjoy the rain..with you..
He smiled.
Both got out of the car.
They stood in the rain feeling its coolness  which had a romantic feeling.
Vikrant was lost in his wet beauty Ruhi.He held her closer caressing her sensually. Ruhi was lost in him.
Slowly they started dancing in the romantic rain with sensuousness.

Tip-tip barsaa paani
Tip-tip barsaa paani

Paani ne aag lagaayi
Aag lagi dil mein to
Dil ko teri yaad aayi
Teri yaad aayi to
Jal uthaa mera bheega badan
Ab tum hi batao sajan
Main kya karu

Naam tera mere labon pe aayaa tha
Naam tera mere labon pe aayaa tha
Ho maine bahaane se tumhe bulaaya tha
Jhoom kar aa gayaa saavan main kya karu

Tip-tip barsaa paani
Paani ne aag lagaayi
Aag lagi dil mein to
Dil ko teri yaad aayi
Teri yaad aayi to
Jal uthaa mera bheega badan
Ab tum hi batao sajan
Main kya karu

Duubaa dariyaa mein
Khadaa main saahil par
Duubaa dariyaa mein
Khadaa main saahil par
Tu bijali bankar giri mere dil par
Chali aaisi yeh paagal
Pavan main kya karu

Tip-tip barsaa paani
Paani ne aag lagaayi
Aag lagi dil mein
Jo toh dil ko teri yaad aayi
Teri yaad aayi to chha gaya
Mujhpe deewanapan
Mere bas mein nahi
Mera mann main kya karu.


(Mohra).


Bela was looking at the moon with a sad face.Suddenly she saw Mahir near her.
Bela was surprised:Mahir..

Tum milo roz hi
Magar hai yeh baat bhi
Mere hona aahista aahista
Mere hona aahista aahista


He held her closer romantically.They got lost in each other.

Tum mere ho rahe...
Ya ho gaye
Ya hai faasla
Puche dil toh kahun main kya bhala
Dil sawaalon se hi na de rula
Hota kya hai aahista aahista
Hona kya hai aahista aahista





Suddenly Bela realized that it was only her imagination.
Bela cried:This was only my illusion.Even our love was only an illusion.Everything is so fake.

Ajitabh was looking at his and Vishaka's cute photograph.


He threw it painfully.But he realized that it was not broken.
He thought:Does that mean our relationship is not meant to be broken?No..no need of any hope.
I was only a tissue paper for Vishaka.She is going to marry Mahir.

Days passed...

Though Vishaka tried to talk to Ajitabh he did not listen to her.

Mahir saw Bela and walked after her.It was raining heavily.
Mahir:Bela...please listen to me.
Bela:Mahir...I said I don't want to listen to you.
He pulled her closer harshly.
They looked at each other with aggression and passion.

Doori ye kam hi na ho
Main neendon mein bhi chal raha
Hota hai kal bewafa
Ye aata nahin, chhal raha...


Mahir:You have to listen to me Bela.
Bela:Leave me.
Mahir:I will leave you only after you hear me.

It's true that Vish and I got engaged.But not because we love each other but because our parents forced us as we are best friends.But later we both met you and Ajitabh and fell in love unknowingly.

For a moment Bela got melted hearing that Mahir fell in love with her and looked at him emotionally.

Laakh waade jahaan ke jhoothe hain
Log aadhe jahaan ke jhoothe hain
Mere hona ahista ahista...
Mere hona ahista ahista...





Mahir:We both were planning to tell the truth to our parents and you people.But before that itself the truth came in front of you like this.

Bela:What a story cooked up by you!
Mahir:Oh no..don't be so foolish Bela.You are blind to the truth.

Bela:I was foolish till now.But not again.

They shared a painful eye lock.


Maine baat ye tumse kehni hai
Tera pyaar khushi ki tehni hai

Main shaam sehar ab hansta hoon
Maine yaad tumhari pehni hai
Mere hona aahista aahista...
Hota kya hai aahista aahista
Hona kya hai aahista aahista(
Laila Majnu).


Bela pushed him and walked off.
Mahir:Once you will understand how much I love you.But it may be too late.

Ajitabh and Vishaka with other cops went to the location where the killer is traced out.
The masked killer tried to run away but Ajitabh caught him.Vish tore his mask and his face was revealed.
Vish:As we guessed it's Rajveer.
Suddenly Rajveer pushed them and shot Ajitabh.All were shocked.
Vish screamed:Ajitabh!
Ajitabh:Catch Rajveer.He should not escape this time.


