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DiyaMoni

@TearDrop50

Senior Member

Posted: 5 years ago

Aap dono great writer ho,kitna accha likhti ho yaar,

just loved it...👏

kash mai bhi join kar pati

par mujhe story likhna nehi ata😭

wo word for story ki bich mai cmnts karne ke liye

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Smita

@Smita_rawat

Senior Member

Posted: 5 years ago

Tanu- holds a glass of water but accidently slipping water on rishi's clothes. Ss sorry sorry

Rishi-oh shit!! Ye kya kiya??? Tum ek glass bhi thik se pakad nahi sakti kya??

Tanu- accidently ho gaya jaan bhujkr nahi kiya. Or sorry to bola na mene phir bhi tum.

Rishi- kya sorry tumhare sorry ka me achar dalu. Mujhe to lagta h ye tumne jaan kr hi kiya hoga.

Tanu-angry on rishi but when she sees rishi's clothes she uncontrol her laugh and she is laughing hahaha

Rishi-ek to tumne mujh pe paani bheka or ab haas rhi ho. Firstly rishi irritating with her laughing but after some time he smiled at seeing her and suddenly ye mujhe kya huua.

Ps. I hope u liked it. If any mistake so wo word for that.because i am not a good writer.

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 5 years ago

R in heart: pagal hogya hai tu Rishi...y r a dumb despo Rishi Singh Bedi...

Tanu clicked her fingers in front of Rishi...and says between her laugh...

T: oye fool k square...khn gum hogye ho...

R: oye dumbness ki dukaan yhin hon...have u losted ur eyes...

T: very funny moron...

R: hogya tera...chal ab nikl mere office se...

T: heee...very funny mn q jaon...jise problem hai wo khud jaye...

R: oh hello this is my office...u get lost...dad ki wajah se tmhe bardsht kr rha hon bsss...

T: oh hello tumhre dad ne hi mjhe tmhara PA banaya hai...meet ur new personal assistant moron...

R: what rubbish...how m i gonna bear u whole day...oh God kill me...

T: yup God kill this moron...Earth will be a happy place to live...

R: Arrrggghhh!!! What should i do to u???

T: behave well moron...😛

PS:

@moni...

Give it a try yr...see lemon also did na...

U can do it...plzzz...atleast write two to three lines...

And its totally ok that cmnt in between the story...bcz u were not writing the story...😳

@lemon...

U did a great work babes...

Well done...👏

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Gopika

@gopsss

Goldie

Posted: 5 years ago

Rishi:Behave ur self first... 😡
Tanu:Oye... 😡
Rishi:Oh kya hai yaar...itni choti si baat pe itna gussa...
Tanu:Kya hua tumhe? kyu aise mujhse hamesha lad rahe ho???
Rishi:kya m lad raha hun...Always u r making problems n fighting with me...
Tanu:Mai??? Kya tum blind ho..dekh m, itni sanskari ladki...fight karti hun??? Woh bhi tu jaisa moron k saath😡 😆...
Rishi:Tanu...tum...
Tanu:haan m...
Rishi in his mind "nothing will work with dis girl...oh I have an idea...
Rishi:Haan tum...(he moved forward...now he is more closer to her...Tanu's heart started beating heavily...she is totally affected by his closeness)

Moni dear...come on u can do it... Lemon, kya writings tha...oh Hats off you 👏Edited by gopsss - 5 years ago

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Smita

@Smita_rawat

Senior Member

Posted: 5 years ago

Rishi also feel the same (their eye lock) and suddenly rishi's phone ring (dono chok jate h and move)

Tanu-excuse me n going to washroom. What's wrong with u tanu. Tujhe kya ho gaya th ( tanu feeling very awkward)

Rishi-end phone conversation and thinking about tanu n his closeness. (he is also feeling awkward)

Tanu enters into the cabin and asking about presentation.

Rishi- tum ye kaam time per kr lena n ye rhi file.

Tanu- me hamesha kaam time pe krti hu or ye file mene hi di th aaj subah. (She taunt n smile)

Rishi-ha wo me ye kh rh th ki mene ye file dekh li h. Ok

Both arguing n fighting like tom n jerry.

