first congratulations to winners and nominated members both of you...as writer's are missing ๐lets talk with with some readers
( reader )
1)Hey , In poll Firesafirefire & --Dia-- story lead the poll in Missing Writer Category, few words for writer
I feel they should come back and do write more and complete the ones they had pending
2)As reader, what you expect from writer
To complete the stories whenever they find time
3) as per poll you are reader of all story or only few, share some remembrance of story with us of that writer which you are waiting to till
Hehe I read only a few stories but yes I'm eagerly waiting for the return of Telly me to complete her Bandhan/ Rakshak ...Neha to complete her Sajda and Remya to complete her Bring it on ...I loved these stories and still waiting also there is You and me one on one really want that to be completed too still waiting for these ..
4) You also a writer too, I hope you have no plan of disapper
Actually I do may be by Mid April or May whenever I end up completing all my ongoing stories
5) And as reader now my question for you, when you planning to give update of your story
Will try updating soon ...I'm in a writer's block now hehe so my updates are late than they used to be ..
1)Hey , In poll Firesafirefire & --Dia-- story lead the poll in Missing Writer Category, few words for writer
About firesafirefire I don't think she is coming back but luck can always be at readers side and i wish to see her back.. I have read her story mahsoos.. I really loved it but it feels cheated when writer leaves in mid of the story to be completely disappearedand About dia.. I love her writing and Baawre Nain and Rain are my favorite story by her..but i want to say honestly that I have stopped to read her new story as she is taking too much time to update the next update...So I will be waitng for her to finish her new stories first then read..But I must say she is an awesome readers..I find her work even better then the most famous writer of this forum..
2)As reader, what you expect from writer
As a reader I just want the writers to finish their stories as soon as possible and than take the break
3) as per poll you are reader of all story or only few, share some remembrance of story with us of that writer which you are waiting to till
I would like to talk about Mahsoos and Rain About Mehsoos-----I liked the bind Maan much here ..as i know it's fiction and in real no normal person can be this much perfect in real even he is not blind.leave aside the person who is visually impaired but I truly love Maan in this fiction..Fiction hai to sab kuchh chalta hai ----About Rain----Relation of Maan and geet went thru so much upsa and down in this story and they both suffered without any of their faults.. Now they are married..I hope things are going to be fine soon between them ..but this is possible only when she will come and update it
4) You also a writer too, I hope you have no plan of disapper
NO I don't have any such plan I just love to be here and getting this much love from readers ..I would be prove myself a fool if I disappear leaving this behind..Jab tak Geet Forum hai and I m able to create a story..I m here.. jis din dimag kaam akrna band kar dega uss din forum chhodna majboori ho jaayegi
5) And as reader now my question for you, when you planning to give update of your story
Aaj hi
thanks to both of you for giving some of your valuable time ๐
Mr
khurana her condition is very critical we can only save baby or mother . Tell
your decision first
sa-ve-e the baby doctor he only replied
not looking anywhere . Doctor surprised for few second then went to start
operation . Maan set on nearby chair , hating himself for saving that child
whom he hates so much .
Saheb hum apse kuch maangna chate hai , ap doge Maan want to shout at her but controlled as
her eyes getting wet because of tears ' uff women and their best weapon '
hmm
bolo he asked totally
disinterest..
agar kabhi koyi aasa mauka khari ho, ki mein or meri bacchi ke beech koyi ek
bach sakta hai , ap meri bache ko chunoge she finished with lots of hopes in her voice saheb waada kijiye
Maan only smirk at her , yes he is not surprised at her demand damn why I even bother to take her hospital
disturbing my sweet sleep he didn't
bother to hide his irritation as usual Geet kept quiet but another tear drop
silently..
Fine I will do it , bas ab yeh aakhose nadiya behna band karo
Maan
fist his hand tightly recalling that moment when he promised her he would
choose her child , He is burning with anger on himself and to that child too
who is now sole reason that he gonna lose his saviour Geet ..
In
this moment he realised how much Geet mean to him . In all these month he
thought he letting her stay with him because she saved his life so he indebted
to her but no unknown to him Geet did manage to make a place in his big house ,
in house lonely life and may be in heart too which he never thought is still
exist .
He
is a big business man , money deal he knows only these thing but all changed
when he meet with that big accident. He was returning from a trip when his car
met with an accident that too middle of night , out of now where..when he thought
he gonna die for sure his saviour came . She took him hospital and stayed till
he get better .
