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Kunthala and Devasena (Chapter 2)

Unspoken yet spoken for its pure beauty, the kingdom of Kunthala was the most beautiful. It had a golden infrastructure and a blue-sky landscape to accolade the grandness of the dynasty. It was known for its pure golden scenery, it's beautiful purity, there were no words to describe such a palace.

Amarendra and Mahendra Bahubali inspected this gorgeous long province which belonged to King Kunthala and his gorgeous sister Devasena. Little was known about such a goddess in personal forms, but she was a well-known, high class princess of the dynasty. She was one of a pure and golden heart.

As they reached the palace, they talked to the King, and then it was time for the other thing that they had visited Kunthala for. They were supposed to attend the prayers for the late king of Kunthala.

She gathered the personages of her village to the meeting chamber in which she held a prayer session. This was the day of her father's death anniversary. King of Kunthala and Princess Devasena had cautiously held such a prayer. The kingdom would celebrate yet mourn the death of a powerful king.

Amarendra and Mahendra were escorted towards the meeting chambers, as the king proceeded in his chariot. Rajkumari Avanthik ane Rajkumari Devasena proceeded in their respected chariots as well.

A beautiful golden, pure chariot approached as the people of the village, including Amarendra and Mahendra. They were deeply unaware of who blindly sat behind the lace curtain of the chariot. Her body was slim and long. Her tresses were gorgeously lengthily exposed through the creamy lace.

Amarendra finally got see her clearly. He was awestruck.

A powerful chant released the lips of each of the villagers as the curtain revealed it's inside. What was inside? A Pure mystery to the very minds of mankind, for she was a goddess of pure beauty and knowledge.

This day was to be remembered proudly, for the former king of the Kunthala Dynasty had truly touched the village with such a beauty, but he had also graced this earth with another physique, Devasena.

A silver knife fitted at her hip, bladed fingers, powerful, mystical fists. Some say she was purely "cutting edge" while others called her "arrogant, angry" but she was truly a mystery.

Amarendra watched the lacey curtains covering the queen so heedfully for an inner conscious which hauled him towards the front of the villagers, whose fingers pranced around him when he became visible.

The lace curtains revealed themselves, and a fair goddess shadowed the villagers with her beautiful essence, aroma and overlook. Amarendra started walking closer and closer, as his trance on her grew larger and larger.

She released her blade from her satchel and it found its mark on Amarendra's neck.

"Who are you," the village was deafened into utter silence as everyone waited in anticipation of Queen Devasena's actions.

Amarendra's throat was coarse underneath the sharp blade perched against his neck. Blood slowly began to draw from the spot.

He clenched the tip of the sword, and in a reverse action turned it towards her.

The crowd started yelling and started to sprint toward Amarendra. He was nowhere near calm right now, but his heart was rushing at the speed an arrow would travel 100 ft. He felt an acute type of affection for her. He thought that he was truly in love. He was brought back to his senses by five guards all pointing swords at him.

"How dare you try to hurt our Rajkumari?" They all yelled in unison.

"Who certainly said that I was trying to express aggression towards her, as she was the first one to point the sword at me." The soldiers went to silence after they heard this.

"Rajkumari is that true?"

"Yes, it certainly is, because I believe he is a traitor. Until he reveals his real identity, keep him under authorities."

"Your wish is our command." The soldiers tie his hands to his back, and walk back to the prison. He is thrown into a prison cell, and kept there until it was his turn for trial.

Amarendra thought, "The beauty I saw was Rajkumari Devasena. She is mesmerizing. For me to get to her. I will have to prove myself innocent in the trial tomorrow." He sighed

He gazed out at the stares outside the window, and drifted off to sleep.


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Loved the way u describe amarendra - mahendra 
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Ahaan ! So our King is smitten by our Queen and this time he decides to become a prisoner for his love 😉 I am pretty sure Rajkumari must be restless thinking about the man.😳 Where is Mahe ??
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Originally posted by: aaradhaya1688

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Originally posted by: bahubalifan

Ahaan ! So our King is smitten by our Queen and this time he decides to become a prisoner for his love 😉 I am pretty sure Rajkumari must be restless thinking about the man.😳 Where is Mahe ??


OH yes. Totally smitten by his queen! And yup this time it is prisoner! 
Hopefully she is. 
Mahe well you will know very soon!
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The Trial (Chapter 3)

It was around 8 am when somebody splashed water on Amarendra's face. After feeling something ice cold on his face, he thought that he was in the snowy mountains beyond the boundaries of Mahishmathi. He slowly fluttered his eyes open, and he had a irritated frown on his face. 

"Who is it? Can't you see I was asleep?" Amarendra said now annoyed.

"You are no king to ask us that. Wake up you are scheduled for trial in thirty minutes. You better be ready in about 15 minutes. Your brother or whatever will speak in your defense. We will send him in after 10 minutes." Yelled the jailer showing him the dagger that hung around his waist. 

"Yes, sir I am very sorry for my behavior right now. I will make sure it doesn't happen again. Thank you so much. I will be ready." Amar said his voice low.

After 10 minutes of anticipation, Mahendra walks in to find Amarendra staring at the sky outside smiling to himself. "So, my lovely brother is in love?" Mahendra asked in a mischievous voice. Amarendra was brought back to the real world. "Yes, indeed my dear brother. How do you catch all these things such quick?" Amarendra asked astonished. "You know I am a mind-reader. It's magic." He moved his hands. Amarendra rolled his eyes and smirked. 

"Where were you when she tried to almost kill me?" He walked towards him with his hands crossed on his chest. His face in a playful smirk. 

Mahendra fumbled with his reply," I was looking I mean searching for . Rajkumari Avanthika. She didn't arrive on time." 

