Originally posted by SummerRain7
So beautifully written!! The rawness of her pain portrayed so well !!
"Did they laugh behind her back?" - This line really got to me. Cheating and deceit always go hand in hand, and while cheating breaks your heart, deceit destroys your sense of self, making even the most confident, self-assured and emotionally secure person question their worth.
And I loved how you ended it. A very symbolic way of showing that she may find love again.
Hii!! Thank you so much...
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The one para where she thinks whether they had fun at her expense is heartwrenching you are right...because not only do people lose their self worth if this haapens they start believing there's something wrong in them...
Phew!!! Mauli faced the worst betrayal possible but the person she is, she will bounce back stronger this time...
Every person betrayed deserves to...
The key symbolism.at the end...maybe it will open up new hopes and a new chance at happiness for her...π
Edited by amortentia15 - 5 years ago