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New MG FF-Love..Hate...Revenge..???Note on pg14

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Posted: 15 May 2018 at 11:45am | IP Logged
First thnk u guys for ur support hope u like my story


Prolong: 

A girl is danching in rain with her full of life..she is enjouying without knowing the trouble  is coming in her life
She never know about the word trouble , hate, problem...she only know only one word n that his lovee...
On the other side a man is drenched in rain seeing her destination who is enjoying in rain 
He is near to his prey but he has to wait to destroy her life...he don't know about the word love, happiness, smile...he only know about hate, revenge, n destroy...His enemy in any cost 
He left from there promising himself that he will runined everyone who destroy his family n their happines...

Index: 

Characters sketch : pg 3

Part 1: pg 4
Part 2: pg 7
Part 3: pg 11
Part 4: pg13



Hope u all like it sorry for mistake..

Imp note: its is totaly my imagination it is coincident if it is similar from other story if that plz inform mw i will stop my story at the right place ...


Edited by Maanheart - 01 August 2018 at 1:18am

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Posted: 15 May 2018 at 11:53am | IP Logged
Nice prolong Smile

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Posted: 15 May 2018 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
once again welcome to the forum! 

lovely prologue! 

waiting for character sketch and updates

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Posted: 15 May 2018 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
congrats for story
interesting
continue soon

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Posted: 15 May 2018 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
Interesting prologue.
Waiting for update.

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Posted: 15 May 2018 at 5:37pm | IP Logged
congrats on new story
lovely prologue

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Posted: 15 May 2018 at 6:47pm | IP Logged
Interesting prologue.wl love to read your story.send u buddy request.Smile

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Posted: 15 May 2018 at 11:07pm | IP Logged
looking forward to read it

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