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Posted: 5 years ago
wooah this is just too good! I had a really good laugh reading it, really enjoyed it. Do update soon! I love love how you added pictures as well

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Vishaka was in deep pain.
Ajitabh smiled:I will show you who I am.




This part was hilarious! Ajitab and Vish's reactions in this edit and your lines🀣

And the introduction of Vik-Ruhi, together with the picture as their engagement was hilarious too!🀣
Edited by Maria.Jewel - 5 years ago
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Congratulations on your TS 

Mind Blowing Start 
the characters are all very interesting 
lovely vibrant pics 
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Thanks a lot 4 the awesome response


Ahista .. Slowly.. Part 2


Dedicated to abhiya23 who is waiting for the update


The credit 4 the edit goes to the real editors



Vikrant and Ruhi exchanged rings and posed for photographs.

Vikrant and Ruhi gave a sensuous dance performance.

Hai Rama Ye Kya Hua Kyon Aise Humein Sataane Lage
Tum Itni Pyaari Ho Saamne Hum Kaabu Mein Kaise Rahein
Jaao Humko To Aati Sharam Hai
Teri Aisi Ada Pe To Fida Hum Hain



Hai Rama Ye Kya Hua Kyon Aise Humein Sataane Lage
Tum Itni Pyaari Ho Saamne Hum Kaabu Mein Kaise Rahein
Jaao Humko To Aati Sharam Hai
Teri Aisi Ada Pe To Fida Hum Hain


Tauba Meri Tauba Ab Kya Sitamb Hai
Kaise Zidd Karne Lage
Jaane Tumne Kya Kya Socha Aage Aage
Hum To Ab Darrne Lage
Arre Socha Hai Yehi Raat Aur Din
Tujhe Pyaar Karenge Hum
Darrte Ho Kyon O Jaaneman
Mere Pyaar Se


Hai Rama Ye Kya Hua Kyon Aise Humein Sataane Lage
Tum Itni Pyaari Ho Saamne Hum Kaabu Mein Kaise Rahein
Jaao Humko To Aati Sharam Hai
Teri Aisi Ada Pe To Fida Hum Hain

Hai Rama Ye Kya Hua Kyon Aise Humein Sataane Lage
Tum Itni Pyaari Ho Saamne Hum Kaabu Mein Kaise Rahein
Jaao Humko To Aati Sharam Hai
Teri Aisi Ada Pe To Fida Hum Hain


Kaali Kaali Zulfein Gori Gori Baahein
Mujhko Tadpaane Lagin
Honth Bheege Bheege Nasheeli Ye Aankhein
Pyaas Ko Jagaane Lagin
Chhodo Na Aisi Baaton Ko
Kyon Kaun Raahon Ko
Modo Na Meri Baahon Ko
Jaane Do Na

Hai Rama Ye Kya Hua Kyon Aise Humein Sataane Lage
Tum Itni Pyaari Ho Saamne Hum Kaabu Mein Kaise Rahein
Jaao Humko To Aati Sharam Hai
Teri Aisi Ada Pe To Fida Hum Hain


Hai Rama Ye Kya Hua Kyon Aise Humein Sataane Lage
Tum Itni Pyaari Ho Saamne Hum Kaabu Mein Kaise Rahein
Jaao Humko To Aati Sharam Hai
Teri Aisi Ada Pe To Fida Hum Hain.(Rangeela)

Dance masti was about to start.
They provided clothes to those who wanted to dance.
Bela came wearing a off shoulder gown.Mahir was mesmerized by her beauty.
Mahir:Bela...may I dance with you?
She smiled nodding.
They started dancing.


Woh rang bhi kya rang hai
Milta na jo tere hoth ke rang se hubahu

Woh khushboo kya khushboo
Thehre na jo teri saanwari zulf ke rubaru

Tere aage ye duniya hai pheeki si
Mere bin tu na hogi kisi ki bhi
Ab ye zaahir sar-e-aam hai, elaan hai
Jab tak jahaan mein subah shaam hai
Tab tak mere naam tu

Jab tak jahaan mein mera naam hai
Tab tak mere naam tu (x2)



Vishaka thought:Can't this ACP Ajitabh come and ask me for dance?Can't he see me standing alone?
Ajitabh came near her:Ramonaji...shall we dance together?

Vishaka became very happy as Ajitabh did what she wished for.But she showed attitude.
Vishaka:Usually I dance with Mahir.But since Mahir is dancing with Bela today I will dance with you.

Ajitabh fumed in jealousy thinking:Oh I am her 2nd choice.

Ajitabh and Vishaka started dancing together.

