AKSHAN TS The Unforgettable Night last part chapte3 Pg 3 Nov 4 updated

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Posted: 5 years ago

Akshan OS- the unforgettable night


Akshat was very disturbed it was 4months of his wedding with guddan. The last 24 hours of his life was a Mary go doing where he was meeting with shocks again n again. He came to know the following things


1.guddan marry to him because of her mother's conspiracy.


2. Guddan returned as a detective according to CBI officer rawat actual she never disbelief him.


3. Guddan solved the murder mystery of antara as the rawat who says himself the brother of antara was adopted n wanted the property so he make a plan of murder which looked like an accident.


4. Guddan proved Akshat absolutely innocent n make threat arrested.


5. Guddan helped the sons to solve a big business problem n also helped them in saving their lives from the rivals


6.guddan was saving his bahus from his anger n AJ was continuously bursting on her.


His mother came n asked khushi mil gayi Mr. AJ AJ replied maa aap mujhe kabse AJ bulane LAGI

"Jab se Tu mere lallla se zyada AJ ho Gaya. Wo AJ jisko Kisi ki takleef dukh or pareshaniyon se koi Lena dena Nahi Hota ek ladki Jo tujhse Umar me chhoti hai there is gusse ko Teri in kadvi baton ko there torture ko or. To or Teri bahuon ko BHI chupchaap bardaasht Karti Rahi phir b usne Kisi se ek shabd Nahi Kaha are tune use patni Nahi mana tere beto me use apni maaa Nahi mana Teri bahuon ne use apni SAAS Nahi mana phir BHI wo Sab k liye Kuch na Kuch Karti Rahi are pagal hai wo Jo tujhse pyaar Karti hai ye sochkar ki Kabhi na Kabhi to ye pariwaar use apnaayega uska pati use apnaayega magar Nahi tum log patthar ho sirf patthar Sab ko apna swarth dikhta hai badi bahu ko apne ghar ki manjhli bahu ko Apne pati ki or chhoti bahu ko paison ki parwaah sirf MERI guddan wo hi aisi thi jisne iss pariwaar ki parwaah ki lekin tum log uski parwaah uski fikar k kayak Nahi ho bilkul BHI Nahi sharam aati h mujhe tumhe apna beta kahte hue kyonki aaj tune ek masoom Dil ko dukhaya hai agar Zara si b sharam h to jaa k dhoondh use kahin aisa na ho ki bahut Der ho Jaye kahin aisa na ho ki his pyaar ko mere kanha be tere liye Likha ho wo khatam ho Jaye guddan ko Kuch ho na Jaye ja lallla MERI bahu ko Ghar le k AA jaaa




AJ ran with his full speed to bring back the. Colour of his life to bring back the joy of his life to bring back his life his guddan.




Hey guys this is just a random thought if u guys liked it so I will continue iron two or three parts

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It's really beautiful and interesting 😛👏
Pata Nhi actual show mein aisa kab hoga😭
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Beautiful👏...i want aisa ho chalo koi to hai aj ko mirror dikha sake that what is right and what is wrong
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Nice os😳
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Nice start ⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Kay your story is very beautiful n touching👏
I wish something like this happens in the show
I want to see AJ groveling 
Please write the second part
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It's really beautiful story 
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Hi guys with all your response I have decided to make it a TS that Is a three shot. So part 2

Chapter -2


Akshat was driving with full speed n was in search for his guddan. He called rewati n ask her to inform if guddan reaches to them.


He was remembering the conversation between maa n guddan


Flashback


Guddan was sitting in maa's room n was telling her maa ham aapse Kuch chupana Nahi chahte or aapse jhoot bolna hamse na ho payega. Ha maaa ye sach hai ki ham AJ sorry Akshat se bahut pyaar karte Hain ye pyaar or rishtey nibhana hame Akshat ne hi sikhaya hai Unse hi hamne pariwaar k Rishton k vishwaas k or pyaar k maayne seekhe Hain. Ha ham Akshat se bahut bahut pyaar karte Hain

AJ was hell shocked hearing this he was going when he hears.


Lekin ham unhe Kuch Nahi batayenge maa ham jante Hain ki wo hame Kabhi Nahi apna payenge or ham unke samne ye BAAT kah k unki takleef Nahi badhana chahte ham jante Hain ki aaj b wo antara Di se pyaar karte Hain wo mujhe Kabhi apna Nahi payenge or na apna Kar dukhi BHI Nahi karenge aapko .MERI kasam maa aap unhe Kuch Nahi batayenge aapko apki iss beti ki kasam

Flashback ends...