Amarendra smirked," Really? Here my brother is in love, and is teasing me." 

Mahendra's eyes were fixed on the floor, and his ears a light hue of red," Okay let us change the topic, and focus on The Trial now." Amarendra could just nod, and shake his head laughing. 

Amarendra was still smiling, and Mahendra still blushing, "Mahendra, so how do I prove myself innocent?"

 Mahendra chuckled," My lovely brother, did you already forget that the king of Kunthala had invited us for a meeting here. I have conversed with the king, and he says that as long as we have the invitation as proof we are good." Amarendra's smile widens," I am so proud of my brother, he has saved my life today. I owe you."

Mahendra smiles back," Oh yes! You indeed owe me the cutest, and most fierce Vadina in the world. She is one in a trillion."

Amarendra blushed," I promise that you will have Devasena as your Vadina. I give you my word." Mahendra teases him," So, already dreaming about marriage huh?" Amarendra punched him lightly," No, not at all. First, I need amma's permission. What will she think if I marry somebody from nowhere and go to her. She will feel hurt."

"Oh, My mother devoted brother. You love her. First, go confess it to her, and then we can inform amma." Mahendra said. Amarendra shook his head in disagreement," I love her, but that doesn't necessarily mean that she loves me. I will only take a step forward if I get a green signal from amma." 

Mahendra sighed," Okay do what you have to do. But I only want her as my Vadina, and remember you have given me your word. Better stick to it." He said as he patted Amarendra's shoulder

As he places his fist on his chest, and bows Amarendra says," My word will not be broken. I promise."

Just then the jailer enters to fetch Amarendra and Mahendra to the court. They both enter the court, and their way of walking and actions reveal a lot about their personalities and origin. Nobody utters a single word. Until, the silence is broken by the king.

"What crime has been committed by this traitor?" he tried to sound as respectful as he can, since he knew he was the prince of Mahishmathi.

"Your highness, this man is accused of carrying aggression towards Rajkumari Devasena." The king sighed," May Rajkumari Devasena be presented in front of me." Devasena enters with pride, and attitude in her eyes. Amarendra keeps staring at her with utmost affection and love. He was brought back when the king said, "Rajkumari Devasena please narrate what occurred yesterday."

"Your highness yesterday since it was the death anniversary of the former king. We had invited all the villagers to the meeting chambers. This man was there too. When I arrived, he was surrounded by people. I had a feeling that he was a traitor, and I raised my sword to him. I asked him to reveal his identity. Instead of revealing his identity, he clenched the sword's tip, and turned it towards me. I was in deathly danger of being killed." She said her voice fierce, and bold. 

"I order you to reveal your identity." The king ordered Amarendra.

"Yes, your highness I am Amarendra Bahubali of Mahishmathi. The prince of Mahishmathi, and this is my brother Mahendra Bahubali. We both were invited for the death anniversary of the king. We have proof too." Amarendra said with his head high. The king nodded in agreement, and everyone in the court was shocked their faces turned into apologetic faces. 

The king said," You may hand us the proof." Amarendra handed over the scroll, and surely it was an invitation from the king to visit them for the king's death anniversary, and an important meeting regarding the boundaries.

"Prince Amarendra Bahubali, I heartily apologize for my sister's mistake. She thought of you as a traitor. Rajkumari Devasena would you like to say something?"

Devasena started to kneel on her knees. Before she could kneel, she felt strong hands on her shoulders pull her up into a standing position again. It was Amarendra. She looked into his eyes, they were filled with affection, and only affection. Unlike she thought they would be filled with rage and anger. She was awestruck by the intensity of his eyes. They made her feel something different, perhaps an unexplored feeling.

"Rajkumari Devasena, you are not supposed to kneel down to no one. I understand sometimes our minds can play tricks on us. You need not apologize." The court was awestruck by these words of his. How can a prince from such a huge kingdom be so down to Earth? Only time can reveal the answers to this question.

"Prince Amarendra Bahubali and Prince Mahendra Bahubali Kunthala kingdom apologizes again for all the inconveniences you have experienced till this moment, but from this moment we will make sure that you are given the best services in the palace. Please move all their luggage into the guest suite of the palace." The king ordered.

Amarendra said," I am sorry, but can we please have the meeting in an hour. It is that we are getting late in reaching our kingdom for an important ritual. We will have to leave this afternoon." The king agreed," That is indeed not an issue, after all we have put you through, since you have been here. We can surely have the meeting in the meeting chamber in about 30 minutes. The court is dismissed." Everybody bowed to the king and Rajkumari as they exited the court.

"Brother, why did you lie about a certain ritual in Mahishmathi?" Mahendra asked with a curious smile on his face. Amarendra smirked," You remember my word about your Vadina being Rajkumari Devasena right?" Mahendra chuckled," Oh yes. That is why now I understand. Okay then brother."

Mahendra had nothing to do, but roam around for the next 30 minutes. He decided to go look for her. For Avanthika, he was mesmerized by her warrior skills. He started looking for her. Finally, he found her in the courtyard at the pond throwing pebbles in it. He went and sat beside her. She was astonished by his sudden actions.

"I am sorry, but who are you?" she asked him with a confused look on her face, and she tried her best to hold back her chuckled. She knew it was the same person who she hit with her arrow. 

 "I am Mahendra Bahubali, prince of Mahishmathi." He declared.

 She bowed her down. "No, no what are you doing? A kshatriya never bows one's head down to anybody." Mahendra lifted her head up. 

Her lips curve into a slight smile which does not go unnoticed by Mahendra he chuckles. they both converse with each other throwing pebbles into the pond.

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