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Posted: 5 years ago
tanu sees ahana...
Tanu- ab ye gehri nind me h..
Tanu reaches near to rishi..
Tanu- aj raat bhar yahi rhne ka irada h kya..ab jaldi jao yah se isse phle ki tumhe koi dekh le..jao na...kya musibat h..
Rishi- me musibat...
He sits on sofa...
Tanu- tum yah kyu beth gaye...jao  na..
Rishi- me yah tumhare liye aya th...tum mujhe musibat kh rhi ho..me musibat hu na nahi jaunga me yah se...jisko dekhna h dekh le...
Tanu- tum pagal ho gaye ho kya??? Jao na...
Rishi- me nahi jaunga...kuch bhi kr lo...
Tanu- jaona plz..
Rishi- sorry bolo...
Tanu- kya???
Rishi- sorry bolo nahi to me nahi jaunga.. 
Tanu irritating...
Tanu- aahhh...acha sorry..
Rishi- aise nahi ache se...folding ur hand..
Tanu- (folding her hand) sorry rishi..meri galati th..mujhe tumhe musibat nahi bolna chahiye th..plz ab jao...
Rishi- ok mene tumhe maaf kiya..me ab jata hu balike...
Tanu in her mind
Tanu- tumhe to me baad me dekh lungi...
Rishi- abhi dekh lo..baad me kyu..
Tanu- tumne kuch suna kya..
Rishi- jb tumne kuch kh nahi to me sunuga kaise...ha per mene tumhare man ko pad liya..yahi soch rhi th na tum...
Tanu- nahi to...plz jao na..
Rishi leaves n tanu goes to her room. When tanu sleep on her bed..ahana said..
Ahana- diii...chod ayi rishi ko..
Tanu- (gets shocked) rishi ko ye tu kya kh rhi h ahana...
Ahana- dii..tu mujhe pagal mat bna..mene rishi ko dekh liya th...tu hi acting kr sakti h kya me nahi...
Tanu- ahana ye baat kisi ko mat batana...
Ahana- ha dii...nahi bataungi...waise kyu aya th wo yah???
Tanu- mere liye...mera matlab h..mujhe chot lag gayi th isliye aya th...
Ahana-hummm...tere liye kyu??
Tanu- me uski assistant hu isliye. 
Ahana- ohhh..di adhi raat me khidki se kudkr apni assistant se milne aya th...
Ahana teasing to tanu..
Tanu- ahana mujhe pareshan mat kr...mujhe nind aa rhi h.. good night...

Next day..
Rishi's office...
Rishi- aj itna late ho gaya hai...ab tk tanu kyu nahi ayi...kl to thik th...phone bhi nahi lag rh h...
That time somebody knocks the door...
Rishi feel relax..
Rishi- aa jao tanu...
But she was not tanu...he was manpreet...
Manpreet- bhai..kya aap apne bhai ko nahi pehchante...
Rishi- tu knock krke kyu aya h chote...or tu office me kya kr rh h...
Manpreet- bhai me utha to aap ghar pe nahi th...mom se pucha to unhone bataya ki aap subah jaldi office chale gaye h.. mujhe aap se milne ka man th to me aa gaya...
Rishi is very desperate to meet with tanu..n looking at the door ..
Manpreet- kya bhai me aap se milne aya hu or aap h ki baar baar darwaje ki taraf dekh rh h
That time again some body knocking the door...
Rishi is happy..n in her mind...tanu aa gayi
Rishi- come in...me tumhara hi intjar kr rh th...
But she was also not tanu...she was neha.. who is very happy to listen this...
Neha- rishi..tum mera intajar kr rh th..to mujhe call kr dete me jaldi aa jati..
Rishi- me tumhara nahi tanu ka wait kr rh th..
Neha- tanu ka wait...per kyu...
Rishi- kyu ka kya matlab hai..wo meri hai..mera matlab h meri assistant h... mujhe kaam ke baare me discussion krna h...

Ps: wo word for u cotton candy...tanu n ahana part is awesome...u always rocking...keep it up...

