Vidit ts: the other 'her' in his life

Posted: 5 years ago

In this story viditi are happily married and are about to complete 1 year of marriage. But recently vikrant has started behaving differently. So lets find what is troubling our handsome ACP saheb? Is it vanraj? Or the other her' in his life.

Aditi and Vikrant had just came out of the lift and were walking towards their flat yes their flat'  ever since they decided to get married he  wanted to bring her in their house' and not his house' , a house that belonged to them and not just him , a house that had thing nurtured by them and their love. So he bought this flat and brought his beautiful bride in this beautiful house.

Present time:

Aditi and Vikrant had just came out of the lift and were walking towards their flat after long hours of shopping.

Vikrant : acha aditi tum chalo main thodi der mein ata hoon .

Aditi : arey par jaa kahan rahe ho. Abhi toh ayi han.

Vikrant : woh main apna phone car mein bhool gaya .

Aditi : tum bhi naa pata nahi aaj kal kahan dhayan rahta hai tumhara.

Vikrant just dashed away back to the lift while aditi went to the flat carrying all the shopping bags.

After 30 mins

Aditi : yeh hai kahan yaar half an hour ho gaya phone lene gaya hai buy kar ne gaya hai (and was about to go out but at that precise moment her darling husband entered )

Aditi : kahan the tum adha ghanta lagta hai car se phone lane mein

Vikrant : woh... woh rastein mein ravi mil gaya tha.

Aditi : oh aur tumhare hairs ko kya ho gaya ( when she noticed his ruffled hairs)

Vikrant : woh aaj hawa bohot chal rahi hai, chalo main kuch khane ke liye cook hoon(he deserved it, my poor foodie baby)

With that while vik went to kitchen , aditi went to balcony she started taking off the clothes they had put to dry off from the hanger.

Aditi: kapdhe toh abhi abhi bhi gilein haan yahan hawa nahi chal rahi thi kiya. And with that she started thinking about vik's changed behavior since few days.

Next day early in the morning aditi( in her night gown) came out of the bedroom looking for vikrant. She had looked in the bathroom, kitchen, guest room but he was no where to be seen not even in the drawing room. But then she heard his voice. It came from balcony. There he stood the man she had been looking and calling since morning. But  wait a minute he was talking to someone and that too in a very jolly mood. But as soon as he saw he cut the call and came back to living room.

so just let me know about your views😃

Edited by mitras - 5 years ago
Posted: 5 years ago
Sister? Neighbor ki 4 saal ki beti?
Mujhe Janna Hai! Update soon!😛
Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by mitras


maybe somebody else
Mom? Coz 100% gf nahi hai
Posted: 5 years ago
Vik adu pe cheat kar raha hai Kya ?? 
Mujhe jannna hai ... Jaldi update kardo pls
Posted: 5 years ago
Hahahaha cute tha...but wait vik adu ko cheat nhi kar sakta...yr kuch unexpected hoga...please jaldi update karna...can't wait
Posted: 5 years ago
Koi friend...
Kahi yeh Vicky ki chaal to nehi...he is planning something big for her and adu ko chirane ne k liye koi prank...
Well waiting for next part...update soon
Posted: 5 years ago
thanks for the encouraging comments here goes 
part 2

But as soon as he saw he cut the call and came back to living room.

Vikrant : arrey aditi tum uth gaye kafi jadi.

Aditi: same applies to you too.

Vikrant : who maine socha todhi fresh hawa mein baithoon isliye.

Aditi : ohh waise phone pe kisse baat kar rahe the?

Vikrant : jo... joshi se.

Aditi itni subha!!

Vik: haan...woh socha subha uth hi gaya toh lets do some work.

Adi: itna has has ke .

Vik(after thinking for a while): arrey woh aise hi kuch idhar udhar ki baatein

Adi : aur mujhe dekh te hi phone cut kar dia.

Vik: baat ho gayi toh phone kaat dia.  (and gave nervous smile to his wife ). Aur tum yeh sab chodo get ready aaj jaldi nikalte hain.(and gave her a peck on her cheek and left for taking bath)

Aditi was very much sure that vik was lying,her years of experience in the force helped but in vikrant's case it was different she knew this man as the back of her hand, his nervous smile, a peck on her cheek  all showed his fear. But fear of what? Was vanraj back ? or it was some other thing or...other woman. Recently she was interrogating a woman about her husband's missing case.

