Heartfelt [Updated! part 1# pg.6 10/10] - Page 4

This content was originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

Part 1

mein soch rahi thi ki kaise comment karun? serious yaa phir overdramatic mode mein.. 😆

par dekhate hi dekhate, I mean padhate hi padhate..iss Geet ne mera dimag and dil capture kar liya instantly.

she is something else..more than innocent, she is genuine and I loved her in this part, the way her thoughts and emotions were changing so rapidly, from the kind woman to the fallen biscuit, then her uncle, then Anirudh, her need to use the washroom..and to where she landed into..

Maan ki Maa is a kind woman, who brought Geet home and is trying to help her, while Maan ka reaction is of what most people would do, but he is concerned for his Maa as well.

Anirudh kahan hai...itne bade shehar mein kho na jaaye kahin..koi toh dhoondhoo usse..😭

aur ye last part is more intriguing..how did Geet land from the Railway Station to her shop 😲

mast start hai..interesting and intriguing. continue soon.

This content was originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

geet ka innocence ya naive character is something i don't remember attempting to write!

18 years ki ladki ko duniya se ladne ki himmat wo MSK ne di thi

which was ok since geet had that fierce side in her even in hp

but on normal circumstances i wanted to see if geet could really blend in or would she breakdown midway!😉

so ye meri wali geet hai 17 saal ki ladki ghar se bhagi hui... jaha maan uska masiha nahi hai... and koi bhi construction company me job k liye basic education zarui hota hai😆

rahi Anirudh, uncle, maans mom ya even maan ki baat those characters will now mould according to geets thoughts!😳

writing next part!

will try updating today..agar nahi hua tho kal pakka post kardungi😊

thanks for reading my nonsense again!😆