When
he asked her what she wants ..he can give any amount of money but to his
surprise she wanted to accompany him till Delhi. Maan got suspicious asked
again and again if she run away from home..her answer always same
saheb agar ap sach puch karz chukana chahate ho , toh hume aapke sath le
chalo...i promise you I won't bother you after that . Just drop me to Delhi
Maan
can't back out from his promise so he did what she wanted . And from that time
she is with him it's exactly 6 months .. As he thought Geet doesn't know anyone
from Delhi and he didn't want to take risk that's why let her stay with him
.
First he thought it will be for few days then he will told her to go and give
her huge amount so that she can live the way she wants . But that day never
came . Even as time passed he totally forgotten that . He has few servants who
came for few hours and left doing their works. Then all day Geet spend doing
small small things . He is big businessman he doesn't trust anyone easily but
in her matter he couldn't distrust her and let her stay without questioning
.
Days
were passing silently till one fine morning police came when Geet was serving
him breakfast . inspector you here ?
What can I do for you ? He asked totally
confused.. hello Mr khurana ..im
inspector Jagdish from Delhi police actually we are here to take your maid Geet
..
Maan
narrowed his eyes at him then look at Geet who sweating badly hearing inspector
And why you think I would let her to go
with you .. She came and hide behind him relax Geet..don't need to be scared he can't
take any innocent...
sorry to say Mr khurana this girl isn't
innocent .. she is a murderer..
What? he looked at Geet who nodded no as
tears flowing
yeh jhoot hai humne kisika khoon nehi ki
look inspector there must be some misunderstanding..she can't..
we have proof Mr khurana ..we have eye witnessed who saw how she killed her own
boyfriend
Maan fist his hand together..eyes cold he
looked at and dare her to say truth humara koyi boyfriend nehi hai humara ekin
kijiye ..yeh sab jhoot hai
sohn liya apne ..she had no boyfriend
nor she killed ..
Mr khurana she is lying..see this pic he
showed him a pic of Geet and a boy hugging each other , now see this ..he gave
another pic where that boy is lying in pool of blood ..Geet took step back
seeing it ...
Maan
control his anger look this don't proof
that she
as I said Mr khurana we have eye witnessed who saw her killing that boy . She
and that boy run away from their home and stayed at Manali in blue moon hotel
but something went wrong between them and she killed him, then run away from
that place .. if I'm wrong ask her if she stayed there or not
Maan looked at Geet with questioning eyes ji woh ha hum uch hotel mein thhe par
see I told you ..she killed and runaway
now staying here to save herself..par woh bhool gayi police ki hath bohot lambe
hote hai
Maan was in shock..he recalled how she saved her from Manali high way road and
adamant to come with him then always trying to avoid question about herself..he
looked at the picture and then at her who crying scared , pleading him not to
believe all this ..
please Mr Khurana cooperate with us ..she is a criminal , she should be in jail
.. then ordered women constable to get her .Geet run to him
Hume maat le jaane dijiye , yeh log
jhoot bol rahe please trust me ..i didn't kill anyone
who are you Geet ? Maan gave her last
chance but she stayed quiet again take
her inspector he turn around not want to
face the scene but still Geet manage to push those women and hold his
feet
humne kisiko nehi maara ..woh log before
she could complete they start dragging her ...
saheb hamara yekin kijiye ..all is lies ..woh hume bech denge please save me Geet keep shouting till they took her out of
his sight ..
He went numb ..he couldn't believe he again trust a wrong person ..he went to
his private bar to forget another person who betrayed his trust . He was
furiously drinking just when remember her last word ' woh log hume bech denge
'
why Geet said something like this he
seeing Geet for month now ..his mind telling him to forget this matter but his
heart not in peace and telling him she is innocent ..
she is my saviour I should give her a chance , at least I can try to know if
it's true or Geet was saying right she is innocent
he
contacted Delhi commissioner and with his help he finally discovered the truth
, which is not less a death for him ... She wss a prostitute and those are fake
police sent by her brothel owner ...
his
blood boil to his foolishness ..he only prayed his saviour's safety and finally
after two days he get to see her ..but half dead only breathing slow .. they
beaten her black and blue..when he thought may be it will end here but no
another big blow came ..
