BeHir SS - ~*~Their Secretive Karwa Chawth~*~ Part 4 Pg 6 - 11.11.2018 - Page 4

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Hi everyone!!!
Working on part 4. 
Will try and update asap =)
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Originally posted by: Zahra15.

Hi everyone!!!

Working on part 4. 
Will try and update asap =)

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Posted: 5 years ago
Hey Everyone!!!
Thank you for your likes and comments🤗
It's a bit late, but here is the next part for you.
The update was ready since the weekend, but somehow few things cropped up and I didn't get time to post it.
So without further ado, here it is😊




PART 4



"Kahan chali gayi thi Ruhi, mujhe kuch bataaya kyun nahi...maine poora ghar dekha, tum mili hi nai, tumhe pata hai main kitna pareshan tha. Mujhe laga ke kahin... ke kahin in insaanon ne tumhare saath kuch kiya nahi... Khaas kar woh...woh Mahir Sehgal," Vikrant said with fake concern the moment he entered into Bela's room few hours later.



Tum jaise saanp ke beech reh kar, mujhe insaanon se kya khatra ho sakta hai Vikrant, Bela thought inwardly.



"Pehli cheez Vikrant, I admit tum sirf mere bhale ke baare mein sochte ho lekin iss ka matlab yeh nahi ke tum mujhse iss tarah sawaal karo. Maine Vish se bhi kaha tha pehle aur aaj tumhe bhi kehrahi hoon, yeh mat bhoolo main tum logoon ki Naagrani hoon, toh mujhse sawaal karne se pehle das baar socha kiya karo," Bela warned him.




Yeh Ruhi ko achanak kya huwa, Vikrant thought to himself.




"Acha theek hai. Maaf karna. Par tum gussa mat ho. Mujhe toh bas tumhari fikar ho raha tha," he tried clarifying.




Yeh kya kar diya maine, Bela thought. Apne gusse ko control kyun nahi ki maine. Kahin Vikrant ko mujhpe shaq na ho jaaye, Bela panicked.




"I'm sorry Vikrant. Gusse mein pata nahi meri muh se kya nikal gaya. Mera woh matlab nahi tha. Woh main...doctor ke paas gayi thi," she said




Vikrant looked at her with a consterned expression. He touched her forehead as if checking her temperature.




"Ruhi pakka tum theek ho? Mujhe tumhari fikar aur bhi lagne laga hai. Hum naag-vansh se hai, bhool gayi kya? Doctor ki hamein kya zaroorat," he asked with a puzzled look.




Kuch aur nahi soch sakti thi kya Bela? She cursed herself. 




Bela could feel the beads of sweat on her forehead. 




"Woh... Mujhe pata hai Vikrant ke main kya hoon. Woh Kuhu ka appointment tha, toh uss ke saath gayi thi," at least it was not a complete lie. Kuhu did have an appointment earlier that day. But the fact that she was accompanied by RJ and not Bela, that was a different thing. Not that Vikrant had to know about that. 




"Hmmm... Theek hai, toh main chalta hoon," Vikrant seemed to be convinced. "Waise tumhari Sumi Maa tumhe neeche bula rahi thi," he told her as he proceeded to move out of her room.




"Vikrant, ruko," she called from behind.




"Kya huwa Ruhi?"




"Tumhe Vish ko dekha? Kuch dinon se maine na hi usse dekha aur woh na hi mere calls le rahi hai," she asked him knowing very well what he would answer.



He was a bit taken by her question. Usse abhi Vish ki yaad kahan se aane lagi, he looked here and there, avoiding her gaze as he tried coming up with a reply.



"Kahan kho gaye Vikrant, maine tunse kuch poocha," she prompted again.




He didn't see Vish again after that night. He suspected she had turned into her real self and went somewhere to die. If not then she would have definitely come back to him to question him or she would have gone to Bela. But neither happened, so he concluded her end.