Uljhan bhi hoon teri
Uljhan ka hal bhi hoon main
Thoda sa ziddi hoon
Thoda pagal bhi hoon main
Barkha bijli baadal jhoothe
Jhoothi phoolon ki saugatein
Sacchi tu hai saccha main hoon
Sacchi apne dil ki baatein

Dastkhat haathon se haathon pe kar de tu
Naa kar aankhon pe palkon ke parde tu
Kya ye itna bada kaam hai, elaan hai



Ajitabh:Is Mahir your lover?
Vishaka started laughing:Mahir..my lover?No way.We are best friends.
Ajitabh was relieved.
Ajitabh:I thought so.You both do not look like lovers in any way.
Vishaka smiled.

She thought:Our parents failed to understand that.

Mahir looked at Bela deeply.


Mahir:You know Bela..you look very beautiful now.
Bela blushed.

Bela:You are also looking good Mahir.
He smiled.


Jab tak jahaan mein subah shaam hai
Tab tak mere naam tu
Jab tak jahaan mein mera naam hai
Tab tak mere naam tu (x2)
Mere hi ghere mein ghoomegi har pal tu aise
Sooraj ke ghere me rehti hai dharti ye jaise
Paayegi tu khudko na mujhse judaa
Tu hai mera aadha sa hissa sadaa
Tukde kar chaahe khaabon ke tu mere
Tootenge bhi toh rehne hain woh tere
Tujhko bhi toh ye ilhaam hai
Elaan hai...

-zero



Andy:Is there any rule that only youngsters can dance?We can also dance.

Sumitra blushed:Andy...

He took her to the dance floor and started dancing.



Ishq shava
Mushq shava
Khushamdeed-e-marhaba
Ishq shava.. (Haye)
Mushq shava.. (Haye)
Khushamdeed.. (Haye)-e-marhaba
Mila mila mila mila aankh mila
Laga laga laga laga aag laga
Zara zara zara zara paas toh aa
Khushamdeed-e-marhaba
Ishq shava..
Mushq shava..
Ishq shava.. (Haye)
Mushq shava.. (Haye)
Khushamdeed (Haye)-e-marhaba
Haye
Shauq hai shock se lagne ka
Saans mein saans uljha toh zara..
Aaj ki raate kiski hai
Kal ki raat teri na meri
Chaand utha chal toss kare
Chehra tera..
Aur chaal meri
Ishq shava..
Mushq shava..
Ishq shava.. (Haye)
Mushq shava.. (Haye)
Khushamdeed-e-marhhaba
Mila mila mila mila aankh mila
Laga laga laga laga aag laga
Zara zara zara zara paas toh aa
Khushamdeed-e-marhaba
Ishq shava.. (Haye, haye)
Mushq shava.. (Haye)
Dil dariya hai rukta nahi
Paani pe chal ke
Dekh zara
Baadalon pe paanv rakho kabhi
Unme zameen nahi hoti
Dil ki hardil pe had hogi
Koi laqeer..
Nahi hoti hai
Ishq shava.. (Haye aa aa.. haye)
Mushq shava.. (Aa aa..)
Ishq shava.. (Haye)
Mushq shava.. (Haye)
Khushamdeed-e-marhhaba
Mila mila mila mila aankh mila
Laga laga laga laga aag laga
Zara zara zara zara paas toh aa
Khushamdeed-e-marhaba
Ishq shava.. (Haye)
Mushq shava.. (Haye) (Repeat 4 times)
Aaw..( Jab Tak Hai Jaan).


Ajitabh and Vishaka were discussing about the case in the police station.

Unknowingly they eyes got locked onto each others.

Aahista aahista
Mujhe yakeen ho gaya
Aahista aahista
Yeh dil yahin kho gaya

Yun gira gira hai chand ya
Teri hai roshni
Yun udi udi si hai zameen
Aahista



They both came back to senses and got embarrassed.



Ho... ho...ho...
Hua yeh pehli baar
Ho...ho...ho..
Mujhe ho gaya hai pyaar
Ho... ho...ho...
Hua yeh pehli baar
Ho...ho...ho..
Mujhe ho gaya hai pyaar


They both concentrated on their work.


After a few days...

Vishaka and Mahir came to Bela's house.
Vish:Where is this Bela?
She peeped into a room thinking that it's Bela's room while Mahir went to Bela's room.
Suddenly Ajitabh came out of the bathroom in bathroom.Seeing her he was stunned and embarrassed.
Vish felt like laughing seeing him like this.