Abort the child that's the first thing
he utter when Geet open her eyes in hospital ..
nehi this is mine I won't she touch her
belly with all her love yeh bas hamara
hai iss par kisika haq nehi..after ages I got something which can I call mine I
won't let it go ..
becoming
mother in that profession is big no .even if anyone become by mistake they
bound to kill it but Geet couldn't do it ..she wanted to give birth to her
child . But owner is too cruel to hear her wish . She only see money so she
sold her to a rich man from Dubai but Geet can't go when she is pregnant . Geet
knew what is coming , they will force her and eventually kill her baby .. it
years since she is staying this hell many times she thought to ran away but
seeing other girls condition who tried to run she dropped that idea ..but this
time it was matter of her child so she took risk and her luck was with her ,she
manage to run away ..all she did just for her child now how can she kill her
unborn precious baby...
for God sake Geet think wisely ..your body is too fragile to carry this
pregnancy ..if you didn't abort that your life will be in danger . Open your
eyes try to understand the whole point .. but she nodded no as tears dropping
Geet look you just come out from a hell. God giving you a chance to live
..don't waste it for that he indicate to
her belly its not like you won't be able
to be mother again ..live your life first
this child is now my life saheb ..
hearing
her Maan got the message she is determined and won't change her decision for
anything ..from that day he start hating that child ..
what you will do with that ..i mean how will you raise that thing ? what's the
plan ?
he
asked her once in which she pouted cutely stop calling my child as that ..this ... Maan
rolled his eyes at her I will give my
baby to a orphanage
What? Geet you taking risk of giving
birth of that to give it away ?
she
nodded sadly you know na saheb my past
would never let me stay in peace ..and if my baby stay with me sooner or later
have to suffer it would be better if my baby grow up in good place
and you think orphanage is a perfect place he smiled bitterly thinking about his life
..he didn't grow up in orphanage but he did grow up without parents and he
knows how it feels ..
fine good luck to your That for future he called her baby that again making her angry
but Maan as usual went out without hearing her lecture ..
one day she came with a wish in which he laughed at her you want me to take care of that till grew up
and went to orphanage..you must be dreaming right .
why are you saying like this saheb ..hum toh bas yeh kehe rahe hai ..agar humhe
kuch ho jaye toh bas kuch waqt ke liye
no im not keeping that ok ..thats the
biggest poison of your life ..you could have start fresh but that thing put
your life in danger he gave a glare to
her growing belly and went out angrily .. from past 5 months countless time she
had to admit in hospital and every time his hate grew for her child as it's the
only reason she suffering like this ...
OT
door open he run toward it ..before he can ask about Geet s nurse give him or
say forcedly put the new born child to his arm congratulation sir it's a girl ..
he
stood as rock for few minutes then went back to chair still not looking at the
baby girl. Many people come who were passing and congratulate him he only gave
cold glare ...
finally
after sometimes he looked the baby in his arms who sleeping you are so bad . You killed your mother you
know ..from childhood she is suffering but when finally she was getting a
little happiness you took it from her ..i hate Maan stop as baby opened her eyes softly and
looked at him .. I ha he tried again but
couldn't utter those word ..he looked away from baby and trying hard not to
look but after sometime he felt something wet in his pant crap how could you ? Nurse nurse
a sister came running saw the condition but before she can took baby from him
baby start crying I think she is
hungry..let me get the milk ..her mother still in OT , for now bottle milk is
only option
she
went and came back with a small bottle and put it to her mouth .. please hold it she told Maan and went leaving him in
difficult state..
What the ...hey where are you going ? I don't know how to he stop as baby start drinking slowly . After
one hour he was still sitting like that just then realise something soft is
holding his finger ..it was baby he tried to take it out but seeing her
sleeping form drop the idea ...
Geet
opened her eyes and what she saw is not less than a miracle ..her saheb holding
her girl to his chest ,a small tear drop in happiness ..
ahh you still crying ..God see baby when you were not here she was crying now
you are here still your mother is crying ..
Thank you saheb for saving my child Maan
smiled softly a genuine smile after months
and thank you Geet for coming back to us
she
was in critical condition but still she fight back for which Maan can never
thank her enough .He looked the baby in his arms and felt guilty for hating
such gift of God . He hold Geet's hand surprising her then looked at baby ,and
announced proudly Meet Singh Khurana
wow
it's look beautiful on you Geet " i blushed softly then looked at our
reflection on mirror. A perfect couple..main aur my husband , meri Maan, aur
main Maan ki Geet .
"
Angali was so right this necklace will look good at anyone and see it actually
looking perfect ..happy birthday Geet "
I
nodded with a force smile and tried hard not to cry to the fact that my husband
brought his wife's birthday gift, choosing by his girlfriend. I muttered a
small thank you as I know my heart gonna to betray me and it did. As soon as I
closed the washroom door I couldn't stop my tears ..and let them fall without
any restriction .