"Haan woh mili thi mujhe kuch din pehle. Pareshaan lag rahi thi. Poochne par usss ne bataya ke koyi sapera aaya tha kuch din pehle, usse pyaar ka jhoota nataak kiya, tumhe toh zaroor bataya hoga usne. Toh uska dil toot gaya aur usse bahut dukh huwa. Toh issi liyr kuch dinon le liye door chali gayi, aisa uss ne kaha tha mujhe. Kyun tumhe bata kar nahi gi?" He pretended as if it was surprising that she had made no mention of her 'plan' to Bela.



Kitni safaayi se jhoot bol lete ho Vikrant, Bela was amazed at how fast he came up with an excuse, and that too so confidently.



"Nahi, mujhe toh kuch batayi nahin ussne. Woh bina mujhe bataye kabhi kahin bhi nahi jaati, toh aisi kya pareshani thi usko," Bela played along. "Koyi baat nahi, Arvind ko boloongi main ke woh jaake Vish ka pata lagaye. Aisi halat mein usse akeli nahi rehna chahiye. Aur bhi bure bure khayal aaegi uss ko," she added.




Now Vikrant was a bit concerned. It won't take long for Arvind to find out Vish was no longer here should he set out on her trail. He was an old shape shifter who could sense things much better than them.



"Nahi Ruhi. Yeh mat karna. Mera matlab hai Vish ne khood mujhe bataya ke usse kuch dinon le liye akeli rehni hai. Toh Arvind ko uske peeche kyun lagana. Kahin woh bura na maan jaaye," he tried convincing her otherwise.




When Bela still looked unconvinced, he added, "acha theek hai, agar kuch dinon mein woh wapas na aayi, toh main khood jaake usse wapaas laaooga," he was sure to have convinced her for she did give a sigh of relief.


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"Ma aapne bulayaa mujhe," Bela asked as she walked into the living area. Sumi, Kuhu, Suhani and Paulo were seated together. Andy, RJ and Yuvi were having a drink on the other side while Mahir and Pratham were talking with each other on another side.



Some people were busy decorating the house for the night's festivities while few other ladies were sitting around Sumi and the other ladies.




"Haan, woh hum sab aaj raat le liye mehendi lagwarahe hai, toh tum bhi aajao," Sumi told her flatly, far from her usual affectionate self. She knew Sumi was angry with her and rightly so. That's why she didn't feel bad hearing her.



She gave a slight nod and took a seat beside Suhani, where she could directly see Mahir and he also could see her easily.



As the lady was applying mehendi to Bela, she whispered something to her to which Shehnaz, the mehendi applier nodded positively.



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"Chalo, sab jaao. Kuch der araam karo aur phir tayyar ho jaao, do teen ghante mein toh mehmaan bhi aane lagenge," Sumi ordered everyone once all the ladies got their mehendi applied.



As all dispersed towards their room, Mahir stayed back to peek a boo at Bela's mehendi. Bela also delayed going for she knew Mahir wanted to see her. However, seeing Mahir still seated, although his eyes were glued to his phone while Bela had not yet gone, Vikrant couldn't help but irritate Mahir further.



"Baby," he said to which both Bela and Mahir looked at him, one fully annoyed and the other with anger. Khood toh uss ne aaj tak Bela ko Bela ke ilawa aur koyi naam se nahi pukaara aur yeh fake Yuvi baby baby kehta phirta hai. At times, Mahir was amazed at how he had managed to stay calm till now. He was then reminded of Bela. He would have certainly lost his mind had Bela not been around to calm him all the time. Relax Mahir, he told himself as he opened his clenched fist.



"Ji," Bela replied.



Yuvi walked towards her and took her hands in hers. 




"Waise toh mujhe mehendi ki smell tak nahi pasand, lekin tumhare liye kuch bhi Baby," he winked at her while Mahir grunted from behind.




"This mehendi is looking so beautiful. Mera naam toh likhwayi hogi tumne, main dhoondta hoon," he said as he started looking for his name but alas even after looking few times, he couldn't find anything.



"Kya huwa?" Bela asked after a while, knowing very well what was the matter.



"Tumne naam nahi likhwaaya mera?" He asked her. "Give me the packet, I will write it up for you, shayad uss bewaqoof ladki ne likhna bhool gayi, haina," he said as he moved away to grab a henna cone.



