Originally posted by: Arjunasr
I'm Behen. Areh!! who said its only Arjun. I said Riya has a major role. And who else can be the leading lady other than Riya. But you have to see whether they become Ariy a or not. Some suspense should be there in the story isn't it??
Originally posted by: Aayat.ariya14
read whole story together ... loved it.. but there is a some pblm with ur writing style! like proper word na likhna, spelling mistake ( ye koi khas baat nahi),, n hindi word se english word betha dena without completing what u wanna to say... overall updts were good.. carry 1.. thanks for pm...
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