Poem : Their love story...

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Posted: 5 years ago
Their Love Story

Some love stories are divine and so was theirs!

SHE was the Moon and HE was the Sun

Both existed but never together...

The Sun killed himself very night just to make the Moon alive

And the Moon hided herself every morning just to make him shine brighter!

And the same was their love story too...A tale of sacrificing!

A wish to see them together, side by side...

But only to remain unfulfilled!

Were they destined to live apart?

Oh Lord! Whom do we blame for their separation?

Was the mistake his or hers? The question that never had an answer.

They say, always the journey is always beautiful than the destination..

May be, that is why their love story never had a destination!

 


 Some love stories will never have an end..and their love story was one among them!!



*The Sun killed himself very night just to make the Moon alive* I remember reading this as a quote in Google.So the due credit of this line goes to the original author not to me😊


P.S : Assume HE and SHE as Maan and Geet!! If you think of someone else then I am not responsible😈😆

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Posted: 5 years ago
congrats on the poem Madhu! 

sad poem...they were destined not to be together! 

beautifully written! 

thanks for sharing
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Posted: 5 years ago
beautiful lines..
loved the metaphoric use of sun and the moon, for him and her.
as they long for each other to meet, but give away their own existence to make other shine and live.
and beautiful end lines, the journey is ever beautiful than the destination that they never had it.

the sun and the moon, distanced apart,
yet there remains an intense pull, that keeps them moving on their path.


Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
beautiful... this actually remind me of Korean show the moon that embracing the sun
after reading it I so wished their love story too find it's destination but sometimes it's not possible
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: khwaishfan

congrats on the poem Madhu! 


sad poem...they were destined not to be together! 

beautifully written! 

thanks for sharing



Thank you for your lovely comment😃
Sad to see some love stories that were destined not to have a happy ending
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: Drashtilove

Beautiful lines



Thank you soo much😃
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

beautiful lines..
loved the metaphoric use of sun and the moon, for him and her.
as they long for each other to meet, but give away their own existence to make other shine and live.
and beautiful end lines, the journey is ever beautiful than the destination that they never had it.

the sun and the moon, distanced apart,
yet there remains an intense pull, that keeps them moving on their path.




Thank you soo much for your lovely comment🤗

the sun and the moon, distanced apart,
yet there remains an intense pull, that keeps them moving on their path. 👏 👏

@bold-Beautiful ❤️👍🏼

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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

beautiful... this actually remind me of Korean show the moon that embracing the sun

after reading it I so wished their love story too find it's destination but sometimes it's not possible



Oh!!I don't watch K series di..so I don't know about it!
Wish all the love stories have an happy ending...

Destination means it has an end..but may be their love is endless and thats why it doesn't have a destination😳
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

loved it



Glad that you loved it😃
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Posted: 5 years ago
Sad but heart touching 
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