Dekh loon yeh khwab main
Ke raaton mein tu aa key eh kahega
Ke tu ji rahi hai meri zindagi
Sochi kya baat hai
Yeh ankhon se tu dheere se sunega
Kyun na rok loon main yeh din yahin


Ajitabh:Why are you here Ramonaji?Are you not ashamed to enter a young man's room while he is bathing.

Vish:How will i know that you were bathing?
She went near him.He became nervous.

Kissi se bhi na
Kahenge hum na
Yahin pe kho jayenge


He shivered:Ramonaji...

Yun gira gira hai chand ya
Teri hai roshni
Yun udi udi si hai zameen
Aahista




Vish:Oh..for God's sake don't be scared and shy like girls.Don't forget that you are a police officer.I am not going to molest you seeing you in this bathrobe.What is the need to be shy like this?You are not a girl to be shy when somebody sees you in bathrobe.
Ajitabh was embarrassed.

Ho... ho... ho...
Hua yeh pehli bar
Ho...ho..ho...
Mujhe ho gaya hai pyaar


Vish:Actually Mahir and I are thinking of a small picnic.You and Bela also join us.
Ajitabh:Sure.Why not?
Vishaka smiled.


Mujhse ik pal mila
Yeh lamhe saare sab se chuppa lo
Teri jo kahani suna chala


Ajitabh:To spend quality time with you I can come for any picnic.

Aur uss pal mein hi
Tum aa ke mujhe apna bana lo
Mujhko mera har ik kal mila


Vish:You said something?
Ajitabh lied:No nothing.
Vish:But why do i feel that you said something sweet.
Ajitabh was embarrassed and was blushing too:No no..
Vishakha smirked.

Phoolon ka hum na
Le ke bichauga
Khwabon mein kho jayenge


They both smiled.

Yun gira gira hai chand ya
Teri hai roshni
Yun udi udi si hai zameen
Aahista


Vish:I will search for Bela.You wear some clothes.Don't stand here without clothes like beggars.
Ajitabh:What?

Ho... ho...ho...
Hua yeh pehli baar
Ho...ho...ho..
Mujhe ho gaya hai pyaar


Vishaka left the room smirking at him.
He smiled:This Ramonaji...

Aahista aahista
Mujhe yakeen ho gaya
Aahista aahista
Yeh dil yahin kho gaya-
Bachna Ae Haseeno


Mahir:Where is Bela?
Suddenly he saw Bela opening the bathroom door and screaming.
Mahir:What happened Bela?
Bela:A cockroach in the bathroom.She rushed to him and hugged him in fear.


Hmm...
Pal ek pal mein hi tham sa gaya
Tu haath mein haath jo de gaya
Chalun main jahaan jaaye tu
Daayein main tere, baayein tu
Hoon rut main, hawayein tu
Saathiya...



He smiled and embraced her.

Hansu main jab gaaye tu
Roun main murjhaaye tu
Bheegun main barsaaye tu
Saathiya...



He caressed her.

Saaya mera hai teri shakal
Haal hai aisa kuch aajkal
Subah main hoon tu dhoop hai
Main aaina hoon tu roop hai
Yeh tera saath khoob hai
Humsafar...





Mahir:Don't worry.It must have gone by now.
Suddenly she looked at him:By the way why are you in my room?

Mahir:Vish and I came here to invite you and Ajitabh for the picnic we are planning.
Bela:That's a good idea.We will surely join you guys.
He smiled.
Bela:Let me go to the bathroom.
Mahir:Ok..
Suddenly she slipped and fell in Mahir's arms.
They shared a romantic eye lock.

Saaya mera hai teri shakal
Haal hai aisa kuch aajkal
Subah main hoon tu dhoop hai
Main aaina hoon tu roop hai
Yeh tera saath khoob hai
Humsafar...


Mahir released her.She went to the bathroom.
Suddenly Mahir got a scream and went inside.He saw Bela in the bathtub.
Bela:When i was standing here I saw the cockroach again.In that fear when I moved I slipped into the bathtub.
Mahir:It's ok Bela.
He extended his hand towards her.Bela was about to hold it.But suddenly because of the slippery floor he too fell into the pool.
Bela:Oh you too fell.

Both tried to get up,

but again they fell.

Mahir:What a mess!Cockroach left.But we got trapped.

They both laughed.Mahir got mesmerized by her sweet laughter.

Tu ishq ke saare rang de gaya
Phir kheench ke apne sang le gaya
Kahin pe kho jaaye chal
Jahaan ruk jaaye pal
Kabhi naa phir aaye kal
Saathiya...




Unknowingly they shared an eye lock.

