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Poem : Their love story...

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Posted: 10 August 2018 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
Their Love Story

Some love stories are divine and so was theirs!

SHE was the Moon and HE was the Sun

Both existed but never together...

The Sun killed himself very night just to make the Moon alive

And the Moon hided herself every morning just to make him shine brighter!

And the same was their love story too...A tale of sacrificing!

A wish to see them together, side by side...

But only to remain unfulfilled!

Were they destined to live apart?

Oh Lord! Whom do we blame for their separation?

Was the mistake his or hers? The question that never had an answer.

They say, always the journey is always beautiful than the destination..

May be, that is why their love story never had a destination!

 


 Some love stories will never have an end..and their love story was one among them!!



*The Sun killed himself very night just to make the Moon alive* I remember reading this as a quote in Google.So the due credit of this line goes to the original author not to meSmile


P.S : Assume HE and SHE as Maan and Geet!! If you think of someone else then I am not responsibleEvil SmileLOL



Edited by Madhu.. - 13 August 2018 at 10:38am

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Posted: 10 August 2018 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
congrats on the poem Madhu! 

sad poem...they were destined not to be together! 

beautifully written! 

thanks for sharing

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Posted: 10 August 2018 at 7:22pm | IP Logged
Beautiful lines

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Posted: 11 August 2018 at 1:38am | IP Logged
beautiful lines..
loved the metaphoric use of sun and the moon, for him and her.
as they long for each other to meet, but give away their own existence to make other shine and live.
and beautiful end lines, the journey is ever beautiful than the destination that they never had it.

the sun and the moon, distanced apart,
yet there remains an intense pull, that keeps them moving on their path.




Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 11 August 2018 at 2:10am

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Posted: 11 August 2018 at 1:48am | IP Logged
beautiful... this actually remind me of Korean show the moon that embracing the sun
after reading it I so wished their love story too find it's destination but sometimes it's not possible

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Posted: 11 August 2018 at 10:20pm | IP Logged
loved it

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Posted: 12 August 2018 at 12:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by khwaishfan

congrats on the poem Madhu! 

sad poem...they were destined not to be together! 

beautifully written! 

thanks for sharing


Thank you for your lovely commentBig smile
Sad to see some love stories that were destined not to have a happy endingOuch

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Originally posted by Drashtilove

Beautiful lines


Thank you soo muchBig smile

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