(Flashback)

When that woman left , a lady constable who was recording the statement said to lady SI  "pakka iske mard ka bahar lafda hogeye

Adi: lafda' kaisa matlab?

PI: saalo ka tajurba madam. harkatein bata rahi hain iske naure ka kisse aur ke sath chakkar chal raha hoga.

Constable: areey madam abhi boli na yeh ki iska naure aaj kal ajeeb sa kya bole...woh behave karne laga. Isse alag thal rahein laga, phone pe kisse se has has ke baat kar raha tha aur isko dekh kar phone kat diya, raat ko der se aana, chupke se bahar jana aana bas

Adi: toh ho sakta hai use koi aur problem koi loan liya ho ya koi black mail kar raha ho.

SI: par yeh abhi boli na ki iske pati ke shirt se ek lady perfume ki smell aa rahi thi jo iska perfume nahi tha.

Adi: par sath mein yeh bhi toh boli ki inki love marriage thi.

SI: love ho ya arrange  yeh pyaar vyaar shuruat ke chaar din hi rahta hai Phir to gahr ki murgi daal barabar aur bahar ki daal murgi barabar hi lagti hai

Aditi started pondering on the whole thing. At last the case was solved and it turned out that the husband had a affair and had ran away with the other girl.

(Flasback ends)

Aditi (self thought): aise nahi hai mera vikrant woh aise nahi karega par phir who aise kyun behave kar raha maybe you are overthinking it hamesha police wala dimag hi chalaya kar and went to kitchen to fix them some breakfast but her mind kept on wondering the same thing. At  last she could not take it anymore and decided to call joshi but first she made sure that vikrant was still in the washroom. She peeked in the bedroom and found it empty but heard vikrant singing songs in his terrible voice which meant he was still taking a bath.  Instantly she called joshi.

Joshi: gud mrning mam aaj itni subah.

Aditi : itni subah! Kyun vikrant sir ne aap ko woh info ke liye phone nahi kiya.

Joshi: nahi main to abhi soo ke utha aap batha do agar kuch kaam hai toh.

Aditi: nahi kuch nahi woh main todhi der mein call  karungi. And she cut the call. Tears were brimming in her eyes . why would he lie to her and since when did he started lying to her? 

In night

Aditi was sleeping on her side of bed while vikrant was lying on his side of bed. Nearly at 12:45 a message beeped in vikrant's phone. After reading the message he got up wore his shirt and went out of the house not before making sure aditi was fast asleep and came back after 30 to 40 minutes but what he did't notice was that even aditi was also awake now  but she layed quietly she kept facing away from him and started crying silently.

Next morning aditi did not wake up at time so vikrant went to her bed side and woke her up.

Vik: aditi uth jayo janna aaj?

Aditi(without a mood said): nahi

Vik: kyun kya huya? Tabiyaat to thik hai tumhari(started caressing her face)

Aditi: nahi I am not feeling ok today (and faced other side)

Vik was quite taken aback from her behaviour but didn't say anything and left for shaitan chowki.

Aditi remained as such in the bed and started remembering the old days their courtship, marriage, honeymoon in kerala. But eventually she got up and started doing the household chores she thought why to waste time when she had taken the day off. She started picking up the clothes for washing but when she layed her hands vikrant's shirt her heart missed a beat. It smelled of a perfume that didn't belonged to them at all and most importantly it smelled jasmine which meant it was a female perfume. Also the shirt was torn from one side and it's upper two button were broken. She slumped on the ground with her back resting on the bed side and remained as such.

let me know your views.
Posted: 5 years ago
Arre nhiii ye kya ho gya????? Vik ne adu ko cheat kia NO yr...usne... Yr mujhe toh kuch bhi samajh mein nhi aa raha...please jaldi update karna please...aage kya hoga...fight????? Pata jaldi karna...
Posted: 5 years ago
Omggg!!! Jaldi update karo next part!! I cant wait yaar
Posted: 5 years ago
Vikrant can't do this .. Pakka misunderstanding Hui hai... He can't do that...
Waiting eagerly for next update...pls pls update soon...

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