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Maaneet New SS - Yeh Dil Pt 7 Updated Page 30 10th Sep

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Prologue 

Yeh dil chahta hai tujko ashiko ki tarah

Dundta hai tuje  deewano ki tarah

Ho durr par kaha manta hai yeh  dil is tarah

Kyunki yeh  dil to chahta hai pyaar tumara

Milu ga jab  tumse  lipat kar rohuga  is tarah

Jaise barish ki bonde chumti hai  mitti ko.

Mujhe mein tu or tu mujh mein sama jayega is tarah

Jaise mein tu or tu mera aks ban junga.


        




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Hello guyss.. Welcome to my new story.. hope u like this story to..
Yeh Dil story of two lovers who met  but then seprate by density. where he did  all this to find his love again but cnt succed. but than after years he saw her but seeing her behaviour  it pained him.. and when he ask about her  she have no ans for any question. 
 But girl have her own Pov she to  love this man  deeply where there is not height of love.  but how can became reason of his distraction  his  reason of  home break.. how can she placed  his wife place. how?? but when again destiny play his game they again met this time  to not seperate  from each other. She did everything what he said  so they can  stay together and happily because yeh Dil ab  bas usko hi chahta hai or usko hi manta hai.. yeh dil ab uska nahii   raha.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Character sketch

Maan Singh Khurana : Future of Khurana construction but he leave everything and join politics and now he  represent Mumbai as MLA . Hardworking dedicated and soft corners for poor and want to  do something for them so their children cnt live in poorly and By the way he  belong to Mumbai.

Geet  : A very simple and  sweet girl. She basically from HP  punjab . where she lived   with her Family and she is trained classical  dancer and  dance  is her passion and yeah She is Maan Wife. they both love each other  but now they all are died

Raj Singh Khurana : Maan Father and current owner of construction  and he really not like maan to join politics but when someone praise maan  he really feel proud. n btw maan Dad and Maan ki jyada nahi banti.. 

Sumitra singh Khurana : Maan mom. love his  son alot and  some time trying to defend his son infront of her husband. but  belong to Village  she  have  some kind of narrow minded thinking..

Savitri Singh Khurana : Maan dadima who live  in village with her younger son and  come mumbai for sometimes to stay with raj family  as she not like this modern fashion and she to  follow old rituals but she love Maan alot  as being elder from all his cousin he is most who get his dada- dadi love. 

Sameera Singh Khurana : Maan First wife. (rest abt her character you will know  while reading) 


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 !!!Part 1 !!

Mumbai a city  of dreams.Many people came to to city to fulfilled their drems. Some get chance and some  rejectedly go back to  their home and  some have no chance to stay back  so they stay there to  wait for their chance and in these  they pick any random job for their survival. Like these many peoples from different fields come to examine their talent and once who pass it quickly they get happy and those rejected they  do not loose hope and think about their surial. As they have full confidence on their talent.

The story start from Nritya Niketan Centre (dance centre) which is on Vasi Mumbai. There is great hustle bustle  on   in and outside of centre as today there is a  dance competition and many big celebrities are joining for this annual function. From Big Cinema to Politicans all are invited. As  Nritya Niketan Centre count as best classical dance school in whole world. Not from India  but from foreign to many people came to learn classical dance .  Mrs  Sonia Sahay  Prinicipal of this centre walking from one end to another to  see preparation and satisfied see left  from there when clerk came to him and  inform that  coming  of guest has start and Chairman Mr Mukesh Sahay who is her husband is calling her Noded her head in yes she left with him and start welcoming guest  with her husband and  few trustee members. One by one  all big name of country  came and shook their hands with them and they pleasantly said  them to go in and wait for function as with in few mins it will start. As clock show 3 pm Mrs Sonia look at his watch and seeing her in tension his husband ask what happened ? Mukesh Mr Khurana MP  is still not arrived. He is chief guest of the function. If he come late then we have to reschedule all performances. Mukesh to looked at his watch and said But MR khurana is  very Punctual about time. Lets wait for 5 mins may be he get s stick in traffic  and Sonia to noded and  then one of trustee came to them and he to ask about chief guest and they heard car voice and seeing car Mrs Sonia take  relief and  looked at peon who forward bouquet of flower to her and she forwarded to her old trustee  to welcome him. As Car stop from driver seat a man in formal  dress BLue dark pant and light blue shirt came and stood nd he about to open the door for minister but back down seeing his eyes and he gulp down his saliva seeing his sir  angry expression and man himself come out and stood infront of them closing  car door and as Man start  walking toward them  many  camera flashes start playing and every media person try to capture every  move of him from different angle as they donot want to  miss any chance. As Man  walk  camera  zoom on his feets to  going upper showing his physique in  white Kurta  that fell till on his knee and Pajama nd  blight grey color Nehru jacket and a small blue color hanky in jacket pocket showing his all magnestic chrisma that  his walk showing that aura that he have while walking and people around him  seeing him while trustee and principal smile looking at him as  he reached near them and  camera at once stop on his face  as he remove his  Glasses and  give it to  blue pant dress man and and shake hands with all when Mr Mukesh  said. Welcome  Mr Khurana and man happily shake his hands with him and said pleasure its all mine  showing his smile on his M type lips and  smile that can kill every girl  and that strong personality  that fear everyone. Come Mr Maan. Said chairman showing way to inside when Maan stop him and  ask Sorry for coming than he look down  saw his wrist watch and said exactly 5 mins. Sorry for your inconvience Mr sahay. But than Mr sahay said not problem Mr khurana I understood Mumbai traffic and maan noded and  maan give  present bouquet  pass to  man calling Adi. Blue pant wearing man come  and take bouquet and maan  look at Mr n Mr Sahay and they move forwards

Maan with other guest take first seat in Hall and  where  speaker of function call him to start annual function and he start  function with huge clapping voice and  Now I will ask Mr Maan Singh to share few words with us  and as   she said these words it share all over the centre and reaching to  everyone ears in green room where a girl  was getting ready and as she about to apply lisptic she get stop for some sec and seeing this one girl ask..? kya hua jaldi kar na . ha Avni  kar rahi hu bas 5 mins tu reetu ko dekh wo tyaar hai na uska first performance hai   while another girl left that girl again start  doing her work. When few  min  later they heard  loud voice of calling the  reetu and suhani name for their act . jaldi kar.. she said to herself and try to put bindi when her mobile beep and seeing name a pleasant smile came to her lips and he quickly hold mobile where she read message. "All the best with a heart shape  and kiss emo  seeing this she blushingly smile  

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