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Posted: 5 years ago
all of you very nice posts!👍🏼
guys missing kasam a lot😭
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: zoha7865

all of you very nice posts! 👍🏼

guys missing kasam a lot😭

yes u said rite...I miss kasam a lot... kasam was the only show which I watched on tv...so I am getting bored..
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Posted: 5 years ago
Neha got distracted by Rishi's words. She says in her mind...
N:Always Tanu...tanu...tanu... What is special in her??? Get lost...
By thinking this she leaves... As Rishi sees Manpreet there inorder to send him out he says.
R:Chote tu bhi jaa... Us Neha ko madad kar...
M:kya bhai??? Us Neha ko??? Kisi aur ko to karunga...par Neha...
R:kya chote...tujhe to ladkiyon k sath flirt karna bhut pasand hai na... In the name of help u can flirt with her...
M:nahi bhai... Yeh koi ladki h??? Isse behtar wo moti hi hai...
While saying this Manpreet looks at Rishi's face... Rishi is still looking at door...
M:Ab mujhe samajh aaya...ki aap kyun mujhe us Neha k sath bhejne chahte h... U r waiting for Tanu n wants to spend time with her na...?
Unknowingly Rishi nooded yes.. Then only he realized what he had said... N he says...
R:haan...
Manpreet stares Rishi...
R:aise nhi... I want to share some business matters with her... Isiliye...
M:business ki baat ya personal life ki baat???
R:chotte bhut ho gaya... Ab chal...
M:mn chalta hu... Ab aapko sirf aapki waali k intezar h na...
By saying this Manpreet leaves...
After few minutes Rishi gets a call...it was Tanu's...
R:Hello... Tanu bolo...
T:Rishi I will not come to office today...
R(a little shocked):kyun???
T:mere pair me chot lagi h na...isiliye...
R(bit tensed):yesterday itself I asked u na...how u r feeling... Tab bola mn theek hu... Ab achanak se kya hua?
T:aise kuch nhi...
By saying this Tanu comes into Rishi's cabin... Rishi got surprised as well as happy seeing Tanu... Both off their phones.
R:Why did u said u r not coming even after u had come?
T:A small shock from me...
R:Shock kyun???
T:I don't know anything... It is Manpreet's plan... He said me n I followed...
Flashback
Manpreet was leaving from Rishi's cabin... Just then he saw Tanu...
M:Tanu please ruko...
T:kya hua Manpreet???
M: I would like to give a shock treatment to bhai... As he waiting 4 u till the morning.
Tanu feels happy hearing that Rishi is waiting for her... Then she asks.
T:kya shock treatment??
Manpreet explains everything to Tanu n she initially denies n then accepts...
Flashback ends.
Rishi feels shy... He says in his mind...
R:chote... I will see u later...
T:baad mein kyun??? Now itself do it...
R:tumne kuch suna???
T: Nhii...kya tumne kuch kaha...
R:nhii...
Just then Neha knocks the door...
N:may I come in sir...
R(in mind):kebab ki haddi...


PS: Woh word lemon... Superb part dear... Rocking shocking Ahana and Chocolate boy rishi... Loved it to the core dear... 😳... Really Sprinkles missing Kasam a lot...Edited by gopsss - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
Rishi- tumhari ye cousin mujhe bilkul bhi pasand nahi h...chipku...
Rishi irritating with neha
Rishi- come in..
Neha- rishi..mujhe ye file deni th...
Rishi- konsi file..ye file mujhe nahi manager ko deni th..
Neha- ohh sorry... mujhe laga tumhe deni h...
Rishi- ok...ab yah kyu khadi ho jao...
Neha- actually..me wo...
Neha drops file on the floor...all the pages also spreads on the floor..
Neha- sorry..sorry..
Rishi- ye kya kiya tumne...
Rishi n neha both stoops for file...
That time neha advantages of that situation n holds rishi's hand..
Rishi- looks that...what is this..chodo..
Neha- kitna sarmate ho tum...
Tanu sees that..n annoying with rishi..n goes out of the cabin..
Rishi- tanu..kh ja rhi ho...
(Rishi in her mind) I think wo phir mujhe galat samazi..
Neha- kya hua rishi...jane do use...
Rishi jerks neha's hand..n going behind tanu...
Rishi- tanu..tanu..plz listen..
Rishi going fast n hold her hand..
Tanu- hath chodo...tumne mera hath kyu pakda h..
Rishi- tum galat samaz rhi ho..usne mera hath pakda th..mene nahi..plz gusaa mat ho..
Tanu- ha janti hu usne tumhara hath pakda th..
Rishi happy to listen this..
Rishi- me to dar hi gaya th..ki tumne mujhe galat to nahi samaza
Tanu- mene tumhe phele galat samaza th per abhi sahi samaza..lafentar..sahi khti h ahana sb ladke ek jaise hote h..
Rishi- kya matlab..dekho tanu wo mere piche padi h..kl bhi wo hi ayi th..
Tanu- ooohhh..ha ha sari galati meri h..me hi galat hu rishi..
Rishi- tum aisa kyu bol rhi ho..jabki meri koi galati nahi h...
Tanu- acha tumhari galati nahi h..agar usne tumhara hath pakda h to tum isko jhatak nahi sakte..khte ho wo tumhare piche ati h..to tum usko ek chata nahi mar sakte taki wo next time na aye..per nahi..aisa tum kyu karoge..
Rishi- actually..tanu..kh ja rhi ho listen..
Tanu is not listen anything n going..
Tanu- pta nahi apne aap ko kya samazta h..jb dekho tb us neha se chipka rhta h..
She reaches on road n she is not realise that a car is coming near to her..that time some body save her..that is none other than rishi..
Tanu is scared..
Rishi- tanu...tum thik ho..
Tanu- ha me..thik hu..
Rishi holds tanu..n hugs tightly..
Rishi- kh dhayan th tumhara..me tumhe kb se awaaz de rh th..per tum ho ki..
Rishi holds tanu's face..
Rishi- agar tumhe kuch ho jata to..me mar jata..
Rishi hugs again n crying...
Tanu surprised to see rishi's behaviour...

