Abhiya TS - I Can Die For You *sequel link added* COMPLETED - Page 4

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Posted: 5 years ago
Please give a season 2 for this story plzzz loved it but the end it still to come
Asshi... thumbnail
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: arwakantawala

Please give a season 2 for this story plzzz loved it but the end it still to come

Thanks dear. Am glad you liked it.
I'm back now so I think I'll post season two. It will take sometime though.😊
Thank you.
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Asshi...

Thanks dear. Am glad you liked it.
I'm back now so I think I'll post season two. It will take sometime though.😊
Thank you.

well come back dearπŸ€—
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteariya

well come back dearπŸ€—


Thank you sweety πŸ˜›
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Posted: 5 years ago
Oh my god!!
My heart is beating so fast with the over load of emotions and suspense!!
For now res...
I will unres it after so me hours!!
Unres..
Ok so I am here to give my review on the this utmost beautiful piece!!
I loved it Asshi!! (I hope that is your name only??)
It was a beautiful concept which you executed excellently!
Sad yet totally mind blowing!
Till the end it kept me hooked!!
Ananya!! I didn't get her dialogue that she is glad she isn't Arjun's daughter?
It was a bit confusing otherwise you nailed it totally!
Abhay was such a gem!
My heart went out when I read his pleads!!
Haseena's treachery was also a shock for me. 
I was expecting Arjun to betray him by the way Abhay was again and again mentioning about his trust on him.
Piya!! πŸ˜­
She accepted him wholeheartedly!!
She loved him wholly and was expecting a baby!!
I really felt horrible when I read about Abhay dying but his dialogue's were lit girl!!
Then comes the ending!!
The trees began to giggle as the blue eyes glittered once again!
This was the line I guess.. My fav. line!
It is one of your best piece according to me!!
Totally Amazing!!
I loved it!!
I am glad that I visited this forum and gave this story a try!!
I would have been my loss if I wouldn't have read it!!
Update the sequel soon!!
Can't wait for it!!
Edited by Silver_Shiver - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Silver_Shiver

Oh my god!!

My heart is beating so fast with the over load of emotions and suspense!!
For now res...
I will unres it after so me hours!!


Thank you!
Am glad you took time to read it.
Do comment your views I'll look forward to it.

Tell me do you want the sequel too? I'm working on it though will like to hear your opinion on it.
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Asshi...


Thank you!
Am glad you took time to read it.
Do comment your views I'll look forward to it.

Tell me do you want the sequel too? I'm working on it though will like to hear your opinion on it.


You are welcome!!
I am lucky that i read it!!
Will comment in sometime for sure!!

Is it something to ask??
I DEADLY WANT A SEQUEL GIRL!!
I am dying to read how abhay will be back to avenge them!!!
Thanks for giving me such importance dear!
Yes i want a sequel plz!! Great you are working on it all ready!!I
I cant wait for it!!
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Posted: 5 years ago
Unres above on page #5!! 😊 Edited by Silver_Shiver - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
Wow,  I am speechless. What a story. There is everything in it.  Abhay pain and torture is heart wrenching. Poor Abhiya had to go through so much due the betrayal of Arjun and Haseena.   So Ananya's father is Arjun.  I cannot wait till Abhay return for revenge please make a season 2.  My mind is going through all sorts of possible scenarios. I am glad Ananya will not forgive Arjun and is super mad.  What Arjun did is  unforgivable.Ananya is attracted to Abhay's picture.  Maybe she could be piya's reincarnation since she not abhiya's daughter. How many years have passed since piya's death.  Poor piya had to choose between her love and babyand had to kill herself in process.
 Please continue soon.
I loved it
Very well written. 
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Silver_Shiver

Oh my god!!

My heart is beating so fast with the over load of emotions and suspense!!
For now res...
I will unres it after so me hours!!
Unres..
Ok so I am here to give my review on the this utmost beautiful piece!!
I loved it Asshi!! (I hope that is your name only??)
It was a beautiful concept which you executed excellently!
Sad yet totally mind blowing!
Till the end it kept me hooked!!
Ananya!! I didn't get her dialogue that she is glad she isn't Arjun's daughter?
It was a bit confusing otherwise you nailed it totally!
Abhay was such a gem!
My heart went out when I read his pleads!!
Haseena's treachery was also a shock for me. 
I was expecting Arjun to betray him by the way Abhay was again and again mentioning about his trust on him.
Piya!! πŸ˜­
She accepted him wholeheartedly!!
She loved him wholly and was expecting a baby!!
I really felt horrible when I read about Abhay dying but his dialogue's were lit girl!!
Then comes the ending!!
The trees began to giggle as the blue eyes glittered once again!
This was the line I guess.. My fav. line!
It is one of your best piece according to me!!
Totally Amazing!!
I loved it!!
I am glad that I visited this forum and gave this story a try!!
I would have been my loss if I wouldn't have read it!!
Update the sequel soon!!
Can't wait for it!!


Thanks sweetie!πŸ˜›
Am so happy that you liked it.

About Ananya dialogue then it is what you read. I left it for a purpose.  I'll clear it in sequel.

As for haseena treachery then i left hint in first update. The way Arjun talked about her love there was something amiss no?

I too felt bad while writing this story. It was the first time I wrote something tragedic. But the emotions were key. And am glad it worked on readers. It made me feel like yes I did it in a nice way.

Hehe that line was meant to be loved no?πŸ˜‰