Mysterious Savior. Thread #2part14page35dt 20/2/19 - Page 5

Originally posted by: aishu007

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<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Before giving the review I'm gonna answer to the question in two ways..</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Firstly in guttery way</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">1)whichpart you feel good in this update..??</font>

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<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Well.. All the Ahem-Ahem parts like Rk getting turned on, Ashton sniffing (it was kinda funny)& of course Rishbala make out session😉😳</font>

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<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">2),which part is worst ..??</font>

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<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">When suddenly they stopped making out to my utter disappointment..😭I hoped he would mark her & do something more😉</font>

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<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">3)what I have to improve except language and grammar?</font>

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<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Well.. Just think there is a guttery minded reader is here who is desperately waiting for Rishbala romance so you can often write some streamy romance of Rishbala😳😉(Lol.. I know sometimes I talk like a pervert but only in the matter of Rishbala😳)</font>

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<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">4)what happened with madhu ?</font>

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<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Maybe she didn't loss her memory (don't have a naughty answer for this)</font>

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<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Now the decent side.</font>

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<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">1)whichpart you feel good in this update..??</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Madhu's love confession to Rk..</font>

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<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">2),which part is worst ..??</font>

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<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Well not the worse but I didn't like Rk's decision to erase Madhu's memory.</font>

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<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">3)what I have to improve except language and grammar?</font>

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<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">I love the way you write chechi.. Simple way of writing but make us readers so desperate to read with the twists & turns in the story..</font>

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<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">4)what happened with madhu ?</font>

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<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Same answer may be she didn't forget anyone..</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">*sigh* Now review :)</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">This is a shocking surprise..</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Naan pinakka..😭You didn't say you were going to update when I msged you thank God this time I was able to grab my 1st position😃</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Well I love my Ashton more.. If there was any way to separate the wolf from Rk I would have done it & run away with my Ashton giving Rishabh to Madhu.. Hehe.. He is a sweetheart.. I love when Ashton take over Rk sometime.. My romantic wolf.. So dreamy..!!</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Rk.. You better hear your wolf's words how dare you even think of erasing Madhu's memory.. Even if you plan to leave her we won't let you.. Rachana chechi won't let you.. Hena chechi..??</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Oh my.. Madhu baby.. I loved your trick.. I know why you asked for Ashton coz he is the most romantic wolf & won't resist you .. Don't worry Madhu Ashton won't let Rishabh go away from you & he will pursue Rishabh until he agress with him.. Hr can't always switch him back..</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Why everyone was wondering looking at madhu at last ..??</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Waiting eagerly for the next part ..</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Update soon..</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Thanks for the pm chechi :)</font>

Originally posted by: janumkrk

SAME HERE AISHU, I ALWAYS LIKE RK WHATEVER BE AND HOWEVER A JERK HE BE BUT IN THIS FF I HAVE FALLEN FOR ASHTON MORETHAN RK...

HE IS SUPER COOL, UNDERSTANDING AND ROMANTIC...

LOVE YOU ASHTON.. UMMAHHH.