Epitaph of Mauli... - Page 3

Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by amortentia15


Banjarran liked it before i read!! Lol coming back to this😆


haha... you are so cute Juhi🤗
Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by abhiya_12


Loved it ❤️
Today the emotion what Mauli felt is numb/emptiness/blank.

Waiting to see her breakdown tomorrow


Thank you so much abhiya. *hugs*

sigh! and i thought that numbness/emptiness/shock was haunting.. but yesterday she was just something else. wasn't she!💔
Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by Angels11


OMG this gave me goosebumps. It's like an anthem for all the women warriors of the world like mauli 👏



thank you so much Angel.
You said it Sistah!.. We die ONLY when we are murdered by our own.
Mauli is true warrior!
Posted: 5 years ago
Another of Ghalib's sher for Mauli... for the feeling in her as she sought to see herself through her husband's perfidious eyes. Love doesn't die an instant death, does it?

Mohabbat main nahin hai farq jeene aur marne ka
Usi ko dekh kar jeete hai jis kaafir par dam nikle


Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by Banjaaran25




Thank you so much abhiya. *hugs*

sigh! and i thought that numbness/emptiness/shock was haunting.. but yesterday she was just something else. wasn't she!💔
She died yesterday that's what I felt 💔
Posted: 5 years ago
Wow...u penned it down beautifully. 👏 This is truly mouli's situation now. 😭

She thinks she is nothing now but she will rise from the ashes. 
Posted: 5 years ago
The episode was a rollercoaster ride for me 
Mauli nd her hurt was unbearable to watch nd her a very dialogue was piercing into d heart but gotta  give d gal salam even when she was broken,lifeless her"am not like nandini nd won't be "👏 

Rajdeep...people have been saying he's getting awesome one liners but kal I've seen nd🤣 kamina hei par he's being d most relatable right now

Kunan these two raise their own bar of stupidity daily nd tbh I don't have d patience or d interest to elaborate on them

Coming to d actors must say rajdeep guy is funny nd scary out of all 4 dd acting isn't impressing at all 

I'm tone deaf when it comes to poetic way of expression I know only chapad chapad😔 so wahi Likha 







But nimi dis is so sad ...funny posts pls🤣🤣
Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by Banjaaran25



Here lies Mauli...
And all that remains of her.

Jab lagaa teer ... Tab itna dard na hua Gaalib...
Zakhm ka ehsaas tab hua ... jab kamaan apno ke haathon mein dekhi.

I felt the arrows piercing through my body and soul;
I felt the pain.
But the magnitude of agony dawned upon me when I saw..
The one holding the bow was my loved one.

She felt the flickers of flame burning her nest.
She felt the cold fingers of anonymous entity strangling her hope.
She felt the sheer terror of unknown calamity.
She felt her dreams slipping through the gaps of her fingers.
She felt the pierce of the daggers.
She felt the singe of the burning amber.
She felt it all... and yet..
She denied.
and yet she loved.
and yet she trusted.
and yet she hoped.
and yet she lived.

A dagger in her guts; a dagger in her back; a dagger in her heart.
She was feeling the hurt.. yet choose to unfeel.
She was seeing the unseen.. yet choose to unsee.

For she believed too much.
For she trusted too much.
For she loved too much.

and then came her death.
When she SAW.
The hand holding the dagger was that of her loved one's.

And then came her dreams, hopes and life crumbling down.
And then came the agony.
And then she bled.

and then snapped the gossamer thin yet titanium thread of hope and belief she was holding onto.
She saw her own destruction. And all she could do it stare and scream in silent disbelief.

Here lies Mauli...
And all that remains of her.


The saddest thing about betrayal that it never comes from your enemies.

A man she loved.
A girl she trusted.
A soulmate she gave her soul too.
A friend who held her heart.


Sometimes; the person you'd take a bullet for... ends up behind the gun.

Husband and a best friend.
Soulmate and a Soul sister.
Her world and her family.

Her murderers.

Here lies Mauli...
And all that remains of her.


When you are broken into pieces.. you gather your shards and move on.
When you are ripped into shreds.. you stitch those threads back and move on.
When you are burnt into ashes... You rise from the specks of the dust and move on.

What will you do.. when you are betrayed by the ones you thought the world of. Gave your world to. And loved and trusted with all your being?
You cease to exist.

What can you do.. when all that's remains of you is... nothingness!

Here lies Mauli..
And all that remains of her... Nothingness.




So wonderfully written👏⭐️
Edited by Monica_Suhasini - 5 years ago
Posted: 5 years ago
Absolutely wonderful 👏
Posted: 5 years ago
You're making me invested in a character I'm yet to watch. So much so that I'm almost at the brink of writing a ff on her. She sounds the perfect character for one of the drafts I have. Oh Nimmy what have you done?
Such is the power of your wording. Keep it up!
Love,
Sakura 
PS: love the shayari you know what a shayari fan I am!

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