The cops caught Rajveer though he tried to escape and took him to the jail.
Vish was shattered:Ajitabh...nothing will happen to you.
Ajitabh:Even if anything happens to me I am alright Vishaka.It's better to die than to live with the pain of betrayal.
Vish shed tears:How will I make you understand how much I love you?


Vishaka called the ambulance and took him to hospital.
Mahir was there to console Vishaka.
Bela who reached there blasted at Vishaka:Now you are happy,Right?Like you wished my brother will go away from your path forever.
Vishaka:Stop it.Being my best friend you think such bad things about me?Is this our friendship?Here I am worried about my Ajitabh.Can't you see it?
Vishaka was going crazy.


Bela:You both only spoiled our friendship by betrayal.Don't say that Ajitabh bhaiyya is yours
Vish.You lost your right on him because of your cruel betrayal.
Mahir:Stop it Bela.It's not the time to fight.
Bela walked away angrily.


The operation was successful and Ajitabh became alright.All were very happy.Vishaka tried to enter the room to see Ajitabh.
Bela blocked the way:Never dare to go near my bhaiyya.If he sees you again his health will become worse.Your case is over and I don't want you and my bhaiyya to come face to face in any way.


Vishaka was shattered.
Mahir:Bela..don't be so cruel.
Bela:Oh really?You both were cruel to us while betraying us.Then why can't I behave like this?

Bela:Vish..no need to show fake concern to my bhaiyya.Just leave.
Vishaka walked off tearfully.Mahir stared at Bela:You will regret.
Mahir ran after Vishaka.

Vishaka was in tears.
Vishaka:Bela was my dearest friend.But she did'nt even allow me to get a glimpse of Ajitabh.
Mahir suppressed his pain and said:Stop crying Vish.We tried our level best to make Bela amd Ajitabh understand the truth.But if they are not willing to even listen to us what can we do?What is the use of shedding tears for them?Don't cry for those stone- hearted people.
Vish:Mahir..I know that you too have pain.How can you be so bold?


Mahir:Because by shedding tears we won't get our love back.They will even say that our tears are fake.
Vish:You are right.
Vish was very upset.
Mahir:Vish..now no one will say that you are a daring ACP.You are behaving like a daily soap heroine.
Vishaka smiled:Mahir...
They both giggled.
Vish:You never fail to make me laugh.
Mahir:How can I not make you smile?After all you are my best friend.
Vishaka smiled emotionally.


Bela held Ajitabh's hand and wept:Bhaiyya...I got scared whether I will lose you.Thank God you are fine.


Ajitabh:When your prayer is there with me how will I be not fine?
The nurse:Where is your wife?
Ajitabh:Wife?
Nurse:Yes..your wife Vishaka who brought you here.She only donated blood for your operation.Her blood is running in your vein.The operation was successful as your wife donated blood to you on time.
Ajitabh and Bela could not believe it.
The nurse went out.
Bela:Bhaiyya...I had met Mahir.He told me that they got engaged as their parents forced them and not because they love each other.I did not believe it.But now I doubt if Mahir was saying the truth.
Ajitabh felt guilty:Vishaka tried to talk to me about it.But I did'nt care.Now I wish I should have listened to her to know the truth.

Bela:Bhaiyya..did we do any mistake by ignoring Mahir and Vish?
Ajitabh felt upset.
Ajitabh:Does Vishaka love me truly?If she does'nt love me why should she donate her own blood and save me?
Ajitabh and Bela shed tears silently.



Edited by jasminerahul - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
What an update 👏👏 just no words. But this is not fair you leave at cliffhanger at end always 😭. Poor Bela Ajitabh were in shock knowing their respective lovers relation status though it was not fully true. Surprised both accused Vish Mahir for cheating them and use for time pass (felt little harsh here). None of them are fully wrong or right here, all had their reasons to hide and get frustrated. Mahir cornering Bela aggressively to listen him was passionate and intense 😳 again she did not believe him. Vish doing same to Ajitabh but he did not listen. Shocking Ajitabh got shot, loved Vish's care for him 😉. Bela was quite rude as well for not letting her see Ajitabh felt bad for Mahir Vish as well. Their scene was cute trying to be each other's support. Thank god finally bro sis duo understood their better halve's POV hope both couple reconcile soon. Don't make me wait more now update soon 😊