Ye Un Dino Ki Baat Hai

OS: Agrawals ka Jamai

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After several speculations on Naina-Sameer's break-up, and Naina's scirest nightmare, I had a dream of my own. So, here is a very short OS about Naina's dream coming true. Fir kya hota? What if instead of Arjun, actually she and Sameer were the targets.

Sameer gave his telephone number to the police to save them both. The police confirmed that he was from Maheshwari family and set them free, but since they were a bit outside the main city limits, the inspector decided to accompany them to the girl's house.
Upon opening the door, everyone was eager to wish Naina a happy birthday and surprise her but their words died in the throat when they saw her with a boy and the police. The boy none other than Sameer.
"Yeh sab kya hai Naina? boomed her papa.
"Papa...wo...papa...mein...wo hum... Naina stuttered and couldn't form a coherent sentence.
The police interrupted "Hum batate hai kya hua tha. The ynarrated how these two were mistaken for being a part of the alcohol party in the car that had beer bottles. But since Sameer belonged to the Maheshwari family, and owing to their high and clean reputation, they were set free. Then, the police left.
Rakesh came forward and slapped Naina hard. "Tu iss bigdail ameerzade ke saath kar kya rahi thi?
On the other side, Tauji "Toh yeh thi tumhari aaj ki extra class?
"O bai, meine toh pehle hi kaha tha, ladkiyon ko chutt mat do, ek din muh kaala karengi aur khandaan ki izzat le doobegi...ab lo dekh lo.
Naina tried to explain half crying and trying to utter, "Taiji...aisa...hmm...humne...aisa kuch...kuch nahi kiya.
"Chup kar karamjali...Jawani ki aag itni umad rahi thi...akeli jawan ladki ek jawan ladke ke saath kya karegi yeh hume mat sikha. And Taiji also came forward to slap her hard.
Sameer had enough now, he came forward and shielded her from another slap. "Buss kijiye Taiji, Naina ki koi galati hai. Aaj Naina ka birthday tha to hum use celebrate karne chale gaye the. Hamari gaadi kharab ho gayi aur isiliye yeh sab ho gaya. Aur yeh sheher se bahara jaane ka saara idea bhi mera tha. Naina ki koi galati nahi hai.
Rakesh came forward angrily, jerked him holding his collar and slapped him. "Teri himmat kaise hui meri beti ke aas paas bhi fatakne thi. Aur tu Naina, iss ammerzaade ke saath chali kyon gayi?
"Wo.. Papa...wo mein...wo... Naina stammered again.
Sammer saw her dilemma and decided to take a stand and braced himself for the repercussions. "Kyonki Naina aur mein ek dusre se bahut pyar karte hai.
Everyone was shocked. Rakesh involuntarily let go off his collar. Tauji slapped his forehead, Taiji's eyes widened in shock and mouth formed a large O. Chachiji lost her balance and slumped on the swing, while Chachaji remained stunned.
Taiji was the first one to start ranting again. "Humne tumhe apna samjha, Bholuram kaha, apne ghar mein rakha, aur tumne hamare saath yeh kiya...Khoob samajti hoon, tum jaise ameer ladkon ko. Bholi bhali ladkiyon ko fasante hai, maze lete hai aur fir barbad karke chod dete hai. Hey bhagwan...
Then, she held Naina by the arms and shook her. "Aise sanskaar diye hai humne tujhe? Arre hum Agarwal hai...Maheshwariyon mein bhi shaadi nahi karte...aur tu iske saath gulcharre uda rahi hai. Are yeh toh ladka hai...par tu toh barbad ho gayi...ab jaa hume bhi zeher de de aur khhud bhi mar ja.
"Taiji please, humne aisa kuch nahi kiya jisse hamare parivaron ko sharminda hona pade. Hum sach mein pyar karte hai ek dusre se aur hamara pyar bilkul pavitra aur masoom hai. Sameer tried to defend them.
Rakesh came forward to slap him again but Chachaji stopped him and confronted Naina in a condescending tone. "Naina, Sameer jo bol raha hai wo sach hai kya?
"Chachaji...wo...hum... he raised a hand and stopped her "Sirf haan ya na Naina. Sameer jo keh raha hai, kya wo sach hai Naina? in a raised inflection.
Naina looked down, nodded, then slowly looked up, met his eye and still crying but declared boldly "Ji Chachaji...hum school ke dinon se hi ek dusre se pyar karte hai.
Chachaji clenched his eyes and a tear drop escaped. Naina couldn't bear this and she tried to justify herself "Chachaji...mein... He cut her in between.
"Naina...tum mera guroor thi, mera abhimaan...tu hamesha mujhe apne bachchon se jyaada pyari thi kyonki mujhe tujhpe vishwas tha ki tu mera bharosa kabhi nahi todegi...aaj tune uss bharose ko tod diya, mujhe bahut nirash kiya Naina. He closed his eyes and went to sit on the sofa as is his balance and faith were shaken from within.
Naina looked on helplessly and tried to go to him and comfort him and describe everything in detail. She had always thought that in testing times, Chachaji would be her sole support. Even Chachiji refused to look at her, so hurt they were.
