An angel in the valley of betrayal ...

I wrote this for Mauli ...

An angel caught in the web of betrayal
She slowly tangling in its poison BR] I feel she stands at cannon's mouth ,
Where as her beloved lost in mistress eyes!
She played her part , though faulted in trust .

Deep in the dark smiles of betrayal await her ,
from the same people whom she stood for.
She fought a war shielding her friend from a monster ,
allas her life was taken from her in return.

Deep in the dark smiles of betrayal awaits her ,
Waiting to creep in to her beautiful little nest !
Fearing , thinking blow of lust might kill her little heart ,
I make these words as garland of love ,
Honey they don't deserve a "pure hearted dumb" like you .

Your smile lit up the lives around you,
Seldom you let your tears flow down !
Wish you will be brave ...
Brave enough to face " the tsunami of betrayal"
Coming to your beautiful world !

...this is what
    Or my feeling for Mauli
     All related to her .
...grammer mistakes should there but my feelings are true for her
    My heart goes to her
Edited by Rosh4rose - 5 years ago

Loved it!!!👏😊

Originally posted by: amortentia15

Loved it!!!👏😊

Isn't love in its purest form when it brings smile on the faces of your own people!!!! Thats exactly what Mauli does... Livhting up the faces of her own...

And what do her own people give her... Lies and betrayal...fooling her...can you believe it , Nandini fooled her when K hid in the bathroom...

The same Nandini who used to perpetually Shiver and quiver until M came into her life and saved her from the clutches of her debauch husband...

And Kunal...the less said about him the better...my mind comes uo with quite a lot of colourful words for him but i wont post it...

Thanks yaar , true that Kunal is most disgusting for , just trying to control my words for him
              It will be against forum rules
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Edited by Jiggy7 - 5 years ago

Beautiful.Just hope writers do justice to Mauli. 

Lovely ❤️

Originally posted by: Jiggy7

😭😭

Seriously the angel didn't deserve this..

Yes she is strong.. But how strong can we expect a person to be to face betrayal from the two most important persons in her life!!!

She will be broken but she will become more strong later

Originally posted by: Sabhayata

Beautiful.Just hope writers do justice to Mauli.

Even if she turns negative , can't blame her
She is going through "the ultimate betrayal , any one can possibly experience "
A double blow , from whom she loves most in her life

Originally posted by: Mishfan

Lovely❤️

This beautiful angel deserves nothing but the best

Hope she finds her true love & happiness soon

Hope so
Angel will cone out through this betrayal

Beautiful lines for a much loved character.  Mauli has