"Areh Yuvraj-ji, rukiye," Bela stopped him. To this, even Mahir grew more attentive. 



"Kyun takleef le rahe hai aap? Naam toh already likhwa di maine," she said with a huge smile.   



"Lekin Ru... I mean Baby I can't see anything," he said.



"Areh Yuvraj-ji, don't worry, naam toh maine likhwa di, woh bhi uss ka jisse main pyaar karti hoon. Lekin, usual tareeqe ke bajaaye, maine Shehnaz ko Urdu mein likhne ko kaha. Haina romantic. Jab meri mehendi sookh jaaegi na toh aaram se apna naam dhoondiye" she grinned at him, fluttering her eyelids.



Even though he was few feet away, Mahir couldn't help the chuckle which was forming at the back of his throat. Bela was such a piece, he thought to himself.



Vikrant narrowed his eyebrows at Bela's behaviour. Isse kya huwa, he thought to himself. Then his eyes fell on Mahir and he realised she was acting all lovey dovey to annoy him. Well, at least this was what he concluded.



"That's why I love you baby," Yuvi said pinching Bela's chin playfully. 



Bela smiled at him and moved to her room saying she needed to rest for a while. As she moved towards her room, she gave Mahir a wink and walked away.


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Bela had barely closed her eyes as she lied on the sofa in her bedroom when she felt someone kissing her on her forehead. Her lips knowingly curved in a smile, for even with her closed eyes, she knew who it was.  She opened her eyes and there they were, staring at each other lovingly. After a while, as their little eyelock session broke, Bela got up and sat properly, pulling Mahir and making him sit on the table in front of her.



"Darwaza toh lock kiya hoga na aapne," she asked firstly, "pata chala hum dono ek saath yahan hai aur phir koyi tapak jaaye," she playfully taunted him.



"Ek baar galti karta hoon Mrs Sehgal, baar baar nahi," he said lifting his invisible collar and Bela couldn't help but give a little smile. This is what she loved about him. He had the ability to make her smile all the time, even with the most simple or least thing.



"Waise Bela, dikhaao toh kahan hai mera naam," he said as he took her hands in his and opened her palms.



And then she showed him, his name, beautifully etched right between her ring and little finger.



He gave her a quizzed look.



"Lekin uss fake Yuvi se toh tumne kaha k..."




"Jhoot kaha tha maine. Main kyun chupaoongi aapka naam? Uss ne theek se dekha nahi toh uski galti," she said. In fact, Bela had made sure that Mahir's name is written in between her fingers because she knew like everyone, Vikrant would check her palm only and rightly so for this is what he did.



"I must say Bela," Mahir added a while later.



"What?"



"Mere saath itne mahinon reh reh kar, tum bhi smart banti jaa rahi ho," he grinned at her.



"Ha-Ha," Bela laughed sarcastically. "Very funny Mahirji."



"Acha cmon get up," Mahir said as he stood on his feet.



"Kyun?"



"Tayaar bhi toh hona hai," he said.



"Haan toh aap jaiye tayyar ho jaiye. Main thodi der rest karoongi phir tayyar ho jaaongi," Bela said.



"Bela get up," Mahir said again as Bela proceeded to lie down. "Aaj bare fursat se main tumhe tayaar karoonga," he told her with a wink.



"What?"


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To be continued😆😉😆
So that's it for now.
I believe in 1-2 parts, the short story should be over but something is running in my mind on how Mahir will know Bela's truth or how Mahir will be linked to the whole Nagin concept😆 So I might just start working on that😊
Your likes and comments are mostly welcomed on this part😊
Until next time🤗

Edited by Zahra15. - 5 years ago
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You got me hooked! Man, you write really well. Loved that writting of name between fingers. 
Now please bring on the next part soonish. It's difficult to wait for your updates. They are that good!
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Wow. Loved it. Can't wait for more. Please update soon. What will bela do when Vikrant asks her to show his name later? 
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Nice update dear
Loved it
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Very nice... 😳 plz update soon
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Interesting. Very well written, you are fab written,
Waiting for next part
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Beautiful Story. Please update
Eagerly awaiting for next part