Me
and Maan now married for 6 months , arranged by my Darji ..from childhood I
agreed with whatever Darji told and this marriage too . When first Maan came to
see me I won't deny I fall for his first look . With time don't know when my
liking turned to love .
Shouldn't
I hate him , hate the person who married me still dare to confess he loved
someone and married just sake of his family happiness , that too first night
itself.. Wedding night is the most beautiful night for any girl but for me it
was the most painful moment. That night I lost myself ..i became my husband's
unloved wife .
I
tried to hate him at every moment , tried to hate him when he assured my sick
Darji that he will take care of me, want to loath him when he pretend to love
me in front of his family but no I couldn't do it . This silly heart has more
will power than my stone determination to hate him .
Because
from the time I came he never misbehave me , Never treated me badly . He is a
perfect husband of any girl's dream but big thing is missing love ..his love
which he can't give anyone other than Angali .
This
big loop in my marriage destroyed my dream of getting happy husband , a happy
little family ..
****
"
happy birthday babhi " Aniee hugged me tightly as soon as I went
downstairs ..then my Mother in law , lastly Dadima .. I literary having tears
seeing so much love . May be I got a unloved partner but I got a gem in name of
family . They treat me like a princess. May be in this marriage I am only
surviving because of their love .
" let's go for shopping ..then movie picnic what say ? " aniee
excitedly suggest which all agree and before I can deny they drag me toward the
door ...
whole family is crazy and they love to spoil me . First Aniee' s choice then
Mom lastly Dadima , I had to buy everything they picked .
"
I'm so hungry ..lets have lunch here " Mom said and we went to food court
..when I was passing a shop notice a familiar face or say faces , Maan and
angali . All happiness from earlier gone just like that . But it's not time to
cry on my fate I have better things to do which is not letting his family to
see him and his girlfriend together . So without any option I dragged them to
the nearby restaurant giving excuse of good food and birthday girl wish .
It
showing 11.45 already still Maan not back yet ..why I'm surprised I should have
expected right . Why would he come early for my birthday ? who am I? A girl
whom he forced to marry ? I knew he won't come ..still my silly heart hoped for
inevitable. There I'm waiting for him , there he must be with Angali. What must
be they doing ? Talking ..hugging, laughing or kissin..."
"
Geet didi utto didi uttho na .. " i jerked away from bed looked at my
surroundings scared ..
"
uffo bhoot dekhliya kya app ne . You are too much di , you sleep like dead
..pata nehi jiju kaise utha tha hai aap ko " Raji muttered in irritation
" now get ready first Jiju is here to take you "
saying
she left but I still look at the door , thinking about the dream . I took a
long breath to clam my ragging heart then went to freshen up .
I
looked at my husband who seems very tired after his office work but still give
me a dazzling smile as soon as he spot me . I said good bye to my parents then
went to sit on his motor bike .
I
hold his waist tightly hugging him from back as he speed up . I inhale on his
neck to smell him , in which he smiled and looked at me through mirror . I
shrugged my should not caring about his look . Now i have this habit of
inhaling his scent every time I get close to him . He call me mad but I don't
care I'm obsessed to his smell . He even tease me with it ..and always I replied
saying it's not him but I like his perfume, he would give to naughty look or a
deep long kiss . I blushed at this thought and noticed on mirror he is blushing
a bit too ..may be he thinking same .
We
stop in traffic . I so hate it because we gonna late and I know my mother in
law won't like it or may be more taunt in my way . I frowned thinking of my
upcoming scold then looked at the nearby boutique. I looked keenly then noticed
that purple Saree which i saw last time is gone . I looked away trying to
suppress the hurt just then heard Maan's quiet guilty voice
"
I'm sorry Geet I know I promised you that I would buy that saree for you but I
couldn't keep it ..sorr "
"
sssh it's nothing big ok ..it just a saree.."
"
I promise in Diwali I will get that saree for you .."
"
I don't need " but before I say more he start his bike again and I went
silent . Yes I admit I was sad that Maan couldn't buy me that saree but I don't
blame him . He is only an honest government officer not corrupted . He has
limited salary . With this he managed his family well but this month suddenly
father got heart attack and had to admit hospital then his operation . In all
this his saving gone , then was his sister's admission in engineering college
again it took a huge sum . Only he knows how he managing but still in this
money crisis he having smile on his face and trying to cope up with situation.
I'm not that selfish to demand such luxury like that beautiful costly saree.
But I know my Maan he promised me something and he gonna get it for me . My
heart get warmed thinking he his love for me .