Ek maange agar sau khwaab doon
Tu rahe khush, main aabad hoon
Tu sabse juda juda sa hai
Tu apni tarah tarah sa hai
Mujhe lagta nahi hai tu doosra







Pal ek pal mein hi tham sa gaya
Tu haath mein haath jo de gaya
Chalun main jahaan jaaye tu
Daayein main tere, baayein tu
Hoon rut main, hawayein tu
Saathiya...






Hansu main jab gaaye tu
Roun main murjhaaye tu
Bheegun main barsaaye tu
Saathiya... ho... mm...
mmm...
-jalebi.



After a lot of struggle they both got up and came out of the bathroom.In search of Bela,
Vishaka reached her room.She was stunned to see Mahir and Bela wet.
Vish:What is this?

Mahir explained the whole thing and the trio ended up laughing.
Ajitabh came dressed up.
He saw Mahir and Vishaka touching their mother Anushree's feet..then Vishaka serving her food.
He smiled and went near them.


Anushree:These 2 friends of you and Bela are so nice Aji...
Ajitabh smiled,so as Mahir and Vishaka.
Ajitabh:Thank you Ramonaji..
Vishaka:Why?

Yun gira gira hai chand ya
Teri hai roshni

Ajitabh:Maa is sick for a long time.You served her food and she became so happy and smiled after a long time.
She smiled:Your mother is just like my mother.

Yun udi udi si hai zameen
Aahista


He smiled happily.She smiled at him.


Ho... ho...ho...
Hua yeh pehli baar
Ho...ho...ho..
Mujhe ho gaya hai pyaar

Mahir told Bela:Your mother is so sweet.
Bela smiled:I saw you chatting and joking with her.I felt nice.
Mahir:She is your mother.Why I need to be formal with her?That's why.
She smiled.

Pal ek pal mein hi tham sa gaya
Tu haath mein haath jo de gaya
Chalun main jahaan jaaye tu
Daayein main tere, baayein tu
Hoon rut main, hawayein tu
Saathiya...
-Jalebi.


Edited by jasminerahul - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
Thank you for this great appreciation πŸ˜Š. Dance sequence were romantic Ruhi Vik, Ajitabh Vish part was funny, her giving attitude to him πŸ˜†. Bela Mahir part was cool as well loved them but not more than Ajitabh Vish πŸ˜‰. Small Andy Sumi scene was cute, I personally feel both have good chemistry to be developed in show but guess its too late by now. Police station scene of Vish Aji was cool. Mahir Vish at Bela Ajitabh house was surprising. Hilarious scene of our Ramona and Ajitabh same one as I saw in show as well πŸ˜†. FF and episode one was damn funny just could not stop watching. Aha again another Behir romantic  scene of bathtub, Nice to see them bonding with Bela's mom. I am so excited for picnic part😊 can't wait anymore please update soon now πŸ˜³
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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice one
The song selection was great
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Posted: 5 years ago
splendid update! well written! 

thanks for the pm! 
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First of all sorry for late comments 
And coming to the update the first thing to be appreciable is that u gave space for every character equally 
Behir romantic dance and mahir feels Bela is beautiful and good looking now.. 
U posted pics of everything in detail such that we can be imaginative πŸ˜ƒ
So mahir Bela Vish and ajitabh are finding interest between them... 
And now it's picnic time and all 4 were ready to enjoy and I am ready for cute moments... 
Not to forget Vish gesture for mahirs mom is impressive and I loved it..
Behir ki cockroach and bathroom ke baaremein kya bataao..  Inka bathroom ke saath bohot hi cute connection hain na.. 
Do update soon the holiday part 
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Posted: 5 years ago
Thank u very much 4 the detailed comment.i love detailed comments.You mean Vish's gesture 4 Ajitabh's mother.Right?

Originally posted by: _nakshi_

First of all sorry for late comments 

And coming to the update the first thing to be appreciable is that u gave space for every character equally 
Behir romantic dance and mahir feels Bela is beautiful and good looking now.. 
U posted pics of everything in detail such that we can be imaginative πŸ˜ƒ
So mahir Bela Vish and ajitabh are finding interest between them... 
And now it's picnic time and all 4 were ready to enjoy and I am ready for cute moments... 
Not to forget Vish gesture for mahirs mom is impressive and I loved it..
Behir ki cockroach and bathroom ke baaremein kya bataao..  Inka bathroom ke saath bohot hi cute connection hain na.. 
Do update soon the holiday part 

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Thank u very much 4 the detailed comment.i love detailed comments.You mean Vish's gesture 4 Ajitabh's mother.Right?

Yeah her gesture and care for aji mom 
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Superb fabulous fantastic update dear
Thanks for pm