Ps: wow cotton candy.. really nice update.. manpreet frank is mind blowing...plz update soon n love u..

Edited by Smita_rawat - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
Tanu is feeling happy too by seeing Rishi's possessiveness... She just stare him... Rishi then cups Tanu's face n says...
R:kuch to bolo Tanu...tumhe kuch hua hai kya???
But Tanu is still lost in him. Rishi shakes Tanu as she is not hearing anything... N says...
R:Tanu I'm asking u... R u ok???
Tanu comes to her sense with a jerk n says...
T: Haan Mn theek hu...
R:aao andar chal k baat karten...
T: Kyun Ander??? Mn nhi aati...
R:Tanu yeh kya h??? Y u r not trusting me...
T:mn tumse vishwas karungi...jab u will prove ur self...
R:what should I do??? What should I do to prove myself???
T:you should prove that...
Rishi doubtfully stands there... He was about to say something just then an idea came to his mind...
R:if I prove my self u trust me na???.
T:yah sure...
Rishi holds tanu's hand n takes her to his office... He calls Neha to his cabin n asks Tanu to hide behind d door... Neha comes to his cabin...
N: May I come in???
R: Yes...
Neha enters in d room... She peeps n realises no one is there...
N:why u call me here???
R: To discuss about a meeting...
Neha's face became dull n she asks...
N: For that only???
R:yes... Tumne kuch aur socha h kya???
N: Nahi...nhi...aise kuch nahi...
R:thank you Neha... Only because of u Tanu left me... Really I was disturbed by her presence... Thankyou so much for that...
Neha feels happy that an unexpected thing had happened...
With all her joy she answers promptly.
N:kya sach mein??? I always wanted to separate Tanu from u... I thought u both r in love... Is mein meri koi galti bhi nhii...as u both r always together so I thought like that...
She pauses. TanShi got shocked by hearing this... N Neha continues with a shy..
N: I thought that u don't like me... U always don't allow me to come close to u... N u always insisted too... That's why I am doing all this in front of u...
She again pauses... Tanu's eyes became red... She is burning in anger... As well as she feels guilt for not trusting him...
Neha continues with more shy...
N:ab mujhe yeh sab karne ka koi zarurat nahi... ...
She was about to say something... Just then someone turns her n gives a tight slap... It was none other than Tanu... Tanu completes neha's words...
T:haan now u don't want to do anything... I will do it...
By saying this she again slaps her... In anger Neha raised her hand to slap Tanu... Just then rishi holds her hand n says...
R: Meri Tanu h yeh...
In anger Neha leaves the room... As she left Tanu looks rishi... She feels guilt...n downsher face... Rishi says her...
R:now I proved my self... Mujhse vishwas karogi na???
Tanu nods with tearful eyes.
T:hmmm...
She pauses for a while n says with a heavy heart...
T:I'm sorry rishi...