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Gopika

@gopsss

Goldie

Posted: 5 years ago

Suddenly they heard a knock at the door. Excuse me kya hum andar aaye??
Rishi:Yes... Please... Then he turned towards Tanu...ab tu bach gayi par it will not happen always...
2 men came in... By seeing the Rishi rushed to them n hugged them... They were Yuvraj n Manpreet...Rishi's brother like friends...
Uv n Manpreet: Kya yaar kya ho raha tha...tum aur yeh ladki ke beech mein???😉Abhi bhi tume yeh aadat hai???
Rishi hit Manpreet n Uv's legs...n said: Abhi hi shuru kar diya???

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 5 years ago

Mp: wwooohhh!!!! Hang on bro...who is she??

Tanu comes in between...with all her teeth out...

T: hello myself Tanu Shri..Rishi's P.A...

R: basically my bad luck...

T: hehehe...so true Mr. Rishi Singh Bedi...😉

Uv whispers: patakha hai ye to bro...

T: i m not deaf i can hear u...

Uv: hehehehe...

Mp: bro may be hm kisi or jaga milte hn...ap isko smbhalo...😛

Uv: han sahi...bye bye...

R: arey pr listen guys...

But they leave the office...

R: what the freak man!!!!...

PS: guys we should introduce any villian...think about it...and add in whatever way u want...😳

If i will get the idea..i will introduce...😳

Edited by HayaZehra313 - 5 years ago

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Gopika

@gopsss

Goldie

Posted: 5 years ago

Tanu started teasing Rishi.
Tanu:Rishi...kya hua apne friends k bare mein soch rahe ho??? Oh god doston k beech mei kya understanding hai😉...
Rishi: mere friends k baare mein bol rahi ho...oh teri friends to bahot achi h na???
Tanu:😲...yeh kya h???kya kiya unhe???
Rishi:Us din... Ice-cream parlour mei...tu,Ahana aur jiana k beech mei...😛
Just then Tanu remembered that incident...Tanu and her best friends Ahana and Jiyana were at ice-cream parlour...as like Tanu her friends were also fun loving...

PS:Foxi...i too was thinking about villian... Keep thinking about it...and introduce him...Edited by gopsss - 5 years ago

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Smita

@Smita_rawat

Senior Member

Posted: 5 years ago

Tanu-ye kuch mat bolna mere friends ke baare me😡 Samze.

Rishi-oo tum kuch bhi bol sakti ho mere friends ke baare me.

They arguing n that time somebody knock the door.

Rishi- come in n manager come with a girl

Manager-sir she is new intern neha.

Neha-hello sir

Rishi-hello kya mene tumhe kahi dekha h??

Neha-haha mujhe kon nahi janta.. i mean to say hum padosi h kai salo se

Tanu-tumne ise nahi pechana..tanu teasing neha

Neha is non other than tanu's cousin who is living together in a house but their house is partitioned.

Neha-ha mujhe sb pehchante h. Tumhe kon pechanta h behanji

Rishi intrupt n says hello neha i hope u will learnt alot.

(rishi ko tanu ko behanji khne per bura lagta h)

Rishi-said to neha. Now u may leave

Ps:i hope neha enrty liked by urs. If u don't like it so i erased dis comment.

Edited by Smita_rawat - 5 years ago

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Gopika

@gopsss

Goldie

Posted: 5 years ago

Neha was about to go...but when she saw Tanu with a handsome guy, she was not like in the mood to let her alone...
Neha:Sir...as I am ur new intern I should stay with u...so leave her...
This time both TanShi not felt good. But both controled their anger.
Neha:baahar nikalo behenji...
Tanu was about to leave but Rishi hold her hand and said.
Rishi:Tum mat jao...
Both Tanu n Neha were shocked.
Neha:Kya sir, kyu isse aap jaane se roka???
Rishi:I want to discuss some important issues about next project with her.
Neha: Oh I see...so I want to leave... Ok I'm going.
Neha quickly goes outside n gives angry looks to Tanu.
Tanu:Sir..what is that important project? I'm serious now...
Rishi:kyu itni build up de rhi ho?..😲..I know never u will become serious...
Tanu:really I am serious now...say about the project.
Rishi:okay okay I see... Tmrw mrng we have a meeting with RM international company... So u should be serious about that...dont share it with anyone...
Neha was hearing all these from outside.

PS:Lemon u rocked with Neha entry...superb!!

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