Black & White Love ~ MG ~ Chapter 15, page 24, updated 24/07 - Page 4

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Posted: 5 years ago
Wow kidnapping, trying to save a person, trying to run away and now knowing someone who is in this mess. This is going to drive someone crazy and that is Geet and now he wants her to marry him in exchange for release.
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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice update..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 5 years ago
Chapter 4

Dynamic update! perfectly written! 

Can understand Geet's tension!!! 

who is Vivek?? Geet heard everything! her anger is justified! 

Maan is told to kill Geet!!! 

Only option available to Geet to save her life to marry Maan.

so that's how Maaneet got married!!

update soon



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Posted: 5 years ago
Congratulations on your story 

Sorry for been this late to comment 
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Posted: 5 years ago
Chapter 1 

Wow this was such a Mind Blowing Start 
I love the Suspense ,the Thrill , the Tension 

A gangster and a doctor already this story intrigues me 

So Maan and Geet are married but for some reason I got the feeling that something 
is off as when Geet touches Maan he freezes , its almost as if he didn't 
expect been touched by his wife and the fact that she held terror in her eyes even when 
Maan entered the cabin 
both had made a run but seems like Maan has gotten shot 
chapter filled with suspense 
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Posted: 5 years ago
Chapter 2 

This indeed was an Action Packed Chapter 
However Geet has crossed paths with Maan 
first she enters in his frame of view and he observes everything about her 
and when he shot it was the doctor in her that came forward which obviously 
would be something bad in the eyes of the shooter 
Maan seems to be stalking Geet now as he was there at the hospital he now knows 
her partner's vehicle which could prove dangerous to her 
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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice pt
Maan put condition on hr to save hr life
Edited by sanum23 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
Chapter 3 

Suspense with definite hints of danger lurking 
its strange how Meera as a doctor just passes over her 
duties to Geet , that didn't sound very professional but then I guess 
that is the only way that Geet can meet Maan face to face and get to
know that she has entered danger zone just by been an eye witness and the fact by saving
the victim 
in the ambulance she gets a feeling of eeriness but then again its too late to react and do 
something 
oh I'm just loving this concept the tension each chapter builds with such suspense 
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Posted: 5 years ago
Chapter 4 

Intriguing Chapter 

Maan and Vicky together so they are brothers , is the elderly man their relative 
perhaps father 
as Maan's mother knows why he is in this line of profession could it be that his father has made his sons gangsters 
Geet though she was scared but she showed confidence and bravery 
Maan knows that Geet will run given the chance , it seems like he had full details about her 
her photos but at the same time it almost feels like as if Maan has some slight attraction towards 
Geet almost ensuring that he does not interact with her but Vicky does 

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Posted: 5 years ago
Chapter 5 

Intense and so Awesome Chapter 

I knew it when Mr Vivek was present in the hospital , his a businessman entering into politics 
someone that operating so smoothly but has his lover right there already that send off danger signals 
so he is the mastermind of the gang and perhaps not the elderly man that I had thought off 
Maan was rather confused seeing that Geet's trust was broken on Mr Vivek 
and the fact that he now wants Geet dead because she can easily point fingers at him his image in 
society will be doubted 
Maan surely he is a trained killer but wonder why he got soft on Geet not shooting her instead
telling her that there is only one way to save herself and that is if she marries him 
so does he actually want to protect her from his uncle or does he have another plan for her