PS:woh word lemon... U rocked it dear... Fabulous update!! Love u unlimited dear... I always want TanShi in ur updates... Missing them...Edited by gopsss - 5 years ago
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Tanu says sorry n feel guilty...
Tanu- rishi really sorry...I feel very guilty mujhe tum pe trust krna chahiye th..
Rishi- tanu don't feel guilty...
Tanu- tumne mujhe maaf kr diya na...
Rishi- nahi..
Tanu - nahi..per kyu..
Rishi- me tumhe ek sart pe maaf karunga...
Tanu- mujhe tumhari koi bhi sart manjoor h..
Rishi- to sart ye h ki tum mujhse vaada karo ki tum mujh pe kabhi sak nahi karogi..promise..
Rishi raise his hand n tanu claps on that...
Tanu-i promise..me tum pe kabhi sak nahi karungi..
Rishi n tanu happy to seeing each other...
That time some body knocks the door..
Rishi- jarur ye manpreet hoga..aj subah se aise hi pareshan kr rh h..come in..
Ahana enters into the cabin..
Ahana- dii...
Tanu- ahana tu yah..
Ahana- mene kahi tum dono ko disturb to nahi kiya..
Ahana teasing tanu n rishi...
Tanu- sshhh..(say slowly) chup kr kahi bhi suru ho jati h...
Ahana- mene aisa kya kh???
Tanu- acha yah kyu ayi h...koi kaam th...
Ahana- nahi..wo to me yah se nikl rhi th to mene socha tujhse mil lu..or agar tera kaam ho gaya to sath ghar chale...
Rishi- ahana...khadi kyu ho..betho na..kya logi tum tea or coffee..
Ahana- nahi mujhe kuch nahi chahiye..di agar tera kaam ho gaya to chale...
Tanu- ha..chal..
Rishi interrupted..
Rishi- abhi nahi ja skti tum..
Ahana- per kyu...
Rishi- aahh..wo kl ki meeting ki presentation tayaar krni h..
Tanu surprise to listen this..
Tanu- konsi presentation...
Rishi- are mene tumhe bataya to th..bhul gayi.. bahut bhullkar ho tum...ahana tumahari dii ko abhi kaam h wo kaam khatm krke ghar jayegi..
Ahana- ok dii..me chalti hu bye..
Ahana goes..
Tanu- kon si presentation banani h..jaldi do..mujhe ghar bhi jana h..
Rishi- presentation..konsi presentation??
Tanu- are abhi to tumne ahana ke samne bola ki tumhe presentation banbani h..
Rishi- wo to mene aise hi bol diya th..
Tanu- aise hi bol diya th..tumne juth bola th...bade ajeeb ho tum..me abhi ahana ke sath ghar bhi chali gayi hoti..
Rishi- mene ye juth hamare liye bola th or tum ho ki...jao tumhe jana h to...
Tanu- hamare liye juth bola th matlab???
Rishi- me chahta th ki hamari nayi nayi dosti hui to sath me ghar chale...
Tanu- dosti???
Rishi- hamari dosti nahi hui kya???
Tanu- ha hui to h..chalo ab to ghar chale..
Rishi- ha chalte h...
Both r goes to their house...that time tanu sees ice cream parlour...
Tanu- rishi.. stop the car..
Rishi- kya hua???
Tanu- dekho ice cream parlour...mujhe ice cream khani h..chalo na...
Rishi- ice cream...is time pe kon ice cream khata h..abhi to ghar jane ki jaldi th or ab..
Tanu- me khati hu...plz na rishi..
Rishi- tanu..no
Tanu- plz rishi..
Rishi- no..no means no..
Tanu upsad when rishi says no...
Tanu annoyed with rishi...
Tanu- khadus..
Rishi - tanu listen yaar...
Tanu is not listen...
Rishi- acha chalo...
Tanu- sach...chalo..thanku very much..
She is very happy n going fast to the ice cream parlour..

Ps: wo word for u cotton candy.. I am also missing tanshi so much..wow cotton candy hatts off to u...tanu n rishi part is awesome..n tanu n neha part is mind blowing..kya thappad th..

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TanShi enters the ice cream parlour... Tanu looks there n finds a silent place...
T:Come... Lets sit there...
R:haan...
They move towards that seat... They sit there... As the waiter is not there... Tanu takes d menu n looks it... Waiter comes...
W:Sir aapko konsa flavour chahiye???
TanShi at same time...
T&R:butter scotch...
Both TanShi looks each other n asks in confusion...
T:tumhe kaise pata ki mujhe butter scotch ka flavour bhut pasand h...
R:aise hi... U r an intoxicating person so...scotch se behtar kuch nahi hoga...
T:Mn intoxicated???
R:haan matlab tum intoxicated nhii...par u r intoxicating others...
T:to whom I intoxicated???
Rishi says in hurry without realising...
R:mujhe... Tum mujhe nashe men dal diya...
Tanu gets ahock n says...
T:what???
Rishi realises what he had said... Then he says...
R:kuch nhii...
Tanu feels happy inside that rishi is crazy on her...
Meanwhile waitier comes with icecream...