As
soon as I entered I face my angry mother in law who giving disapproving look .
Maan had to buy medicine for papa so he went out again . With slow step I went
to kitchen..
" 1 , 2 , 3 " I start counting and just I hit 3 there comes my Mil' s
angry taunt .
"
bas mein hi mili sabko , saare khana bhi banao phir ghar ka saff bhi karo..bina
paisoka nakur rakha hua hai . Bete ka shaadi karwaya socha chalo ab thora
shanti milegi ..par nehi itni jaldi koyi mujhe shanti kyun dega..."
just
like this Ma was going on and on and I keep chopping vegetables. This not new
for me, every time I went to mayeka ma would start her taunting session . As
first I used to felt bad but now I don't care because I know she not meaning
any of it . She may be angry now but still she loves me and I got the proof at
evening as she came with a bowl of my favourite rasmalai .
"
yeh pakar tere liye rakha ..teen din ho gaya agar ek aur din hota na bilkul
kharab ho jaata.."
saying
she pulled me toward her leg and start giving me oil massage . " ah balo
ki kya halat ki tune "
i
smiled at her tone ..i looked at the rasmalai in my hand and offered to Ma
" rehnedo itna pyar khafi hai "
she
pushed my hand as start put some oil in my hair .. at first I was so confused
with Ma's behaviour but now I understand her . It say that mother in law can't
became Ma but in my POV..Mother in law can only become your Ma when you try to
become her daughter . Yes she scold me many times but isn't my mother did the
same before marriage that too countless time . I didn't took those by heart
then why now I would take Ma's ( MIL) word in negative way . If she loves me
she has right to scold me too , it's only motherly thing . If she doesn't love
me she wouldn't save rasmalai because I know how much Aniee love these stuff and
hiding sweets from her means a big war . I was about to go to sleep by Ma's
magical massage but she slap light on my shoulder
"
yeh koyi waqt hai sone ja ... yeh ladki pata nehi kab sudregi " saying she
left taking the bowl from her hand and I jumped on my bed continuing my sweet
sleep .
********
"
what are you doing? " I asked Maan as he scrolled down my timeline
searching something ..i went closely to see the matter and my eyes gone big
" Maan yeh ap kya kar rahe ho .. I really don't this
sar..."
I
couldn't even complete as he click the send button writing home address "
now done " he smiled keeping my phone aside .
"
what done ? How could you just ?
"
"
I promised you ..so this Diwali you getting that saree bas "
" par Maan yeh online bagera ..they sell things costly then any shop ..how
could you just ordered that ? "
" because you liked it "
can
I really argue with him when he looking at me with so much love .
"
it's not funny yeh itna mehenga .."
" uffo Geet don't think these silly things "
" silly ha ... Diwali is coming , toh bohot sari extra karcha , then gifts
for relatives , ghar ka decoration, sweets bagera .. how you will manage all
these ? ..ma papa ani..."
" you think too much now come here " he tried to pull me to his chest
but in shoved him away
"
I don't need you ..and I'm not wearing that saree ok .." He again pulled
me to his chest ..lying back put me on his chest
"
fine don't wear it for yourself..wear it for me ..aur waise bhi I think it will
be perfect ..you in purple saree and me in purple Punjabi kurta..we will make
hot pair ..."
"
purple kurta ? " I ignored his last comment as asked confused ... "
last year too you brought purple Kurta this year too you gonna buy " I
stop in mid as realisation hit me ..he not gonna buy anything for Diwali..may
sensing me quiet he tried to make the air light
"
you know I think that Kurta will be perfect..aur waise bhi woh maine last
Diwali ke baad kabhi parha hi nehi ..khamakha paisa kharach karke kya
faida.."
I
hugged him tightly as a tear fall ..he won't buy anything because of my costly
saree and I know it . I am angry on him for that but still I love him more . My
husband not some billionaire or anything of that but for for he is one in
million and only mine ..his love is only for me .
He
is the person whom I can trust blindly , whom I can share anything without any
fear of rejection . He is my best friend my soulmate..he is better than any man
of this world..
"
I don't like you at all " Maan chuckled softly
" I love you too " he kissed my hair hugging me once again and went
to sleep .
I
looked at his sleeping face and thought about the dream ..being a unwanted ,
unloved wife can be mouth watering topic to read in novel or serial but in real
it not so easy ..its same as slow death and im happy i didn't get those angry
young man type husband but a partner who loves me more than himself .
"
I now understand why people say it's not necessary to all dreams come true
..some good to me dream only not reality...
THE END
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