Rakesh was flabbergasted at Naina, he stopped her from coming more inside. He held her hand "Bahut pyar ka bhoot sawar hai na tujhpar? Iss nalayak aur nikkamme ladke par bhaorsa hai na, jiske liye tune apne parivaar ka naam, meri izzat sab mitti mein mila diye...theek hai fir nikal ja iss ghar se...ja apne aashiq ke saath. Hum bhi dekhte hai ki wo ek ghar se nikali hui ladki ka kahan tak saath deta hai and threw her outside the house.
She would have fallen and hurt herself on the threshold but Sameer caught her in time and straightened her. "Rakesh Sir, mei Naina se bahut pyar karta hoon aur mein uska saath kabhi nahi chodunga. Aur Taiji, Yeh Agrawal aur Maheshwariyon ke beech ka fark mujhe samajh mein nahi aata, par Naina ki shaadi toh mujhse hi hogi.
Rakesh was fuming rage and glared red daggers at him. In his anger, he pushed them both physically out...Jao jo karna hai karo, aajse tu hamare liye marr gayi and he slammed the door.
Naina was shocked for a second and then started banging the door to open "Papa...please meri baat suniye...Chachaji...Chachiji...humne kuch galat nahi kiya...please meri baat suniye she continued to bang a few more times and while everyone was crying and shocked, no one opened the door.
Finally, Sameer had had enough of seeing her in so much pain when she broke down and settled on the floor outside the door, head leaning against it and crying her heart out.
He too knelt in front of her, held her hands and then wiped her tears. "Naina, buss karo...ab chalo yahan se...Naina please chalo.
"Nahi Sammer, yeh mera ghar hai...mein sabko chodke kahan jaoongi? She shook her head firmly "Nahi, jab tak darwaza nahi khulega, mein yahi baithi rahoongi, mein kahi janewali.
He knew she was devastated and he had to act the strong and mature one. "Naina please, please meri baat suno...iss waqt sab bahut gusse mein hai. Iss waqt yeh log hamari baat nahi samjhenge. Please chalo mere saath. I promise hum saath milkar sab kuch theek kar lenge. Hum sabko mana lenge Naina. Tum chinta mat karo...bharosa hai na apne Sameer par?
She could finally see some sense and nodded.
"Buss fir...iss waqt chalo mere saath... He helped her up, held her hand and came down, hailed an auto and took her to his home.
Mamaji was also pacing like an angry tiger waiting for the news of his cub, specially after the police phone call.
The moment he saw him "Sonu beta, kahan reh gaya tha? Kya hua? Police ne kyon pakda tha?
"Arre aap shanti se pehle ladke ko saans toh lene dijiye, pacified Mamiji "Bahu, zaraa pani toh la and then her eyes fell on Naina, who was trying to be inconspicuous behind Sameer.
"Tu...? Tu toh wahi mehndiwali hai na? kya naam tha...haan...Kammo? Tu yahan kya kar rahi hai? Sameer...yeh tere saath yahan kya kar rahi hai?
"Mamiji...iska naam Naina hai. Aur yeh mere saath padhti hai, school ke dinon se...aur iss waqt ise yahan mein leke aaya hoon.
"Mamaji..aaj wo... and Sameer continued to narrate the entire incident. He was afraid, but seeing Naina shaking visibly, he was the one who had to handle the matter currently and not give in to his panic.
"Mamaji...Mamji...Naina aur mein ek dusre se bahut pyar karte hai...abhi iske gharwalon ne hamare baarein jaankar ise ghar se nikal diya, toh mein ise yahan le aaya.
"Sameer beta...aise kaise tu kisi bhi ladki ko ghar uthakar la sakta hai? Aur yeh aisi hogi isiliye iske gharwalon ne ise nikal diya hoga...yeh yahan nahi reh sakti, buss, decreed Mamiji.
Mamaji was also speechless and didn't say anything in his defence.
"Theek hai, agar aap log Naina ko ghar mein nahi aane denge, toh mein bhi yahan se chala jaoonnga. Mein pyar karta hoon Naina se, aur aise use aadhi raat ko akele sadkon pe bhatakne ke liye nahi chod sakta. He held her hand, "Chalo Naina.
While leaving he turned back "Mamaji...aap toh hamesha kehte hai na ki aapke kakusa ki har baat aap ke liye paththar ki lakeer hai. Naina aur mere baarein mein Nanu jaante the aur unhone khud hume aashirwad diya tha, Nani ki saree Naina ko dekar.
This statement got through Mamaji and when he saw Sameer turning to leave, "Ek minute ruk...kya kaha tune? Kakusa ne tum donon ko aashirwad diya tha? Wo tum donon ke baarein mein jaante the?
Sameer only nodded. "Jab kakusa ne razaamandi de di, toh mein kaun hota hoon aitraaz karnewala?
"Yeh aap kya ke rahe ji Mamiji still not convinced.
"Prabha...tu meri baat sun...Mein kakusa ke khilaaf nahi ja sakta...Sonu unki di hui sabse badhi zimmedari hai. Aur itna toh mujhe yakeen hai Sonu par ki wo Kakusa ka naam lekar khooth nahi bolega. Aur fir agar humne iss ladki ko ghar mein nahi aane diya, toh Sonu bhi chala jaayega. Prabha, iss ladki ki fikr nahi hai abhi, par aadhi raat ko Sonu ko sadkoon pe bhatakne ke liye nahi chod sakte na...hamara bachcha hai yeh. Mamaji explained.
