Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani

Abhiya ff: PAINFUL LOVE * chapter-7 updated* 16/10 - Page 7

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Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by: Supervampire

Amazing update

very curious to know about their past
lets  see what happened in past

Thanks for reading dear!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
When was it posted. I didn't know about this.but now m reading
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Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by: cuteariya

oh god really painful update 😭
abhay killed himself coz pia didn't trust him🥺
all that happened coz of that bitch panchi 😡
nisha did the right thing she showed that bitch panchi & her mom truth 👏
I feel bad for pia but somewhere she is also responsible for what happened
now pia's mom call jai & pia also start smiling
for sure now pia's mom will convince her to marry jai which I don't want to happen 😒
but I don't know if im right or not feeling that nisha took abhay with her far from everyone so they wont hurt him 😕
hope im right & abhiya will meet
continue plz

ya dear I know its painful😊
Yup she is a bitch😡
Abhiya will meet or not...thats suspense 😉
Thanks for reading... I really loved reading ua comment❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by: pirl18

When was it posted. I didn't know about this.but now m reading

Thanks for reading😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
       CHAPTER-5

Next day I took a bus for Dehradun ..yes Dehradun which is my destination right now ...coz those monsters The Raichands were living there..I'm not going to leave them what they think of themselves they can control any thing with there money.

I came out of trace when I heard someone whispering near my ears

'Why u seems so lost Senorita'

I turn towards the voice n found a handsome guy staring at me
it was the most handsome face I had ever seen with most attractive hypnotic blue eyes..eyes in which I badly wanted to drown...

But that smirk on his lips pull me back to reality.

I mentally smacked myself for shamelessly drooling on a stranger.

Again he spoke 'Hey! why u stopped I never mind girls drooling on me'

Shockingly I looked at him n again that smirk O GOD! I just wanted to snatch it.


I glared at him, but in return he gave me a most beautiful dimple wali smile

Boy: y u so angry Senorita, I was just telling the truth na.

Piya: SHUT UP!!

Boy: y r u shouting.. just look at your face its so scary.

he said while widening his eyes. I rolled my eyes.

Boy: waise Senorita tum kise milne ja rahi ho Dehradun.

Demons I answered mentally but in reality I tried to ignore him.

Boy: Hey Senorita... listen na... Senorita.

he was so irritating, n specially that name.. not able to control my anger I shouted at him.

Piya : will u stop calling me that.

Boy: calling u what..

he said making a innocent face.

Piya: that name ..

Boy : which name I'm not getting u..

he said still making a innocent face.

now I was fuming in anger n so badly wanted to bang his head ...

Piya: that Senorita... its not my name.

I snapped at him.

Boy: then what's u name.

He asked me very sweetly. My all anger vanished n I smiled

Piya: Very smart ...

Boy: Bachpan se ...he said proudly.

Boy: waise u know who is Senorita...

He again tried to start a conversation but I cut him off.

Piya: I DON'T WANT TO KNOW.

But he totally ignored me n started blabbering.

Boy: U know she was my first girlfriend my first love...she was damn hot u know...

he continued his story n here I'm fuming in anger no burning actually.. what kind of person is he so irritating
gosh! I wanted to bang my head on something hard but wait y my head I should bang his head na..

After sometime I started to feeling sleepy n in no time I doze off.

Abhay's POV (its from Abhay's dairy)

I'm so happy today after whole 1 year m going back to my family in Dehradun.

So I took bus coz traveling in bus is fun..

I climbed on bus n found my seat near a pretty girl but she seems lost n sad..
don't know y but I badly wanted to make her smile ..

So I started irritating her n within no time she became red in anger.. Jungli Billi..



But I kept blabbering n at last she smiled God her smile makes her pretty face more prettier..

After sometime she slept n my jungli billi looked so innocent while sleeping.

I smiled n close my eyes.

Piya's POV 

when I wake up I found myself on his shoulder while he was sleeping in a uncomfortable way because of me 
I looked at him he was looking so innocent while sleeping..


I came back to reality when the bus stopped with a jerk.. I immediately straightened myself 

After sometime driver came n informed us that due to some problem bus in not starting n it will take some time in repairing it so we can have some food from near by dhabba.

I looked at him he was still sleeping like a kumbhakaran...

Something strike in my mind, I smile mischievously

Bahut baak baak kar raha tha ab dekhati hu 

n I pinched him hard..

He immediately started screaming in pain gaining everyone's attention n making me embarrass

Boy : Aaahhh...WHAT IS THIS SENORITA..

Piya: u don't understand ...okay let me show u again.
I said trying hard not to laugh then
I raised my hand towards him n he immediately flinched n shouted

Boy: Nooo...

n while trying to move away he losses his balance n fell down the seat.
n I bust out laughing..

He stand on his feet n started rubbing his...well its better not to talk about that.

He glared at me n said

Boy: I will take the revenge Senorita...

By saying this he left the bus but the word revenge started ringing in my head n I scold my that I'm not here to enjoy my life but to give justice to my friend...

I was looking at the deep forest n wanted to enjoy the nature..

I started walking inside the forest as the driver said that it will take two hours in repairing so I had lots of time in my hand to enjoy the nature's beauty...

Abhay's POV 

After getting humiliated I came out of the bus n headed towards the dhaba .

God this girl I wasted my energy to bring a smile on her face n she first pinched me and then threw me out of the seat ...

But I'll take my revenge... you just wait n watch Senorita n I smirk ...but wait where is she isn't she going to take her lunch.

I went back n searched of her but she was not there...

suddenly I saw her walking towards the forest.

God she is mad or what ...why she is going inside this deep forest and that too alone...

I tried to call her but she didn't listen...so having no choice I too followed her...

Piya's POV 

Hey! Senorita Stoppp...

I Heard O God y can't he leave m alone .

I turn back n found him running towards me .

He was panting badly 

He must be running behind me but why ...for irritating u my subconscious mind answered n i rolled my eyes.

Piya: What r u doing here ..why can't u leave me alone ... why are u irritating me ...don't have anything else to do..

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Posted: 6 years ago
wow bus romantic fight is nice... what will be piya reaction knowing his family...

UPDATE soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
Wow nice
Thnx for the pm dear
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Posted: 6 years ago
Loll abhiya first meeting was really interesting 
awe abhay irritated pia so much calling her senorita
For a moment pia also smile but when reality hit she controlled herself 
Loll abhay tales so much but seeing pia couldn't stop himself 
Continue plz
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Posted: 6 years ago
Abhiya were cute! Edited by hriti713 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by: janumkrk

wow bus romantic fight is nice... what will be piya reaction knowing his family...

UPDATE soon

thanks for reading dear...I'll try to update soon..