Yeh Teri Galiyan

OS - Mother's Son

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Posted: 5 years ago
Note- This is not a ShaMita's OS still had a thought in mind about complex relationship of Shan with his real mom thus writing a short OS on the same.. hope you guys like it.. I assumed that Asmita has brought out real nature of Nivedita with proofs in front of Shan .. and he got to know about sacrifice of the woman who brought him into the world..


As all hell broke loose , Shantanu stood silent ,broken and lost. Asmita was right and somewhere he also knew perhaps that his puchki was speaking truth.. but just could not believe the truth and now when it all unfolded in front of his eyes...His Nivi maa's confession of her hatred for him and things she did to avenge including kidnapping her own husband , he just stood their frozen.. His dad was finally in front of him recounting how his Chanda ma had sacrificed her own life for sake of her shantanu and how Nivi whom he trusted blindly and devoted himself to was the one behind conspiracies to mark him as a criminal.. It was tough night ahead as Asmita walked side by side with shantanu who was lost in day's events still..grasping some sense of it.. His feet led him to a known place as Asmita followed quietly feeling her bondu's heartache... Shantanu reached pari Mahal , hustle bustle of the area didn't let him come out of his thoughts as he still silently followed a known trail.. Somewhere inside pari Mahal , a Mother's heart knew that perhaps her wait is finally over. . Torment that she was going through will finally come to an end.. She came to the door feeling heavy ..and there he was standing on the door.. He looked at her .. dressed as thaku maa of baadi with those eyes depicting the pain that now his son could read.. without any words said he reached out to those hands..that had always cuddled him in his childhood when he used to wake up from nightmares and yes they cuddled him.again.. in that long awaiting hug that she has waited for all these years.. as they cried and cried whole night...mother and her son had finally found a home again.. He was not Shan Majumdar but his own Shantanu who had come home to her as her years long nightmare had ended... Some distance away his puchki was also shedding tears but finally relieved..All will be fine now .his Shantanu had come home...to her and her Badi maa again..

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Posted: 5 years ago
Wow so beautifully written well done 👏
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: Semeira

Wow so beautifully written well done  👏


Thank you so much for encouraging😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
wow very well written👏
very heart touching reunion of son & mother😭
just wish this happen in show also soon
i don't want that freak marriage go any further
will love to read more story dear😃
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: cuteariya

wow very well written 👏

very heart touching reunion of son & mother😭
just wish this happen in show also soon
i don't want that freak marriage go any further
will love to read more story dear😃


Thank you dear😊

Yes I also don't want this marriage track to.go further..
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Posted: 5 years ago
V.Good story 👏, all fans awaiting a similar reunion of Shan & his real mom. Lets see if it happens in the show. You have captured the emotions very well in a very short & emotional OS.
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: tranquilmelody

V.Good story  👏, all fans awaiting a similar reunion of Shan & his real mom. Lets see if it happens in the show. You have captured the emotions very well in a very short & emotional OS.


Thank you for encouraging words😊, I am glad you liked it.