New MG FF-Love..Hate...Revenge..???Remove Note on pg21 - Page 4

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Posted: 5 years ago
Part 1

emotional update! well written! 

Maan doing the prayers for his parents! he is a can go to any extent to get what he wants! 

Its Annie's bday! 

She wants Dev to take her to the pub! 

update soon! 

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Posted: 5 years ago
Wonderful pt 1 
And cs
Annie threatening dev from bhai name 
and blackmailing dev fr taking hr in pub with him
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Posted: 5 years ago
Great update
Maan is making me angry but would wait for his past 2 reveal
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Posted: 5 years ago
I have a suggestion regarding the character sketch.
Geet is 8 years younger than Maan... can you change her age to 22?
Edited by khwaishfan - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
lovely start
maan and his family nice but he lost in past
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: aparna3011

very nice update


Thnku dear😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: maaneetfavo

Emotional start and lovely sibling bonding


seems like maan totally changed after their parents, he was strong man, he thought emotion is weakness so he did not show emotion, so sad annie birthday as her birthday death day same day.. poor girl ..love annie & dev so little cute fight, dev just scare hearing annie calling maan.. annie demand, dev like irritating annie but in her safety he behave like big bro..lovely start dear 
continue dear ðŸ˜³


Thnk u dear
Yes but his future will change him

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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

nice start
Maan is so cold person...i guess his past made him like this
his family nice


Thnk u dear😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: swapna.p

Nice update..

Continue soon..


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Posted: 5 years ago
hi there...are u updating?