PS:superb update lemon!!! Loved it to the core dear... Woh word dear... U rocked it with ziddi Tanu...
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Waiter come with that order..
Tanu takes first..
Tanu- I have no patience...
Rishi- ha wo to thik rh h..
Tanu- kuch kha??
Rishi- kuch nahi...
Tanu- hhhmm... it's too yummy...tum kya dekh rhe ho..khao na...
Rishi sees tanu's antics...Rishi given smile..n in his mind..
Rishi- kitni cute h...dusri ladkiyo se bilkul alag...
Tanu clicks in front of rishi's eyes...
Tanu- kh kho gaye??? 
Rishi- khahi nahi...
Rishi takes a bite...
Tanu- kaisi lagi???
Rishi- tumne banai h???
N he laughs...
Tanu- hahaha..ho gaya...chupchap baith ke khalo..
Rishi couldn't control his laugh..
Tanu- ab kyu hash rh ho???
Rishi- look at u..tumhe ice cream khana bhi nahi ati...
Tanu- matlb...
Rishi - tumhari nose pe ice cream lagi h...
Tanu- kha per??
Rishi- ruko me krta h..
Rishi takes tissue n swipe..tanu n rishi's eye lock...
That time waiter comes...
Waiter- anything else sir...
They both r jerk..
Rishi angry n say
Rishi- mene tumhe bulaya..nahi na..u may leave...
When waiter goes...rishi sees a man staring at tanu...
Rishi is in anger...meri tanu ko ghur rh...chodunga nahi ise..
Tanu sees rishi's anger...
Tanu- kya hua..tumhe gussa kyu aa rh h...
Rishi- wo ladka tumhe ghur rh h...
Tanu- kha??
Rishi- tumhe ghur rh th..abhi batata hu..uski himmat kaise hui...
Rishi stand ups in anger...tanu holds his hand...rishi jane do..
Rishi is not listen n goes near to that boy...n caught his collar..
Rishi- sharm nahi ati..koi ladki tumhari personal property h jisko tum ghur sakte ho...
That boy scared with rishi n apologize to tanu..
But rishi is anger very much...he wants to hit that person..n when he raise his hand for a slap...tanu holds his hand and pulls out of ice cream parlour...
Rishi- tum mujhe bhar kyu le ayi..me aj us ladke ko aisa sabak sikhata ki wo kabhi kisi ladki ki taraf ankhain utha ke nahi dekhta...
Tanu- rishi..usne sorry to bol diya na ab ghar chalo..plz rishi
Both sits into the car...
Tanu- ek baat puchu??
Rishi- ha pucho..
Tanu- itna gussa krne ki kya jarurt th. .
Rishi- kya jarurt th...koi tumhe aise dekhe or me chupachap beth jau..
Tanu- rishi...usse kya fark padta h...
Rishi- fark padta h..kyuki me tumse...
Tanu- me tumse kya.. 
Rishi thinks n his mind
Rishi-mujhe ye kya ho gaya h...
Tanu sees rishi's possessiveness for her..n thinks about rishi's anger n smile

Ps: wo word for u cotton candy.. every time u rocked baby..plz update soon...I hope u liked this update...

Edited by Smita_rawat - 5 years ago
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T: Bolo na tum mujhse kya???
R:wo...mn...mn...mn tumse ladta hu...
T:ladta hu??? Relation kya hai???
R:wo...actually I was saying that... I don't like someone else fighting with u...
T:fighting?? Kaun mujhse lad raha tha??? He was just staring me... U was d person who fought...
By hearing this rishi answers unknowingly
R:haan... U r right... Because I don't like someone else staring u...
Tanu becomes a little shock n a little bit more happy...just then rishi realise what he had said...
R:no...no... Aise nhii...
T:kya nhii... Tumne khud bola hai...ki...
R:ki kya...
T:ki... U stare me...
R:nhii...I will not stare u...
Rishi(in his mind):rishi beta... Yeh chodne wali nhii hai...
T:phir???
R:I just look at u...
T:iska naam hai bhai staring...
R:bhai??? Bhai mat bolo...
T:ok..bhai...
Rishi looks Tanu with an angry face...
T:oops sorry... Rishi... Ab khush???
R:mm...ok...
T:ab yeh bolo... U always stare me na???
R:nhii...
T:ok...ok... Leave it...
Tanu feels happy n says herself:I know rishi...ki tum mujhse...
She cuts her words n says... Tanu tu kya kya soch rahi ho???
Rishi feels relaxed as Tanu left that matter... There were only silence between them... Tanu said by breaking d silence...
T:u r not getting bored???
R:yes I'm...
T:ok...then lets listen some song???
R:why not???
Saying this rishi plays some song...
Tanu starts enjoying it... Rishi looks at Tanu n smiles...

PS:superb part Lemon... Possessive Rishi...❤️... Poor Tanu... She stucked between Rishi n that person😆... Loved it to the core dear... Hats off u dear...