"Sahi keh rahe aap...iss ladki ke baarein mein hum baad mein faisla karenge. Abhi hume apne Sonu ke baarein mein sochna hoga.
"Sonu beta, tu ja apne kamre mein jakar aaram kar, aur bahu iss ladki ko mehmanonwale kamre mein le jao. Aaj raat yeh wahi rahegi, subah dekhenge kya karna hai. Mamaji instructed Poonam bhabhi.
"Ji papaji...Aao Naina. Poonam bhabhi smiled at Sameer and directed Naina to follow her. Naina still couldn't stop shaking, looked at Sameer, and upon his slight nod and yes with eye blink, she followed bhabhi to the guest room.
After a while, Bhabhi came with some food and milk in Sameer's rom, where he was pacing in nervousness and anxiety.
As soon as he saw her "Bhabhi...Naina kaisi hai?
"Bahut pyari hai Sameer bhaiyaa. Aapne kitni sundar aur pyari devrani dhoondhi hai hamare liye.
Sameer smiled and rolled his eyes "Usne kuch khaya?
"Nahi bhaiyya...hum khana lekar toh gaye the, par wo ekdum sunn hai...kuch bol bhi nahi rahi, buss ek tak khidki ke bahar dekh rahi hai...aur kaanp rahi hai...hume lagta hai, bahut zyada dari hui hai...par hamari kisi bhi baat ka asar nahi ho raha hai.
After a while, when everyone slept, Sameer slowly moved to the guest room to check on her. He saw her silhouette from the door in the same position as Bhabhi had described a couple hours ago. He knocked once and entered to avoid startling her but she wasn't paying any attention.
"Naina... she didn't respond and he slightly touched her shoulder. She jerked as if someone scorched her.
"Mein hoon. She turned and he saw her eyes. They weren't crying but the light had gone away. A soul was broken and what faced him was a shell of Naina. Tonight's happenings had killed something inside her forever, not one of her family members had stood by her or tried to understand her point of view, even her Chachaji, who was her father figure and whom she trusted implicitly.
He held her hands "Naina...tum please chinta mat karo...mein hoon na tumhare saath...hum sab kuch theek kar denge...unhne iss tarah achanak pataa chala iss liye sabko itna dhakka laga...thoda waqt beet jaayega, toh unka gussa bhi shaant ho jayega...fir hum sabko mana lenge...tumhare papa ko bhi.
He smiled and finally, she responded with a slight smile, and then hugged him. He knew he had a long way to go to mend the broken trust and the broken relationships. Naina had done her part by standing by him against her family and now it was his turn to get her family back and himself be a part of it. Unlike her family, he could never make her choose between them and him. He had to make all of them one. He sighed, took in a deep breath and muttered to himself "Mein toh duniya mein aaya hi hoon...Agarwal khaandan ki problems solve karne... and smiked.
"Kuch kaha tumne? Naina looked up at him.
"Haan...yahi ki mein Agrawal khandan ka henowala Jamai hoon... and he winked at her.

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Awe it's simply amazing beautifully describe 
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Nice one and thanks for the pm dear. 
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Nice one !! Loved it ...especially the closing line.. πŸ˜‰
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Nice one dear excellent os and agar sach me esa hua hota na to sameer easehi naina ka sath deta ..nd thanks for the pm dear..
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Absolutely amazing
I really admire the headstrong Sameer
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wow yaar.. kaash aise kuch hota serial mein😳
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Awesome Radhika ...
Jamai raja rocks always

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Loved the way how you dealt with the reactions of the family, I could actually feel like watching it on tv. 
Be it taiji's taunts or Chachiji's shaken faith, all was written and described so perfectly.
Although you limited it to a short os but still in limited words you were able to convey all the feelings beautifully. πŸ‘

Awesome. β€οΈ

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Radhika...it was tooo good πŸ‘
Great effort in penning down the reactions I could entirely visualize it.⭐️

But the highlight was Sameer's stand for Naina, he stood for her in front of both their families. Their Love is simply magical. Even in worst of the times, Naina's trust on him is inexplicable πŸ˜Š

"Mein toh duniya mein aaya hi hoon...Agarwal khaandan ki problems solve karne" : This was πŸ€£ πŸ˜†πŸ˜†