He was driving madly he realised ki agar Papa k Ghar Nahi gayi hogi to kaha ja Sakti hai just then he saw a shadow which was walking un directionally to the temple he found that it was guddan.


He stopped her n asked "paagal ho kya tum Kaha ja Rahi thi iss Tarah se "


She replied "ham Kahi b Jaye aapko isse kya aapko to hamse chutkara Chahiye na to ham  kal marte aaj mar jayein aapko isse kya "


It was the time that Akshat couldn't control himself.he just took her hand n went inside the temple. In front of Radha Krishna who are the makers n witness of his love story their love story n their marriage.


Guddan was not in the mood to talk to him "mujhe Jane dijiye pls main Aapke hath jodti hu magar pls ab mujhse Nahi ho payega main apki or Apne pariwaar ki nafrat bardaasht Nahi Kar Sakti takleef Hoti h mujhe bahut. Is Ghar k ek ek insan ko Maine apna mana aapse Jude har rishtey ko nibhaya hai Maine magar ab mujhme Aur taakat Nahi bachi hai thak chuki hu main apni feelings or Apne aap se bhaagte bhaagte. Ab main apni feelings ko or Nahi daba Sakti pls mujhe Jane dijiye kyonki main janti hu Akshat ki aap mujhe Kabhi Nahi apna payenge lekin main ye BAAT Apne Dil ko Nahi samjha sakti. Ha Mr. Akshat Jindal sari duniya k liye honge aap the great AJ magar mere liye aap Akshat hai sirf Akshat, wo Akshat jisne hame Khud ko sambhalna sikhaya jisne hame is layak samjha ki ham se Sab ho payega.


Ham Mrs. Guddan Akshat Jindal aapse bahut pyaar karte Hain yes I love u or ham ye b jante h ki aap hame apna Nahi payenge isiliye main Yaha se bahut door chale Jana chahti hu.


Guddan walked but her hand was holded by Akshat.


Akshat pulled her closer n she banged to his chest their faces were inches apart from each other. Akshat said"bol liya.         to ab main bolu ha tum galtiyon Karti ho dher sari galtiyon ki hai tumne ginana Hoga aaaj tumhe pahli Galti


MERI Zindagi me aane ki.


Doosre Galti


Mujhse shadi Karne ki


Teesri Galti


Mere pariwaar ko apna maanne ki Galti


Agli Galti


Mujhe phirse muskurana sikhane ki Galti


Ek or Galti


Mujhe ye ehsaas dilane ki ki mere pass b Dil hai


Ek or Galti


Mere Dil me jagah banane ki


Phir ek Galti


Mujhse pyaar Karne ki


Phir


Us pyaar ko mujhe na batane ki Galti


Or ab


Mujhse bahut door chale Jane Ka sochne ki Galti.


Main tumko ye Galti hargiz Nahi Karne dunga saari Zindagi b nahi.

Ha Mrs. Guddan Akshat Jindal  main Mr. Akshat Jindal tumhara ye akdu sadu khadoos gussail short tempered arrogant khoosath torturing pati jisne tumhe Kai takleefein Di h wo aaj Yaha bhagwaan Radha Krishna k pyaar ko Sakshi man kr tumse yeh kahna Chahta hai ki mujhe Nahi pata Kab or kaise lekin main


Tumse bahut bahut pyaar karta hoon itna ki ek second k liye b tumse door Jane k baare me Soch BHI Nahi sakta. Or jis pal mujhe ye khayal ayega wo Mera akhiri pal Hoga.


Saying this Akshat cupped her face wiped her tears n kissed her forehead guddan closed her eyes n then he said


I Love you n they both were in each others arms.





Okay so guys here is the part 2 I hope u guys have guessed ki part 3 me kya Hoga☺️☺️ so it will take some time to write I want to request to nish attiya n Gayatri to write an os on such scenes. It's our dreams n we can make it what we want


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Posted: 5 years ago
It's awesome. ..loved it...plz do continue. .and I want to see AJ 's love realisation and an emotional confession of AJ. ..waiting yaar .. Edited by vinlora - 5 years ago
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I think Aapne post poori nahi padhi Akshat has said ILU to guddan n next part will be consummation scenes😉